MG SS : Abandoned;[COMPLETED] last part @ pg 18 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Interesting turn of events
Dev suddenly seems to have vanished in thin air along with his doctor
Geet was so shocked and panicky
Wonder whats going to happen next
Waiting for the next part

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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
wowww loved it
i think dev ran away with nandini
this all was a plan or something
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
amazing parts !!!!! please continue!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
hey this is prety interestin
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thankq
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Hi all

How r u

Thanks a lot for your comments and likes

It really matters a lot.

Sorry for the delay in the next part. Here you go.



PART 5






The hospital security man standing there feels like something is wrong so he goes towards them.



Security man says, "Is there any problem here?"



Geet sees him and tells him, "Yes, my boyfriend is missing."



Security man looks confused and asks, "Missing?"



Geet answers, "Yes, he is 30 years old. We came here in the morning for his surgery, but they say he is not in the system. He is wearing a brace in his leg and was scheduled for surgery."



Security man says, "Relax Ma'am, let me find out."



He then takes out his walkie talkie and announces: Kartar here. We have a patient missing. Looking for a male, 20 years old, wearing a brace in his leg.



The security man then calls his boss and talks over the whole matter.



Geet moves from that place and again goes towards the orthopaedic wing and there she again asks a number of people.



"Hi, have you seen a man. He is about 6 feet…"



"Hello, have you seen a man. He is wearing a brace….."



"Hey, have you seen a man. He was wearing a striped hoodie…."



She is continuously asking and by then enters a restricted area. There is security and nurse present. She asks the nurse.



"Hi, have you seen my boyfriend. He came here for a surgery. He is wearing a brace."



The nurse replies, "Ma'am please go to the reception and ask. This is a restricted area. Please ma'am, leave from here."



"I am not going anywhere."



The nurse then signals the security to come over. The security guard comes there and asks her to leave.



"Ma'am please leave from this area. This is restricted."



Geet again starts to go inside but the security man blocks her way and she has to leave from there.



The main security man came there. He said to her, "Ma'am please come with me. Our head would like to see you."



Geet nodded and went with him. She was greeted with a tall woman, all dressed in professional clothes. She was also carrying a walkie talkie.



"Hello. I am Naintara Rathod, I am the Hospital Administration head here. I got to know about your situation. Can you please tell me in detail."



"Hi. Yes."



"But first let's go to the security camera room. Mr. Kartar, come with us."



"Yes, Ma'am."



They all head towards the security room. On the way, Geet starts telling them what happened.



"My boyfriend had a leg injury, ACL to be precise. He had a surgery scheduled with Dr. Verma today in the orthopaedic ward. I just left him to get coffee. After I finished I was waiting fro him, for the announcement, but it never came. And when I asked them to check his name, they said he is not in the system."



Naintara listens to everything will concentration and then says to the security man, "Satish, pull the tapes of today morning."



Then she turns towards Geet and asks, "When did you arrive here?"



"At 7.15"



All the while they were talking; the security (camera) man is looking at the recording trying to identify Geet in it. From the entrance till the reception, but none in the room was able to see them. The entrance camera showed a car stopping but the people were not visible as a tree came in between. As for the reception area, they still could not see them.



"Surgery started at 8."



Geet then starts looking at the CCTV footages.



"Wait. Did you see that?"



She looks at the timeline on the footage.



"Please go back. Keep going. Keep playing. Slow. Please pause."



All of then stared at the footage.



"Here you can see him. His back is visible. Black hair. He is wearing the red and white striped hoodie jacket over his shirt. Here you can see him."



Naintara looked at the main security guard, Kartar to know his opinion.



"Ma'am the footages are such that we are not able to see the colour. CCTV footage can't show the colour properly."



Naintara then look towards Geet and says, "Ma'am do you have the hospital record?"



Geet just dipped her head and says, "Dev had them."



"Okay. I will have my team look into that," she then looks at Kartar and says, "Do what you can to help her."



Kartar nods his head.



Geet then starts to go away from there. Naintara sees this and says, "Where are you going?"



"Calling someone who can actually help."



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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
kitne din baad ud kya mein kabse intejar kar rehi thi
awesome part
loved it
feel sad for geet
I guess dev done it intentionally with Nano
but whatever geet is not aware of it and now her tension, concerns for dev and his safety...
NT trying to help her
CC tv footage hmmm let's see
but Can I say well proofed planned by whoever done it Nano, dev or any others
geet is going for some one's help
let's see
continue soon



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post kar link cc mein
nehi toh dekh😡
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

kitne din baad ud kya mein kabse intejar kar rehi thi
awesome part
loved it
feel sad for geet
I guess dev done it intentionally with Nano
but whatever geet is not aware of it and now her tension, concerns for dev and his safety...
NT trying to help her
CC tv footage hmmm let's see
but Can I say well proofed planned by whoever done it Nano, dev or any others
geet is going for some one's help
let's see
continue soon



P.S post this link on CC 😃
post kar link cc mein
nehi toh dekh😡


thnx for liking it...

i know i am quite late in posting it...sorry...

next pata nahi kab post kar paungi...

i will try mu best to finish it this week...b4 diwali...

PS -- ..meri to kabhi sunti nahi ho...
post kar di...happy now...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
awesome!!!
must say well planned...
CCTV footage...let see how can it help
Cont soon
Luv
TC
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: jyoti_l


thnx for liking it...

i know i am quite late in posting it...sorry...

next pata nahi kab post kar paungi...

i will try mu best to finish it this week...b4 diwali...

PS -- ..meri to kabhi sunti nahi ho...
post kar di...happy now...


welcome dear
hmmm
kya next pat nehi kab post karegi
hmmm will wait but mere kya mein toh curiosity se dying
P.S kya kya mein sunti nehi
kitna bara iljam baba jee aapne dekha
ha mein dekha and replied there
yes happy
muhhaa
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
wowww loved it
i think dev or who ever planned it very well that he is not seen only

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