MG-FF-Unforgettable Memories- Thrd 2 link pg 148 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: jasan22

Wow awesome
I'm glad u finally started ur FF
Swinging fir the next part



i am also happy that i did started
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: spvd

till part 2
wow very nice interesting concept...
who is Khushi's mom and where is she?
who was the guy harassing Geet?
cont soon...

PS - can u plz increase the font size...




happy that u like the concept
sorry forget to mentions Khushi Mother in character sketch but i have included who is Khushi mother you can go in the character sketch and read it
here is the link
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1925873
and for the guy who is harassing Geet you have to wait a little to find out about it

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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: seemamary

Aamzing but I' am little confused that is geet khushi' s daughter or not . continue soon.




sorry for the confusion actually its my mistake i didn't include who is Khushi mother in the character sketch
and she is not geet daughter she is sameera daughter
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
First of all i would like to thanks all these people who took their time and read my ff and liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Hey guys as i read the comment i came across that i forgot to mention who was Khushi Mother, well Khushi mother is not geet its Sameera her part is not gonna be coming soon and for the guys who Geet is scared of will not be mention now just imagine him as a psycho person who is madly in love with Geet and want to make his.
thanks for all those comment and I would to say that the beginning parts will be showing that how geet is depressed and will be sad, so just bare with it
anyway here is the 3rd part


-Unforgettable Memories-

Part 3

"khushi aap aur kitni deet yeha bed pe leti rahogi, deakho Dada ne aap ke liye ek surprise ready ki hai" said Nt

Khushi- Choti Ma mujhe nahi ana, aap jao yeha se"

and throws a stuffy animal at her, then she gets up and pushes NT out of her room and closes the door, she comes back to her bed and take the pic out under her pillow and kisses it "Khushi loves you Mama" looking at the pic she remember her last night dream she quickly puts the pic in her drawer, which no body was allowed to touch it not even Maan and runs to prayer room. She sits on her knees folds her hand and says " Baba Ji you know everything na tu you should also know where my Mama is, God ji jab tak meri Mama ko mere paas nahi a jati aap plz unke saath rahna unhe kabhi hurt mat karna aur na unhe mere paas jaldi beajh do main unhe bauth miss karti aur mujhe pata hai ki kal unhe hurt lagi thi, hai na" She was so lost she didn't even notices Maan coming who stopped at the door step and watched her praying to Baba Ji, she just looked like and angel, Maan clears his throat getting her attention, hearing this Khushi opens her eyes and turn around to see Maan looking at her she quickly turns back and folds her hand again and says "oppss Baba Ji main tu Papa ke liye kuch manga hi nahi"

Maan- Koi baat nahi aab mang lo" Khushi gives him a glare and says "Baba Ji aap mere papa ko kaho ki Khushi is still angry with him, aur unse kaho ki jab koi promise karte hai tu use toda nahi karte"( and also tell him that when you make promise to someone you should never break it) saying this she walked away from there followed by Maan and before Khushi could run back to her room Maan picked her up and took her to his room gave her shower and got her ready with the help of, of course KHUSHI, then he brought her in the garden where he sat up a breakfast table and has all her favorite breakfast.

Scene moves to Geet & Pinky

"Geet here are the newspapers" while handing the papers to geet she says "Brij Veer ji ne jis type ko job ke bare main bola tha wo sab main main ne mark kar di hai, tu ja kar interview de de"

Geet- Theek hai main ye sab deakh lungi tu apne job pe ja warna late ho jaegi

Pinky- theek hai,

After Pinky left Geet also goes out searching for job

Back to KM

"I am still angry" Khushi said as she saw Maan sitting their resting his chin on his palm

Maan- Janta hoon

Khushi- then why are you sitting like this?

Maan- soach raha hoon ki apni princess ko manaon kaise

Khushi- KSK itni jaldi nahi mane gi aur aise tu bulkul bhi nahi

Maan lifts her from his lap and puts her on the table "tu phir kaise mane gi"

Khushi- you have to give me a special treat

Maan- Special treat, and what that'll be

Khushi- Ek min, she pick Maan cell that was on the table and tells him to call in the office to and Adi and Maan Just follows her instruction

Adi- heelllo sirrr

Khushi- Adi uncle main Khushi bol rahi

Adi- Khushi

Khushi- Adi uncle I want you to cancel all Dada meetings today" and cuts the call before Maan could have said no to Adi

Khushi- Dada you will have to spend you whole day with me if you want me to break the "kati", Maan was helpless as he had no other way to make up for his promise so he agrees for it, where Khushi had already planed what she wanted to do and where she wanted to go,. first she did was shopping for herself then she went to watch animations movie and by the time movie finished Khushi was hungry so they decided to go McDonalds, on the other hand Geet had given 5 interview and was on her way to the 6th interview

"Miss Handa, I See you have done a very good job in your college but without your certificate of your degree I can't give you the job, I am sorry"

