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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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as it resembles the story line of mine i want to share this with you all
credits goes to video uploader and vm maker
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mZfB4ldmDp4[/YOUTUBE]]

part 6
part 7

she twisted her toungue insider her mouth #tomorrow only na...will see how will he sleep in bed...geet now accept for the condition#

Hmmm fine good idea am ok with this she said with a naughty smile...
this means she wont let his bed tomorrow also...

this way there life starts both started with fight and ends in fight there every day starts with fight and ends with fight...

there fight is not only for bed and bed sheet its also for each and every thing in the room they act well before dadi as if they are loving each other and caring for each other but there is always a cold war between them which came out unknowingly some time before dadi...

There day gone like this for a while maan is very busy with his business meetings and geet with her studies...

maan used to drop and pick up her from her college to make dadi believe that nothing is wrong between them yet they didn't reveal that they are married to others geet mentioned her name as geet handa in her college and all know her as handa not as khurana...she always draws a clear line between her friends and family so its easy for her to maintain the same name she's not very close with any of her college friends but she hang out with them and made all masti with them but she used to inform maan about her schedule of going out and coming late maan made himself busy yet she had her work in college and he didn't miss to pick her up from college...

To her friends maan is some guardian with whom geet staying as paying guest and studying they only seen Maan's car where geet get in after her college they didn't see his face and don't know about him...as geet is not really interested in speaking about him they also didn't ask her about him... she used to refer him as saru always...

where as maan also maintain the same he don't show any interest in geets activity he just acted as a driver to pick her up and drop her...
Dadi was very happy with them according to her maan changed than before there are more drivers and car there in the mansion yet maan by himself picking up and dropping geet it means they are loving each other to her...

But clever maan knows if he asked driver to drop geet dadi will doubt them he don't want to create any doubt to dadi he knows her very well and her health also not in good condition so he don't want to disappoint dadi's wish and he always want to see her happy if she's happy with his small activity means he's ready to do that...

picking up and dropping geet is not a easy task for him he had to bear her for long time and have to take her schedule which is always messy...
one day evening,

Maan is busy in his meetings a call came to his mobile its a very important meeting so he's not able to attend the call at the same time he is not ready to attend the call as its a call from geet...after a meeting he know its 4 the time to pick her up from college and drop in home
he rushed to her college as its already late 4.30 and gave a call to her mobile from the gate...

Maan: geet where are you?
geet:am on the way to shoping mall
Maan: what...???why went for shopping now
geet: Riya called me for shopping so came
maan: then why you didn't inform me geet... i have one urgent meet i need to go soon after dropping you in home
geet: at 3 itself my college over i tried to call you but you didn't attend.. all left from college i can't wait more there so i called riya she picked me for shopping
maan: ok where are you now... i will reach there soon
Geet: i didn't finish my shopping yet
maan:its ok you can do it on some other day...now come soon i need to go its very urgent meeting...
geet: you have urgent meeting means you can go i will reach home with riya...
maan: ok then...am leaving to office reach home soon and inform dadi
that i will be late today..

geet said ok and cut the call...
she reached home soon as there shopping over with Riya
Riya is her best friend from her grades she got married and now settled in delhi she knows about geet's marriage and also about maan and dadi
she came to KM regularly to meet geet and dadi three women had a very good time with each other as Riya is staying alone with her husband she found a very good time with dadi and maan also know about her...

after reaching home small naughtiness came in to her mind...
dadi: geet beta you came...where is maan?he didn't came with you?
riya: namaste dadi maa... haan riya beta app iss waqt
geet: haan dadi maa we both went for shopping my today my college gets over soon at 3 itself so went for shopping
riya: haan dadi maa we did more shopping today...oh geet its very late have to reach home bye geet bye dadi maa...
saying this she left from there
dadi: where is maan?? he didn't came for shopping with you beta

geet: vo...vo dadi ma....she stop for a while #why should i tell good about him...he didn't pick my call when i call so let him get scolding for that#
vo dadi maa i called him after college got over but he didn't pick up and
after wards he called and told that he's busy and he cannot pick me and drop me daily and also told am not your diver to do so daily...why you always calling and disturbing me you cannot take a taxi and go...
actually he shouted to me like any thing

with a baby face she told every thing and when she notice disturbed dadi's face with the corner of her eyes...
she started her acting like crying

i was very upset by his words dadi maa so i called riya she came console me for long time and to change my mood she take me for shopping dadi ma...

while saying this she started to wipe her fake tears...

dadi is very anger with maan's attitude now

don't cry geet beet...now a days maan has become more worst he don't know to respect some one's feelings always showing attitude...
i will correct him today..you are very tired go and take rest...

ji dadi maa...saying so she acted like sobbing and with a smile she went to her room

maan's arrival in KM is always like a lion pacing in forest...he seen dadi sitting in cough in the hall...

dadi maa... yet didn't sleep...,, its already late...

sab ji...dadi maa is not yet take food and her medicine..

