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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you sooo much for your lovely comments 😃😃😃 here goes the next part .. i tried to make it as long as possible as per my promise 😊
PART 10
As soon as Ranbir entered the cabin he saw maan pacing angrily.. he gulped and went near him only to be blasted by him ..
What is all this ranbir haan ?? You me not knowing each other ?? You hugging and she kissing you
(he said gritting his teeth and clenching his fist) aakhir wo hai kon tumhari ?? and why were you laughing so much huh ?? I never saw you laugh ?? tum tou hameesha angry young maan banay rehtay ho .. bolo na chup kyun ho gaee ?? aab bolti band ho gae kya ?? .. he turned and saw ranbir laughing maan glared at him and said ..
Wah geet ka tou bara asar hai .. The maan singh khurana jo sirf haan ya hmm bota that aab nonstop bolta hai.. and what were you saying I was laughing and what were you doing haan ?? Angry young man ' look who's talking.. tum tou larkiyoon se door rehtay thay tou aab kya huwa ??
Woo ummm ! kya bataoon ranbir ye geet hai na ussne ..
( and he told the entire incident on how she made fun of his hmm's ) She saw Ranbir burst into laughter..

Oh god ye sirf meri geet he kar sakti hai .. damn! I wanted to see maan's face jab geet ne uskay hmm ka mazak uraya ho gaa .. I wonder dadi aur dad sab ko pata chalay ga tou kya ho ga .. The MSk ko sirf meri behen he theek kar sakti hai oh behen hai ye nahi batana usse ..

Ranbir ..

This brought sense in him and he said ..

Nahi wo maan ek baat pochoon ??

Haan

Wo tumhari shakal kaisee thi jab usne tumharay 'hmmm' ka mazak uraya .. Shit yaar I missed it ..

Oh shut up acha na ! mujhain bataoo tum us din meeting chor kay kahaan bhaag gaee thay ?? tum tou kabhi nahi jatay haan ..

Ranbir remembered the Rakhi day and how he was late and had to become a murgha his expression immediately dropped and maan saw that he smirked and said

Kya huwa bataoo naa ??

Nahi kuch nhai wo choro maan batao ye geet kaise hai kaam karnay main ??

Maan went on and on praising geet and telling how the interview went and the challenge.. he thinking as a bet .. Chocolate scene.. Presentation.. And everything.. Ranbir was surprised that geet could handle so much..ans even more surprised seeing MSK praise someone that too a girl .. He was so proud of her .. In between when maan told the funny incidents Ranbir even laughed but maan gave a deadly glare and shut him up ..

Wah maan ! tu ek larki se baisti karwata hai .. no no sharam kar maan sharam kar ..
Oh shut up ranbir ! main kya karoon wo itnaa bolti hai aur jab tak mujhain kuch samajh ataa hai wo chali jaati hai .. mujhain bolnay ka mauqa he nahi deetii . sab kuch convince kar leetii haii ..

Haan ye tou hai geet ki speciality .. magar haan maan wo buhat masoom hai us ka khayal rakhna said ranbir as his brotherly love took over him ..

Maan raise his eyebrows and said tune bataya nahi wo teri kya lagti hai ..

Wo meri b ..

Before he could complete geet barged in the room and said

Sir ! main aa gaee
.. And smiled
Magar maine umhain nahi bulaya ??

Oh ho sir ! I think you have memory loss the one aamir khan had in ghajini .. waisay ghajni se yaad aya achi film thin a sir ?? itnee sweet thi haan magar pata hai main itna roee usmain heroine ko marna nahi chaeeyaay tha haine sir ?? aap bhi roee hoon thay na ?? magar sir usmain aamir khan kitna hot lag raha tha .. uskay muscles .. uska style wah wah .. wo

Geet .. She heard both maan and ranbir scream at the same time ..

Maan screamed because he was jealous as she was admiring another man and Ranbir screamed because he didn't like her talking like this.. He was her elder brother had possessive to he couldn't tolerate her praising a hero ..

Maan and Ranbir looked at each other shocked both thinking they had a valid reason to scream why did the other scream .. Shrugging of the thought maan diverted er attention by saying ..

Ms geet if you are done telling me about gajhni may I know why were you here??

Wo isse liyee I said about memory loss sir! You came to my cabin and told me to come in your cabin in 5 minutes and your 5 minutes are over.. Oh ho sir abhi bhi yaad nahi ayaa ?? Remember when you came and shouted and I said I needed a hearing aid and ' (then looking up) baba ji ja aap akal bant rahay thay tou maan singh khurana kya kisi par chilla rahay thay ?? inne tou kuch yaad nahi rehta kya ho ga inka ??

It was loud enough for both of them to hear.. Ranbir chuckled and said..

Nahi geet chila nahi I think kisi meeting main ho gaa haina maan??
Wohi tou .. meeting main bhi tou shilatay hai na .. konsa geet sunatay hai .. hahaha geet se yaad aya ' oh ve .. ranbir aap ko pata hai jab sir ne mera naam poocha na he thought mera naam geet wo ganay wala geet hai .. How dumb na ??
She said and closed her eyes tightly realizing her slip of tongue

Haan geet very dumb Ranbir said and smirked..

