Maaneet OS& SS (Only Mine) Thread 1 .. (part 1-25)

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saam123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#381

Naima u writing so superb

just love these ss & os

can't stop reading over

& over.maan is so in love

with geet. awesome .

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Monali

@monika1992

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Posted: 14 years ago

#382

Awesome update loved it
Superb update cont soon
thnks 4 pm

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zunaiba5

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Posted: 14 years ago

#383

thnx 4 pm

raj is danger ..pls make maan beat himblack n blue ...if ranbir nvicky can do its f9

do continue

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Naima

@NaimaMSK1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#384

hellloo everyonee 😃 As per my promise i will update two parts today .. but not now .. it'll be tonight 😉 well i wanted to thank you all for the lovelyy comments .. here are the replies to all those who commented 😃😃😃❤️

payalpari .. yes our geet is the smartest 😉

Geetmaan1234 .. Thank you soo much 😃 and this raj uff i hate him too 😡😉

srilu_123 .. thank you 😃 well i hope the same but even if he does MSK is dere 😉

billy_ritu .. will update tonight .. hope it'll be worth the wait 😊

shah10 .. Thank you 😊

Remya_Pillai .. Thank you 😊 and ofcourse i couldn't let anyone touch our geet except ofcourse Maan 😉😉

meena.. Thank you 😊 and yup unfortunately he will 😡 but when Msk is dere have no fear 😃😉

priti11 .. Thank you 😃

KaShGurTiLuverr .. Thank you soo much 😊 i really love your comments 😃 will update tonight 😊

ananya95 .. Thank you soo much .. 😊 yup Ranbir is senti but geet is maha senti 😆😆

maaneetsangel .. thank you soo much 😃 And soo sorryy wo actually i had such a tough schedule that i had absolutely no time .. but will give two updates tonight hope that will compensate it 😊

simm28 .. Aww thank you soo much 😊 That is very sweet of you 😃

abinash079 .. Thank you 😊

Dreamy_Mystique .. thank you 😃

muraadlovesdd .. thank you 😃 and yes very smart 😉

monika1992 thank you soo much 😃

zunaiba5 you're welcome 😊 we don't need vicky or ranbir when maan is dere 😉

azee11 .. Thank you 😊 Oh i hate this raj too 😡 and yes possessive and jealous Maan 😉

SONU_29 .. Thank you 😊

suhaaana .. Thank you 😊 will be updating soon 😊 and your request sure i'll write it on the weekend 😊

NANDY_BRU .. Thanks 😊

anjucool .. Thank you 😊

Thank you sooo much i really get encouraged but your comments .. love you all ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Naima !!

Edited by NaimaMSK1 - 14 years ago

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Naima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#385

Hello everyone 😊 Thank you soo much for your comments 😊 I have personally commented to all your comments hope you get them 😃

PART 12

Everyone were at the party hall waiting for geet.. Maan was getting restless to see her and he himself didn't not know why.. Raj was waiting to put his plan in action and Mr shrma was waiting so he could introduce everyone to such an amazing person and hard working girl.. Geet still remembered the debate that took place when she reached home and informed that she is invited to a party and had to go there.. Ranbir and yash did not allow while Mr. handa and Rahul were a little hesitant at first but then agreed.. it took geet all her efforts and smart of the smartest idea to make the other two brother convinced and phew finally her hard work paid off she was aloud to go with thousands and thousands of precautions to be kept in mind .. And here geet was standing at the entrance her eyes searching for maan.. She was wearing a beautiful pink saree which had a deep V cut blouse from the back exposing her milky back skin.. This saree would especially ordered for her by Ranbir for this party.. Her hair were tied in a bun and so a better view of her back was visible.. She wore long diamond and pink stone earring given to her by yash for this party.. Her diamond pendant exclusively made for her by Rahul in which GEET was engraved with diamonds.. Her eyes kohl and lips glossy such that anyone could tempt to kiss them.. She looked stunningly magnificent.. The Pink saree was enhancing her figure and curves making her look ravishing.. maan's eyes fell on the entrance and got rooted at it's place.. He had never in his life seen anyone look so beautiful and innocent at the same time.. He turned and saw raj staring at her ..

