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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maya used to cry when she didn't see Geet around after she wake up but geet didn't hear any cry sound from her yet so she didn't wake up yet but where is she...

Geet is broken down when she didn't find Maya for nearly 1 hour...she asked all servants securities and roaming inside and outside the Mansion in the process of searching maya...

finally one servant gave the news to her that maan took maya to hospital she felt some what relaxed hearing the news that maya is with maan but again she got tensed to here that maya is not well..

Geet rushed to the gate she knows very well where maan had gone hospital means he will surly went to HAPPY BABY child clinic (which is run my MEERA) she knows very well about maya's health and usually maan and geet both trust meera regarding maya's health...

geet remembers meera...
#yeah she is the one and only friend of maan he used to share every thing with meera as well as meera they are very good friends from there child hood... meera's father and maan's father (vikram sing khurana) are good friends and business partners too.. Meera's parents died soon in an accident in her child hood.. maan and his parents only take care of her after that... meera also share every thing with maan first from her love to her children's mischief she shared every thing with him...she's is a child specialist her husband is too is a doctor psychologist they both fell in love with each other when they are doing there medicine grade there is a strong opposition from Stephen side but maan and his parents convinced them for there marriage...#.these information geet got it from dadi on the 2nd day of her marriage that time she didn't see meera but latter when Maan introduced her to geet once...

she understand her nature very clearly she's not like maan she is very friendly and joyfull...from her face geet understood meera is very matured and responsible person but at the same time she is very caring and loving and very pretty too...meera has many friends she love to be with friends around her friendly nature brought her more good friend too...including maan and geet...

at a few seconds of there meeting geet became very close to her by her nature when maan and meera talk also its mostly like maan is listening to some speech he usually wont speak much to any one...

Geet thinks about meera for a while...throught out her travel to Happy baby clinic
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by the time maan reached the clinic which is in front of meera's house its closed by that time so maan called meera soon and went straightly in to her house where kushi and meeti is playing in the hall when they see Maya they get very excited and came run towards her...

Meera warned both saying that Maya's health is not well and took her in her arms and started to examine her...


she asked servants to get her medicine bag and started her work in tesing maya's temperature where where kushi meeti and maan silently with fear looking at maya...finally Maya opened her eyes widely after seeing kushi and meeti she started to smile...meera and maan took a relief breath after that...

MEERA:Maya...dear...how are you?see kushi and meeti is waiting for you to play with them...see..see..
meeti and kushi is now busy in playing with maya by holding her little figures and toes..
maya is now laughing at them for there actions

Maan relived totally...

what happen Meera...
nothing to worry maan its just a slight fever because of not having proper rest and food..
i was afraid for a second yet he is rest less meera noticed that and patted his shoulder now she kept Maya in the couch and asked meeti and khusi to take care of her and play with out moving or disturbing her...

she moved close to maan who is standing near the window and thinking about some thing...
Maan every thing is fine don't worry... i gave medicine to Maya she will be fine with in a day...
hmmm...where is stephen
he went to london for one conference...
yet you all didn't sleep..
we are waiting for stephen 's call now...how is geet now?

Nothing has change...saying this he remember about geet i want to go meera geet will be searching Maya

hmm ok fine... take care of Maya give her medicine properly...
khusi and meeti Maya need rest now so give her to uncle...obeying mama's words Meeti and khusi brought maya towards them...

Meeti and kushi : bye maya..good night...sweet dreams...
saying that both kissed in maya's fore head

Meer: bye Maya cutie... take a good care of her food and medicines maan bye... take care...if any problem give me a call...bye...

when maan about to leave Meera's cell rang he understood from her smile its stephen and moved from there when he about to enter his car he heard the fighting of meeti and kushi complaining about each other to their dad.,,,,

Maan stepped in to the car and driver started to move Maya is very tired now so lying peace fully in Maan's arms car moved in the peace full road where there is no heavy traffic but some vehicles are moving here and there...

His mind is stuck in meera's house itself car moved far away from there but not his mind he still hear the complaint and fighting's of meeti and khusi
some years before maan and geet also did the same fighting like kids and complaining about each other to dadi...very childish fights...
again flash back running in his mind
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Flash Back

next day after maaneet first conversation and plan to act...maan kept all his promise by putting her admission in best college...
he also introduced Geet to his best friend Meera as per dadi's wish by that time meera is in mumbai doing her master degree..so she can't speak much to him about his marriage and about geet...
at the same time stephen also went to london for his masters so she need to spent more time with him than with Maan so she don't know any thing about there plan and all...

according to her dadi trapped maan for marriage and now both are happy with each other...nothing more than that...both also behaved very normally before her in there first meet...she came just for 1 week that time so she rushed soon to mumbai after there meet...no big conversation went between the three...