Geet- its ok sir, I understand, thank you for taking ur time for me" saying this she leaves from there, this was the answer she got from other interviewer that they are impressed with her college study but without degree certificate they can't give her the job, as she came out of the office her cell rang

Geet- Hello

Pinky- Geet where are you, did you got any job

Geet- Abhi tak tu nahi milii still have 3 more interview hopefully koi na koi job de hi dega

Pinky- acha sun have you eaten your lunch or not

Geet- Abhi tak tu nahi, anyway interview de ne se pahle I will have something to eat, you don't worry ok bye

Pinky- Bye

The McDonald was nearby so Geet decided to go there have something to eat, she order herself sandwich and plain water, after taking the food she was making her way to a table but before she could have seated in her seat she bumps with a kid and drops the water on the kid, Geet quickly puts her tray by the nearby table and starts to wipe her dress and face, "I am sorry beta, meri wajha se aap ki dress kharab ho gai"said Geet as she continue to wipe her dress, the little girl just stood there staring at Geet and as Geet looked up at her she just places a kiss on her both cheeks and says "koi baat nahi Dada will get me a new one" Geet smiled at her and says "aap ka naam kya hai"

"Uff aap ko mera naam nahi pata" Geet makes a baby face and nods for "No"

"acha koi baat nahi I will tell you my name, Mera naam hai KSK" Geet repeats "KSK"

Khushi- Haan Khushi Singh Khurana

Geet- Buth pyara naam hai bulkul aap ki tarha, acha chalo hum aap ko aap ke Dada ke paas chor dete hai

They both made their way to Maan but as they were few step away Khushi leaves Geet hands and runs to Maan, Geet seeing her with his Dada Geet decided

Geet decided to leave from there as she was getting late for her interview, so she left without biding Khushi, on the other hand Khushi was looking for Geet but she couldn't find, she got little upset but she carried on with Maan as she knew she don't get the chance of being with Maan like this often. On the other hand Geet had finally got a job in XYZ Company as the secretary.
at dinner time Geet told Rajinder uncle and pinky about her job and they both were happy, then she gets a call from HP
Pinky- Geet Birj Veer ji Ka call hai
Brij and Geet Convo
Geet- Veer ji main theek hoon aap ko padishan hone ki zarorat nahi hai (I am fine you don't worry about me)
Brij- Par Geet you could have worked in our company too na tu phir utni dor aur woh bhi secretary ki
Geet- Veer ji main janti hoon par agar main waha rahi tu main shayad kabhi bhi us hadse se bahar nahi nikal paungi aur waha rahungi tu har pal marti rahungi, aur aap hi ne kaha tha ki zandagi hamare liye nahi rukti, hamein zindagi ke saath chalna chiye tu phir main wohi kar rahi hoon zindagi ke saath chalne ki kosish. (Veer ji i know I would have, but Veer ji by staying there I will never be able to make myself come out of that accident and you're the one who told me life doesn't stops for it goes on, on and we should walk with it and that's what I am trying to do)
Brij- theek hai tujhe jaha rah na hai rah jaise job karni hai kar all i want it you to be happy, acha ye sab chod aur ye bata ki tu apni medicine time par le tu rahi hai na
Geet- Ji veer ji
Brij- ok we'll talk tomorrow

Geet has been working in XYZ company now for more than 3 weeks and is also working on a project as the clients really liked her ideas and design
-Geet plz come to my cabin with Sinha file
Geet- yes sir, Geet knocks the door
-come in
Geet- sir ye rahi file,
-Geet kitni bar kaha hai don't call me sir, only "Raj"
Geet- Mr. Raj ye office time hai aur abhi aap mere boss hai tu sir hi kahna padega
Raj- Geet we are friends now, how many times do I need to remind you that
Geet- Sir how many times do "I" have to remind you that in office time i am not calling you by your name "SIR" she stretches on the word "sir" Raj gives her angry looks, Geet looked at him and said "If you had called me for this then I think I should leave as MY BOSS has given me 2 projects to handle at once"
Raj- Nahi mujhe tumhe dictation deni hai
Geet- tu phir theek hai, and she sit and raj gives her dictations


Precap: "Geet I am coming, Aab tumhe mujh se koi nahi bacha sakta hai Geet"


Previous:Part 2 Next Part 4


Here is part 3 Enjoy

Sorry for the Mistakes

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Mariam


Edited by Mariam94 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Lovely update dear...
Will wait for the next one...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
love your FF mariam
just read it
khushi is cho cutee
who is the mad lover of geet? lol
cant wait to know
and cant wait to see how maaneet meet
continue soon
added u in buddy list
do pm me
thank youu
your doing greatt

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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Hey Mariam love ur FF
Waiting for the next part
Countain soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Thanks for the pm..
Lovely update...
Khushi is so sweet...


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