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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome
Love the way open her hair
u naughty Maan
Cont soon
Luv
TC
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Posted: 14 years ago
raj beta..tu tho gaya kaam se...lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
First of all sorry Naima for reading and comemnting late. my working hours are killing me and planning to do some catch up over the weekend
Fabulous updates...I am loving it. Maan has already fallen for her. A guy who doesn't smile is possesively in love with our sweet little angel...Oh I am so waiting for their love story to progress
Waiting for the next part as well...will definately read it and comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updt
just luvd it
aww maan all jealous & possessive & drooling over our angel geet
omg geet had to "work out" so much to come to the party
maan is not gonna leave dat rascal raj
cont soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Raj tho aaj gayi... Uskki ticket book karado yaar... N our maan sir is sooo naughtyyy... Hmmm
Babaji...waiting 4 more n more maneet momentz...
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 13

Hey Beautiful! wanna dance ??

Without waiting for her reply he held her hand and '. That is exactly when he felt a strong grip on his wrist.. He turned and saw maan staring at him furiously.. His eyes spitting fie as if he would burn him alive ..

Mr raj ! She is with me.. He said through his gritted teeth controlling his anger and pulled his hand away from geet's hand.. Raj went from there angrily and vowed to take his revenge as it had hurt his ego.. As soon as he left maan took her hand and started to caress it as if removing his touch.. He ran his fingers on her hand and placed a kiss on it.. Geet had Goosebumps when he was caressing her hand.. She felt very shy and conscious when he kissed her.. She was about to go when he pulled her to the dance floor..

Maan had kissed her hand lost in his own world but when he felt her going away an unknown fear ran through him and his possessiveness took over and he held her wrist to take her to the dance floor.. He then felt her move again and he tightened his hold on her bare waist.. He could feel her chest heave u and down in anticipation.. He turned her around and stared at her eyes which had desire.. The song Kurban huwa started and they did their passionate and hot dance.. The dance ended with a lift and maan twirled her around she didn't know why but she had a smile of contentment on her lips .. She was happy because she knew she would be safe.. But then everyone started to clap and she became hell embarrassed.. She ran out from there leaving a stunned maan..

Maan saw her retreating figure and became guilty.. He himself didn't know why he danced with her.. What was the spark?? Oh god! ye maine kya kar diya ?? wo aab kya sochay gee meray baray main ?? ek minute maan singh khurana ye sooch raha hai kay loog uskay baraya main kya sochain gay ?? Maaan loog tou teray par acha impression chortay hai .. logoon ki farq parta hai kay tu unkay baray main kya sochta hai phir aaj yee ?? nahi maine ghalat kiya mujhain aisa nahi karna chaheeyaayy tha . Mujhain geet se baat karni ho gee .. With that determination he went outside in search for geet..

Geet on the other side was too shocked to register what had happened.. She recalled all the moments since she entered the party and got scared.. She was scared that she had broken her brother's trust.. veer jee aur bhai sahi keh rahay thay mujhain nahi ana chaeeyayy tha ??Ye Maine kya kiya ?? How can I let anyone touch me like that??How could I dance with him?? But why?? Why?? kyun aisa laga everything I did and whatever happened was so right was so correct so pure .. I didn't find anything wrong in doing this but why??

Her chains of thoughts were broken when she felt a pull on her wrist and the next minute she was pinned to the wall .. she looked up to see the face of the man and horror stuck her ..

It was none other than RAJ .. she was frightened and shocked .. he had held her wrist tight and was in a drunken state .. geet tried to get out of his grip digusted with the feel of his touch .. it is not like maan sir she thought Shut up geet .. ye meray peechay kyun parh gayaa .. she was hell scared now ..

Tum ! tu janti ho larkiyaan marti hain mujh par aur ..

Tou main kya karoon ?? chooroo mujhain !

Shut up ! haan kaha tha main .. wo maan usne meri insult ki kyun kyukay main tumhain chuh raha tha aab dekho main kya karta hoon .. With that said he touched her cheeks and she screamed in pain … maan who was finding her heard her cry and ran there.. The site in front of him shocked him.. He marched and gave a punch on Raj's back.. He fell down.. Geet was continuously crying.

Maan held his collar and started to beat him .. his lips were bleeding but he did not stop .. How dare you touch you?? how dare you ?? was all he was repeating again and again ..geet got horrified seeing Raj's condition .. he would die if maan kept hitting him .. she screamed Sir buss .. but he was no where listening .. nahi geet isne tumhai chuha iski tou main and he again punched … he was about to kick when geet screamed MAAN .. he stopped in his tracks and turned .. Geet ran and hugged him tight feeling him. He also held her protectively in his embrace !

please do commeennntt !😃
Edited by NaimaMSK1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago




Update soon... Holding the breath...




Yey... I sandwichd ur post...
Edited by zafarahim - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh No Naima...yeh kya cliff hanger tha
love their dance and confusion...that is bound to happen till they both not only realise but accept their feelings as well...
but Raj has her pinned to a wall...please one more update...nahi to nightmares aaynge mujhe
please
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Oh No Naima...yeh kya cliff hanger tha

love their dance and confusion...that is bound to happen till they both not only realise but accept their feelings as well...
but Raj has her pinned to a wall...please one more update...nahi to nightmares aaynge mujhe
please

Thank you for your lovely comment ritzy 😃 yup i've updated it will pm you 😊 hope they realise soon 😉 thanks once again ❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg that was simply superb... Aaj muche aachi si neend ayegi,... Hey thankz for the lovly update... Im going to hav a ''dreeeamy'' nite...

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