Maaneet OS& SS (Only Mine) Thread 1 .. (part 1-25) - Page 38

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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update yaar
wow geet is too talkative
and maan omg he is jealous if she praise someone in front of her
hm and ranbir like clock got stuck between their result of announcing who is the best
and geet and maan fight superb
continue soon
me waiting for ur next update
thanx for pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting how much time will it take dear ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you soo much for your lovely comments .. i replied to most of them hopefully you all saw them and sory if i was not able to reply to any .. anyways enjoyy 😃😃😃
PART 11

Geet came back home after the long hours of work and dedication.. Everyone had surrounded her and was asking questions about her presentation.. Her work and everything.. it was like a daily routine for her to come back and her brothers asking how her day went .. Everyone was going to back to their respective rooms hen Ranbir called geet in his room alone .. She gulped … aaj tou paka class lagay gee .. uff baba jib ach lena..

She entered and saw Ranbir as sitting on his bed in deep thoughts.. she went and cleared her throat and that brought him back to his senses .. He looked at her and she gave an extra sugary smile …

Geet I need to talk to you about something important..

Jee veer jee !

Veer jee hmmm (he smirked) mujhain tou laga office main Ranbir boltay boltay you'll forget I am veer jee (he teased)

Uff ho veer jee aap bhi na kaise batain karaty ho .. how can I forget u're my veer jee .. she smiled and tried to divert by saying .. acha aab main chalti hoon and haan don't worry I know and will always remember you are my veer jee .. she was about to run when he said

Ek minute geet ..

Jee she turned

Geet what is all this bacha ?? you not letting me tell maan about me being you brother ?? you're the handa ?? or that you own the handa empire ?? kyun bachay deekhoo maan needs to know the truth atleast him if not all warna baad main problems ho sakti hai

(Naima wondering ... haan bikul sahi keh raha hai .. agay problems ho gee .. maan jaoo geet )

Nahi veer jee ! deekhiyee I don't want him o be partial just because I am a handa .. I want to be treated equal..

(uff geet stupiiddd !!! 😉)

He will not be partial I know him..

Please veer jee..Ok just for a few months once I make a name of my own I will tell everyone .. veer jee I want to see if Geet is something without the sir name Handa or not .. or is Handa the only reson what geet is today .. I want to search myself.. Search the girl I am .. search the geet behind handa .. and if I have any problem I know all of you will be there for me .. veer jee .. I have never seen the outside world because I feared the people .. Their thought everything but till when .. kab tak veer jee ?? kab tak main iss tarhaan karoon gee .. I have to be strong .. kab tak main aap logoon par booj hoon geee

Booj .. khabardar jo tune aisa kaha .. tu tou hamari jaan hai .. hamara sab kuch hai .. teray bina hum kuch nahi mera bach kuch nahi .. sach main aisa kabhi mat kehna . geet hai tou main hoon .. main teray liaay he hoon .. kabhi bhi meri zarorat parhay tou apnay veer jee ko mat bholna .. tu he iss ghar he roshni hai … janti hai jaisay suraj poori dunia ko roshan karta hai na waisay tu meri princess hamray ghar hum sab ki zindagiyoon ko roshan karti hai ..

Saying so he hugged her not wanting to show that he got emotional..

Geet had tears in her eyes seeing the unconditional love her brother had for her.. Unknown to them there stood the rest of the family .. having tears of pleasure and happiness .. After more of the chit chat they all dozed off waiting for a new morning ..

NEXT MORNING IN KC

Everyone was busy arranging the last minute files because today the deal was to be sighned .. Mr sharma and his co partner was to come.. Maan and geet were in the conference room already with adi waiting for them when r sharma came and greeted maaneet .. he then came forward and introduced them to his partner Raj .. He came forward and as drooling over geet .. He had never seen such a beautiful girl .. he kept staring at her . Raj was young and a flirty type guy.. He waned to bed every girl and enjoy the pleasure.. His new target was geet .. He raised his hands to greet her ..

Hello beautiful he said in a flirty voice that scared geet ..

Maan was staring at raj from the minute he entered.. He hated the fact he was staring at geet .. But then when he raised his hand for a hand shake and the way he said beautiful maan couldn't bare it .. He looked at geet who was hesitant and he nodded for ano as to no shake hands with him .. geet was confused but then she ot an idea..

She folded her hand and said Namste .. he looked disappointed while maan smirked ..

Hmmm ! mushkil challenge haan .. I love challenges .. Geet tumhain panay main tou aur bhi maza aiyee gaa .. he said to himself with an evil smirk ..

They sighned the deal .. Mr sharma invited them to a party in the honour of the deal and them leaving tonight .. maan was relieved to know raj would be going .. He wanted to say no but Mr sharma insisted so much that he agreed..

Ok sorry guys i for such a short update but i promise to update on 2 parts on friday as a compensation but i had to go somewhere .. please bear with mee .. i hope you all understand .. do tell me how it is and oh i have posponed the twist a litlle further away so i can give a better idea of maaneet relatioship to you all 😃😃😃😃
Please do comment 😃
PRECAP : Partyy .. masti .. dance .. romance ... 😉
Aray ye geet kahan chali gaee ?? 😕😲😲
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome smart geet...😉
Edited by payalpari - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update loved it
Superb update cont soon
Raj idiot
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Posted: 14 years ago
hai

this is great
hope this raj create any prob for her
and other wise maan babu beats him to death
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome
will raj create prob for geet?
waiting for party
cont soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it loadz
Me loved the brother sister scene
Urghhh stupid Raj :/
Lmaooo loved geet's namaste
Can't wait 4 da next part
Loved the precap
Con soon
Thanks 4 da PM
Muahhh
Xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updt
just luvd it
awww geet ranbir all senti
luvd maan being j of raj
aww witty geet namaste!!!!!
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm...

continue soon ...

toh finally aapko hum nanhe munhe bachon ki yaad aa hi gayee ... 😛



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