HE couldn't tolerate it and clenched is fist seething with anger and jealousy.. How dare that raj lay eyes on geet ?? How dare he?? He is such a flirt I will not leave him! He dare to lay his dirty lusty eyes I will kill him.. He was about to go when he saw geet approaching him.. a smiled formed on his lips but then he saw her turn to talk to somebody and that is when he saw he bare back and hair tied in a bun .. He couldn't tolerate anyone seeing geet like this .. No never .. he marched towards her angrily and pulled her in a lonesome corner .. geet was too shocked to react but then quickly recovered and asked ..

Maan sir ! Kya huwaa ?? Main aap he ko dhoond rahi thi ..Main kaise lag rahi hoon ?? achi na ek dum mast .. hahaha mujhain pata hai ye saree hai na ye .. And she went on and on telling about her dress jewelry everything ignorant to the fact that maan's eyes were shooting daggers at her for wearing an almost backless blouse he himself did not understand why but he was being very possessive about it.. Her non stop chanting and praising herself was adding fuel to his needs.. He felt an urge to take those rosy lips in his and kiss her shut but he had to control ..

Chup bilkul chup ! he shouted and made geet shiver ..

Main ..

Before she could complete he kept his fingers on her lips in order for her to keep silent.. As soon as his finger touched her lip and unknown sensation coursed through her body .. she didn't understand what or why ?? Maan on the other hand had a worst time controlling his urge.. His finger touching her rosy lips tempted him to kiss her endlessly .. But then Raj's eyes came and he became furious again..

Ye kya pehna hai tumne?? 😡

Kyun main achi nahi lag rahi .. 😕

she said looking sad and confused by the thought that he thought she didn't look good.. Maan cursed himself for the wrong words.. He didn't want her to be sad because of anyone and not even in his wildest dream because of him ..

Nahi geet tum ..

Nahi she said shocked..

Chup! Mujhain bolne dou .. Tum buhat achi lag rahi ho infact buhat khubsoorat par .. now he became restless he didn't understand what should he say .. How can he say that he had a problem with the backless blouse.. He had a problem that people especially men were gaping at her at the party.. But then he thought and turned her such that her back was facing him and she was pinned to the wall … she was perplexed to react to the situation or cope up with his demanding authority..

He then moved his hand to her hair and opened the pin that was holding the bun.. Her straight thick hair flew on her milky back.. Spreading the aroma of her sweety shampoo .. maan inhaled sharply taking in her scent .. He then ran his fingers through her hair setting them at the back as if covering as much of her back as possible.. He placed a kiss on the nape of her neck and turned her .. Now her face was facing his and he saw her expressions.. Eyes wide.. Red cheeks and a smile tugging her lips.. Maan looked at her with such intensity that she lowered her eyes.. She felt shy under her gaze and before she could speak maan kissed her cheek and said

I like your hair open..

He then place another kiss and said..

You look beautiful.. I hope my actions made it clear or do you want me to repeat

he said naughtily..

Nahi .. wo .. umm .. she stammered feeling shy ..

He smirked and put this hand forward and said Chalain ??

She only nodded and they both entered the party .. Geet was a little conscious coming with him and became even more when she saw everyone staring at them .. But maan just pressed her hand in assurance.. Assuring that he was there with her ..

They entered and everyone was introduced to her … Ladies were stunned at her beauty while men couldn't get their eyes off her.. Raj tried many times to approach her but maan was standing with her like a shield protecting her from all evils .. After a long time maan went to he bar to fetch drinks from both of them and that is when raj got his opportunity and went to geet ..

Hey Beautiful! wanna dance ??

Without waiting for her reply he held her hand and ….

So how was it ???? will update the next part in a few hours most probably late night .. as tomorrow is a weekend 😃 Please do comment and suggest 😊

Will pm after i am done with both the parts 😊

Naima !!

Edited by NaimaMSK1 - 14 years ago

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Atiffa

@Atiffa

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#386

awesome part

uff hate this raj...🤬😡

We will get to see possessive Maan

Cont soon

Luv

Atiffa

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SONU_29

@SONU_29

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Posted: 14 years ago

#387

awesome part👏

i loved it

precap is interesting😉

continue soon

Edited by SONU_29 - 14 years ago

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#388

awsome update...but eagerly waiting for next 2 parts...

hey if u can write something on geet,s memory loss and maneet r married and geet is pregnent. actually continuing the story and considering hoshiarpur track