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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one
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sounds interesting...plzz add me to ur pm list...
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intresting start
but if he didnt like her why had a daughter with her
and waiting for dadi'd plan to trap him
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Originally posted by: t_areeb

intresting start

but if he didnt like her why had a daughter with her
and waiting for dadi'd plan to trap him


if he didnt like her why had a daughter with her --both love each other but they are separated now due to some reason...

waiting for dadi'd plan to trap him--its as usual an emotional blackmail made by dadi to make him marry ...

Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Thanks a lot for all your support 🤗
Part 2
D:If you wanna go you can I don't stop you but i wont come from here i promised her parents that i will make her marry to you without doing that i wont leave from here... you may not care for keeping your dadi's promise but i need to keep my promise i will make her marry to some one else and then leave

M:smilled through the corner of his mouth through out her speech and said smilingly
OK then am leaving now

D:she gets angry now gave him a angry look to him and said I will be there for you till my death maan... after that what will you do who will take care of you after that..

he's really shocked to hear that word death dadi don't ever talk like this to him she knows that she is the most important person in his life she don't want to hurt him by saying these words to him but she really cares for him now its not just a word its her inner fear now came out in words

maan turned towards her and see her with painful eyes it really hurts him his eyes filled with tears but he controlled him self from letting it come out he hates crying but he can't bear her words he don't want to hear that word ever he said
STOP IT DADI MAA with an angry tone

D: its the fact maan beta i cant stay with you forever i must go one day...
he run towards her like kid and hugged her and murmur near her ears
stop in dadi maa he broke the hug and said what you want now my marriage OK do it as you wish

Dadi gave a victorious smile to him

But under one condition don't ever spoke like this and don't compel me again to do any thing which i don't like

dadi nodes for yes with a smile and left

Its dusk now
he didn't able to take rest due to the sounds and noise created in the house
as per his condition dadi didn't compel him to meet the bride and bride also shows least interest in meeting the groom so its not consider by both the sides...

as per the grooms order the rituals and formalities of marriage is urged and the marriage ceremony ended soon both the families are happy.. she don't even know when he tied that black thread in her neck and when he kept sindur in her forhead every thing is over now saat phere bidaai every thing so soon...

she's separated from all her beloved ones and from her house now she's moving long away form her village the name board of the village is disappearing form her view she's staring blankly outside through the glass window through out the travel she didn't cry actually she didn't got time to cry.. every thing so soon maan is driving the car dadi left that place soon after there marriage get over to prepare for the further rasams in KM

They reached KM finally with out a word to each other actually they didn't even see each other properly they are least care to see each others face but they know whom they get married to

After reaching KM they are in there own world she didn't notice any thing around her only she can hear is dadi voice which is very consoling for her she just stare at things with out any thoughts

After all formalities and rasams he rushed to his room freshen up and get ready to visit sight where he should be there at 6AM but here itself its 5.30 AM he can't be late because maan is meant for punctuality after he went to sight he fully involved in his work and forget about his worst day that is yesterday

dadi make geet busy with some formalities for some time and started to talk to her about her family members there business introduced her to her friends and relatives in between she told every thing about maan his likes dislikes and also about his child hood activities geet listen to every thing patiently and dozed off soon as it seems to be very boring for her his life history is with no spice and colors for her...

after some time d dadi came to her room calling her name "Geeet beta"
she immediately wake up from the bed and stand straighten herself dadi take her to the parlour and murmur some thing to the incharge's ear...

Precap
: Maan and geet SR (as usual with out spice)

sorry for the grammatical and spelling mistakes i think its going to be the boring update yet plzzz comment me with your negative comments too which will help me to improve...

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sorry for skipping all the marraige rasams as its out of my knowledge i skipped all these things

part 3


Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Awesme update.waitng for next part
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Thanks to all once again for your comments and likes🤗