Maan gave a deathly glare and before he could say she said ..

Nahi nahi ranbir .. how can he be dumb he was intelligent na .. deekho it was only him who could relate kay geet ka matlab ganay wala song bhi ho sakta hai warna aaj tak kisi ne nahi kiya .. sir u're very intelligent .. and mummured baba ji aaj bacha leena ..

Geet first of all maine nahi aisa kuch nahi samjha tha ' tumne he predict kar liyaa tha .. aur jab tum bolti hoon tou kisi ko bolnay thori na deeti hoon ' kyun Ranbir ??

Hawww ! aisa tou nahi hain .. main kahaan itna bolti hoon .. haine ve.. Ranbir main kahaan botli hoon .. aap ki bataoo sir ko !

Ranbir's eye balls moved from maan to geet .. geet to maan and again maan to geet .. he was stuck like a ball in between the two and fearing like a kid .. if he would say geet talked to too much and take maan side .. his princess will get angry and if he said maan was wrong and geet was right .. maan would kill him .. he didn't understand as to whose side should he take .. so he thought of another idea ..

Umm maan geet mujahin na meeting kay liaay jana hai main zara ataa hoon haan .. ok bye and literally dashed out of the room saving his lfe leaving maan and geet alone ..

BACK IN THE CABIN

Main bhi jaa rahi hoon .. geet sad angrily turning to go away

Kahaan sunno to ..

Nahi main kyun sunnon ?? main tou buhat bolti hoon na tou aap betheayy aur karay baat table aur iss kursi se .. main chali .. aur tab tak nahi baat karoon gee jab tak aao ye maan nahi leetay kay geet is the best haan ..

She turned and only to find maan holding her wrist.. He jerked her hand and pulled her towards himself.. She immediately backed away only to see maan walking ahead of her.. She got scared and started to take step backwards till he back hit the wall..

Haan tou tum kya keh rahai thi ?? Who is the best huh ??

Sir .. aap .. yee !

Maine kuch poocha hai geet !

Bolo aab kya huwa ?? chup kyun ho gaee ?? who is the best ??

Aap .. she was about to say something but then maan interuppted

Main ??oh I am the best ! thank you geet '

Geet came back to her sherni mode and said '

Excuse me who said you are the best huh ?? I am the best.. geet samjhay aap ..

She again tried to leave but maan held her wrist and pinned them to he wall ..

App .. sir chudiyay mujhain ..

Aab tou main tabhi choroon gaa jab tum ye manoon gee kay I am the best .. bolo I am the best ..

Haan sir wohi tou I am the best .. buss aap choriyay !

Oh someone's being smart he said and moved his face closer to hers .. His fanning breath was tickling her senses .. bolo warna ..

Warna kya ?? she said barely as a moan ..

Warna hum yehi rahain gay isse tarhaan and trust me I don't mind he concluded smirking..

Whatever she said..

Oh! Don't tell me that I didn't warn you..

With that said he started to tickle her on her stomach and she giggled like crazy.. his fingers moved up and tickled her more on the neck region and she burst out laughing .. Panting not being able to stop her laughs .. She tried to wriggle out of his grip but maan had held her hands in one of his hand s.. She screamed and laughed while maan thoroughly enjoyed..

Sir.. sir please ' please stop ..

But maan didn't stop.. I told you before..

Achaa..Soory.. Sorry.. You are the best.. Bas khush please sir now leave me.. She managed to say between her fits of laughter and heavy breathing.. Maan immediately left her hearing that and she held his arm for support until her breathing was normal..

Dhusht dhanav she said and ran to her cabin..

Maan first fumed but then smiled and said pagli ..

So how was it ?? hope you all liked it 😃 please do comment 😊

PRECAP : TWIST 😕😕

Edited by NaimaMSK1 - 14 years ago
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Edited by payalpari - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oye hello!!

Jaldi update kar Yaar...

Hum log intezaar kar rahe hain!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
ya... waiting 4 update ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part👏
i loved it😊
can't stop my laughing after readind 10th part😆😆
hey plz dont write in green
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurmina-rks

Oye hello!!

Jaldi update kar Yaar...

Hum log intezaar kar rahe hain!!!

done boss 😃😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SONU_29

awesome part👏

i loved it😊
can't stop my laughing after readind 10th part😆😆
hey plz dont write in green

Thank you 😃 oh ok i'll change the colour right away 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
aweosme
liked jealous maan
loved possessive ranbir
loved the way maan said hmm to ranbir
ranbior stuck up with maan and geet to take whose side lol
nice escape for ranbir
maan is praising a girl
finally i cant stop laughing🤣
now what is this new twist lol
connt soon
keep writing



Edited by meena.. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mishty..sakii

Awesome
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Thank you thank you thank you thank you 😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow..superb update.
love geet's talks.
amazing .
continue soon.
thx

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