MG-FF-Unforgettable Memories- Thrd 2 link pg 148 - Page 3

awesome, brilliant update
loved it
awesome Character sketch
loved it
continue soon

till part 2
wow very nice interesting concept...
who is Khushi's mom and where is she?
who was the guy harassing Geet?
cont soon...

PS - can u plz increase the font size...

Aamzing but I' am little confused that is geet khushi' s daughter or not . continue soon.

awesome update do continue soon

wow

aewsome part...

fABULOUS START DEAR...gEET HAS A TRAUMATIC PAST...HMMM...WELL GREAT START AND UPDATE SOON

Originally posted by: Dilsay

The concept looks great...

part 2 looks flash bc

Geet's connection with Khushi is classy ..

will wait for more updates ...

continue soon

glad that you liked the concept
will i am trying to make it like that too of geet and khushi connction
will update soon

Originally posted by: komlika

Awesome ... Who was that guy? Khushi is she Geet's child? Bc you gave no info on her mom... Keep up good work n update soon 😳

Btw can please put like " past" or " present" so that we don't get confuse... N if you already did that n i missed it then ignore me 😆

will for the guy who geet dreams of will give the info later but for now just imagine an psycho person who is madly in love with geet and wants to make her his. he will do any thing to make her
and for the past and present i didn't put it as it was a dream but yes in my other parts i have puted it as past and present but thanks for letting me know
and Khushi is not geet child she is sameera child wcich i forget to mention in my character sketch
sorry for that confusion