SS: Dear Diary... Part 14 Upd 11/30 Pg 66

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: t_areeb
maan is caring in his own way

i like the way you wrote their emotions...he is accepting the change in breakfast, but does not want it to be for some thing in return

Well, I was expecting folks to hate Maan for this part. It's not surprising that you guys always try to find reasons to justify his behavior 😆

Thanks for reading :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

awesome updt
just luvd it
omg dat gurvinder is such a cheap guy
awww maan so protective of geet & her injuries
luving d lil realizations abt maan of geet
cont soon!

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

All those who stalked the thread asking me to update...where are your comments?

Good or bad, two words is always better than none. It seems to me you guys are forcing me to act on my thoughts to start PMing the updates only to those who comment. Perhaps I should just act on it. 😃
Let me try something today first...I'm going to make it a members only post.

Hasini

Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: 6thElement
All those who stalked the thread asking me to update...where are your comments?

Good or bad, two words is always better than none. It seems to me you guys are forcing me to act on my thoughts to start PMing the updates only to those who comment. Perhaps I should just act on it. 😃
Let me try something today first...I'm going to make it a members only post.

Hasini

Alright, coming out with hands up.

Acc to you we should have not liked Maan in this part? I like him more. Every action shrieks his need for validation in her life. He wants to help Channi but does not want her to feel like she should do somethings for him to get that help from him. Almost mentally screaming, "Love me for me, not what I can do for you". So Mr. Attorney with all the checks and cross checks that you do on every action. reading and re-reading her diary and evaluating every action, here is some advice, let go. Stop overthinking life. Head the way you want to go and life will follow.

I understand Geet's distancing herself, she already put her feelings out there in her diary and he knows, so it is time for him to acknowledge what he wants to her.

Oh, about justifying Maan's behavior, it is pretty standard husband stuff, checking her back for thorns, applying medicine and examining her etc, he he; someone tell my husband this, he he he.

Hasini, I hate not having words like you to express! AAAh. So excuse the stupidity of the comments sometimes. Needless to say, I love these two already.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#255

I forgot to mention, I like the concept for Paheli.

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: Escapist
There are moments when even the silliest things bring tears to your eyes and you're left to wonder why when I was so hurt that tears didn't sting my eyes...

And sometimes the pain is so excruciatingly painful that it leaves you numb...emotional pain is far more painful and distraught that physical pain seems nothing in front of it! She cried out of emotions today and not due to the sharp knife that caused the bleeding...well it could have been the other way round too that she just couldn't cry even though its paining...emotions seriously create a havoc in an individuals life!

Dunno why the only word somehow ringing in my mind after reading this update is emotion and pain!

Cheers,
Fatima

Your words about emotional pain...how very true.
Thank for stopping by Fatima.

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: bhakbhartifan
Great update...

i liked the new idea too.. I am so excited about the new one.. 😛

Thank you :) will do.

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun
Awww... if only they talked more. But then what would the diary do 😛

I know...Thanks much :)

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mystique_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: 6thElement

Ah! Thanks...

No. That is the initial understanding that no woman is to touch him. But Maan figures out the flaw in it later.

Well if its really a curse or not, that's what the Paheli is...isn't it? 😆

Ofcourse, thats the Paheli and who else than Maan should be want to be the one to find it out ? 😆

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mystique_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: ivre
Read the whole thing in one go
Pretty descriptive writing... good language and choice of words especially, something that is rare on this forum :)
Good work

Totally agree 😊 All of this is so tough to find on IF!

That and a sense of enigma in your characters makes it all the more pleasurable to read your works, H 😊