Is it true what happen dadi maa why you not taking care of yourself..

why should i maan... who is obeying me why should i take care
dadi ma what happen now???
if you are really very busy and don't have time to pick up and drop geet then why you commit your self in picking her up...there are more car and drivers in KM i can arrange some other alternative for her...why you made that bechari cry in front of others...

geet is hearing every thing from her room by placing her ear in the closed door she's really enjoying that dadi scolding maan

at confussed state asked dadi what..????i made geet cry...

yeah geet told every thing to me...she is crying from when she came..if college gets over soon means what's her mistake in that if you are really busy might have told her politely she will made some other arrangements but instead of that scolding her is not wise maan...

maan didn't speak any thing he knows very well its all geet's mischief what else he can expect form the girl who yet not letting his bed to him...yes yet he need to adjust himself in the couch in his room...which is not apt for his height...

he silently left the hall and went to his room where geet is enjoying the music from the music system by sitting in his bed...

maan made a entry by pushing the door which hits the wall with a loud noise..geet just blinked her eyes for his reacting she knows very well it would be his reaction after he speaks to dadi so she's well prepared for that...

he came near her and pulled her from the bed by holding her elbow...she is now very near to him its the first time she is very close to him she can see the his eyes is filled with anger which is turned red in anger by now...and his hold is very hard which cause pain to her...she turned her self from his face and started pulling out her arms from his grip...
he can hear the sound of his teeth gritted and his heartbeat...she's very fear of his attitude yet he fight with him all are very childish fights yet he is not very angry like this before her his attitude brought a little fear in her...

her heart beat is rising by now...when he 's is about to shout "gee..."
she closed her eyes tightly she can't bear any more of her anger...
he stopped seeing her fear and control his anger and stared to admire her beauty...

she's very close to him closing her eyes tightly in fear...
music system started to play a song...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vfvGrChLEn0..

he started to loose his grip in her hand and yet she didn't open her eyes
he smiled at her innocence and fear...yet he cant free her

he got a hold of her another hand which is resting in his chest...
and slightly he moved his hand to her face where her hair stands playing with her face near nose and lips...
his index fingure slowly removed her hairs from her face and moved it to her ear...his figure is touching her soft face very slightly
his touch made her feel comfortable and made her fear vanished and she opened her eyes he is looking straightly in to her eyes now...

now she didn't see any anger instead some desire is filled in his eyes she don't know what but yet she didn't move she like this closeness...
he can see no fear and hesitation in her eyes now...

they stand like this with out moving away from each others eye lock if the Rj voice didn't came after the song they might have not moved away from each other...
both got sense when RJ spoke after the song...geet immediately switch off the system...

both get embarrassed when they separated and didn't see each other after that.. as soon maan went to change his formals and slipped in his couch and geet in her bed...

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now
geet came searching maya to meera's house its already very late night... security knows geet very well so he allowed her inside after asking permission with meera...
meera is very happy to see meera there but geet is very disturbed and asked her about Maya 's health
Meera told every thing is normal nothing to worry and told her that maan left from there with maya before half an hour...

geet immediately left from there its not easy for geet to take that maya is with maan that too in the absence of geet
she know very well maan is also having equal right with maya as he is father of her...she also happy to see maya with maan but the thing which make her fear is after grown up maya decide to stay with maan means what will happen to her...

Maya alone is her for her now...she don't want to loose maya's love too as she already lost every thing including maan she don't want to miss maya's presence

already for the last few days she feel that maya is away from her...
maya now close with maan she can't bear his absence for a single day she needs him for every thing now a days

geet is scolding herself now for not being with maya #why i went to his room ?why i think of the past so only i am missing my Maya now..
she got fever too i didn't even notice that...Maan is very caring and take a good care of her...but me... if maya left me... what's there for me# she started to cry...
she misses maya' s presence now very badly...

Precap: more friends there to enter geet's life...

part 8

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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago

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TanuDDian

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

awesome part...

liked geet mischeif... how she acted b4 of dadima...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

oh poor maan nt yet got his trun to sleep in bed...🤣🤣🤣

continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: geetsweet
awesome part...

liked geet mischeif... how she acted b4 of dadima...🤣

oh poor maan nt yet got his trun to sleep in bed...🤣🤣🤣

continue soon...

oh thanks a lot i afraid of that exact scene you mentioned is not written well