Part 3
flashback ends
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Now
maan remains in his past for some time its the sweetest part of his life he meets his geet after that his life changed a lot actually geet changed it a lot she's full of live she is the only reason for his smile she brings back his life she teach him what is love and how to be happy...
more over now she gave MAYA his love Maya his daughter she's the gift of there love...
when he lost in his own world about his past Nakool came and knock the door and said " sir doctor sab came"
"hmmm coming"
he went to dadi's room where geet is already sitting near dadi and holding her arms doctor checked dadi completely and said "her BP is alright now nothing to worry she will be fine and able to walk with in a week # he turned towards geet # said take care of her medicines and food make sure she eats properly #while saying he scan through dadi 's report#
dadi: geet is maya ok now
geet: ji dadi ma she's fine and now sleeping
Maan phone rings excuse me... dadi maa i will be back
saying this he left from there by attending call
Doc: geet where's her previous report
she thinks for a while before she says any think dadi spoke
Dadi: its in maan 's room beta (she calls nakool to get that from there)
she knows that geet wont go there she's staying nearly for 3 months yet she didn't go maan's room actually her's room before 1year
Nakool : dadi ma i searched it there completely but i didn't get that file
dadi: its waste to tell you people wait i came
doc: no Mrs.savitridevi don't strain
geet: pls take rest dadi maa i will go
geet went to that room after one year but she's didn't find any change there its all remained same as it...he's didn't change any thing even her wadrobe remains same she removed all her stuffs while going out but its filled with dress now the mirror with bindi which she left there after using it her ear rings is on the table where she used to keep
she gently touched every thing and finds he still remember every thing about her he still didn't forget any thing and she finally finds the report which he kept in his study table drawer and immediately leaves from there
when she reach dadi's room she sees maan is sitting in bed near dadi and holding her arms so she didn't go near dadi's bed stands closer to bed
doc: ummm every thing is normal she improved a lot still need some rest nothing else she will be normal very soon take a good care of her saying this doctor leave with nakool who is holding doctors bag..
dadi maa i have one important meeting with clients
teeke beta...you may go now am fine and maya also fine now right geet
sayin this she turned towards geet
Haan dadi maa...i will bring your dinner here ... after saying this she went to kitchen
after dadi finish her dinner geet made her to take medicine and sleep due to medicine effect and of her poor health she slept soon..
geet immediately asked nakool to clean the dirty plates and cover dadi properly with bed sheets and turned towards that report which she took from maan's room he's meant for perfection he don't want his stuff to be misplaced geet's knows it very well when they lived together
so she want to replace that report again she asked some servant to replace it first
geet: place this in sir room
ser: ji madam
she think for a while and called him again
geet: i will place it ...you go
ser: with confused tone ji madam ji
first she decide to not to visit his room again latter she cant stay with her decision its her's room too she want to go there and spend some time there its not just a room its the place where they fight make love played mischief with each other where she shared a good news about Maya's birth to him...
so she want visit it again once especially in the absence of maan...
she went inside the room touching its door she remember of there first night when she first enters this room this is not like this the bed is fully covers with rose petals
she thinks about her first visit in that room
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flash back...
after some time dadi came to her room calling her name "Geeet beta"
she immediately wake up from the bed and stand straighten herself dadi take her to the parlour and murmur some thing to the in charge's hear...
after a smile she started preparing geet

they started to the process of making her look more beautiful she usually don't concentrate in make up she like to be simple but it doesn't mean she don't like that make up she really enjoy doing all these stuff but she prefer only simple costume and make up its the only choice. she choose for her self finally her make session over she look herself in mirror she really looking very pretty

yet she didn't find her self more gorgeous like this she stand still in front of the mirror for long time yet she didn't allow to visit maan's room sorry sorry her room from now...

she's not aware of the things going to happen she didn't realize its all for her SR preparation she wait for some one to call her for dinner but none came for long time she is hungry by now so decided to go out of dadi room to have dinner

she success fully reached dinning hall and seen some fruits in the table so decided to have some fruits and went to room again she ate some apple and amused at the situation in the house dadi and all servants are busy in maan's room preparing there room for SR

she scan through some magazines there after some time dadi came

geet beta
ji dadi ma
you seems very tired beta go to your room and take rest
she straightly went to her room and at a glance she came to know what is all up to she paced there for some time and glance the room once she finds the room is most beautiful and perfect every thing is kept in proper place but color less expect the red rose petals filled in bed the the whole room seems to be color less

while glancing through room she noticed the picture of him in the wall hanging just above the bed
he's handsome good looking well educated and hot too..she glared at the pic for a while and said

geet what you thinking he's handsome but he's not yours
if you start falling for him now you will lost your dream what will happen to your dream..

she slapped her self and turned back there is a mirror and dressing table in front of the door she again adjust her saree once seeing the mirror and through this process the image of the pic is again got her concentration
her heart says he's the perfect match for her but her mind again didn't accept that.. he's very handsome and more hot too he will get some other sexy city girl he is not mine...am happy with my dreams i don't want to get into any relation ship now...

she fed up with waiting and dozed off soon in one side of the bed when the chillness increase she started covering up her with the bed sheets
he came late night and straightly went to his room there is no light he is don't want to switch on the lights as he knows the nook and corner of the room he freshen up changed to his night suits and fell in his another side of the bed
as he's very tired of continuous work so he 's very lazy to switch on the light to see where the fragrance came from immediately he fell on bed he feels the tickling sensation due the rose petals and switched on the bed light
what the hell is this who made this to my bed after seeing around he finds some one sleeping near him in his bed

precap:maya's introduction

part 4
sorry for the grammatical and spelling mistakes due to my limited knowledge...plzzz comment me with your negative comments too which will help me to improve...

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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Awesme dear.i only read half but was very impressd.iam readng reamaining as iam very much excited
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Originally posted by: maneetlover1

Awesme dear.i only read half but was very impressd.iam readng reamaining as iam very much excited


thanks a lot ...take your won time to read it fully and don't forget to give your feed back...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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like the flashback part where she is attracted towards him

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