Maaneet yet didn't care about each other's presence in the same room..
as both are not interested in each other and they acted very well before dadi as every thing is normal nothing is wrong between them...
but inside there is a cold war going on in between them always they used to fight for each and every thing...

example for there fight
the next day after there plan to act...

both came very tired after there dinner and slipped in to the bed on both sides and slept peace fully for a while when its very chill both grab a bed spread near them and start to cover them selves there is only a single spread in the bed both slipped in to other side...
when they feel more chill both try to keep on dragging the bed spread from both the sides...and it become the fight at last...and maan wins by dragging all the spread to his side...

Geet: Mr.khurana don't you think its unfair to drag the whole spread to your side

he turned to her side and simply said No...and closed his eyes
she opened her mouth wide open and try to pull the sheet...
maan get the hold the sheet tightly...
she put her full strength to pull the sheet where maan with out moving a bit hold it very tightly as if she can't remove it from him...at last he see her with the corner of his eyes and seen her action to pull the sheet he smiled to him self and a small naughtiness is went into his mind and at a jerk he left the sheet loose

because of the pressure she gave to pull it out from his tight grip made her fall in the ground...with a ouch sound she get up from there rubbing her body parts where it get hit...
Maan now sits in the bed and started to laugh at her...

how dare you do this to me...
i think you better sleep in floor so that you can't fell again..and more over i am not comfortable to share my bed with you..

she immediately sit in the bed and says why should i sleep down why can't you sleep in couch...am also not comfortable with you here

miss.geet if you forget some thing i will remember you ...am the owner of this room and its my bed i have more rights to sleep in my bed..and who are you to tell me to sleep in couch...

yeah i am also saying the same... its your room and your bed am your guest here...according to you in our culture guest should be given more priority and am not saying you to go out of your room asked you to sleep in your couch which is in your room what's wrong in this...

smart answer... but i wont sleep in couch Miss.geet if you are not comfortable here you can sleep in my couch i have no objection...and another thing why you are not comfortable in bed as you are already covering most of the bed...he put his head down and murmured MOTI

but she heard what you say come again am MOTI you only kadoos and saru

he is anger now by her words...
wat you say am SARU, kadoos ...you are Moti,pagal,...saying those he bit his tongue #what am doing now fighting with her like a kid
this is not maan...#ok what ever leave all this you need bed sheet right take it and sleep now i need to go to office tomorrow don't fight


you keep it by your self i don't need that and i too want to go to college tomorrow Mr.khurana... and more over fight is started by you i not initiate the fight...

Oh is it so i started the fight how i pushed the sheet from you...and i shouted at you for felling down..

oh yeah you didn't do any thing you didn't pull by bed sheet and you don't leave the bed sheet wantedly coz of that i fell down and yeah also you didn't say am moti... and am a pagal fighting with you simply right?

ok stop it geet... its all my mistake now happy... forgive me and sleep in bed...

no i don't want to share this bed with you so you go and sleep in couch
he knows very well she wont end this conversation yet he sleep in couch so to avoid this fight he agreed to sleep in couch and she remains very happy as he left the the bed for her... she show him a victorious smile when he about slip in couch...

he turned towards her when she about to sleep

one minute geet today you sleep there and tomorrow me you understand na... we will sleep in bed for alternate days one day you sleep in couch and am in bed OK...

she twisted her toungue insider her mouth #tomorrow only na...will see how will he sleep in bed...geet now accept for the condition#

Hmmm fine good idea am ok with this she said with a naughty smile...
this means she wont let his bed tomorrow also...

precap:geet miss maya's presence...

part 7



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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
tat was a awesome part dear...
loved their cute fights...
continue soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW GREAT VERY NICE PLEASE UPDATE SOON.. EAGERLY WATING 4 NEXT UPDATE. THANKS ALOT 4 UPDATING FOR US...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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atleast meera is there to help him with his prolems, what about geet does she shares her feelings with anyone
there fights were cute
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: t_areeb

atleast meera is there to help him with his prolems, what about geet does she shares her feelings with anyone

there fights were cute


yeah sure geet also having very close friends
RIYA and more friends are there to come in her life...but friends cant do any thing its there life they have to decide...😭

Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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tat was a awesome part dear...
loved their cute fights...
continue soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: monika1992

tat was a awesome part dear...

loved their cute fights...
continue soon dear...


thanks for loving my update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesme update dear.just lvd maneet's flashback scenes.waitng 4 next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome updates dear..loved the cute maaneet fight..and geet was so right in her guess to no where maan vl take their child..that really sweet..do continue soon..wateing for ur next updates.thanks for the pm
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Thnx for long update...
Loved maaneet's bed fight...
waiting for next one...

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