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Posted: 14 years ago

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want to know what went wrong between their relnship...loved ur updates...read in 1 go

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: t_areeb
like the flashback part where she is attracted towards him

thank you ...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: arniindia5
want to know what went wrong between their relnship...loved ur updates...read in 1 go

Thank you...

want to know what went wrong between their relnship.---wait and watch😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: mysticangel
awesome update

thank god at least some like my update

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hi friends,
Thank you for all your support

NOTE:
you all like flash back more than Maya's part i think but
MAYA is more important here in this FF so please bear with me...

Edited by nishha - 14 years ago

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Part 3
Part 4

maan feels the tickling sensation due the rose petals and switched on the bed light what the hell is this who made this to my bed after seeing around he finds some one sleeping near him in his bed by hugging pillows and covering her face fully with sheets..

He immediately remembers his marriage and understand every thing soon..
His self thought:# where i should wake her up now and explain about the things that i can't accept his as my wife{he brings his hands to wake her up and stops then) no its not the right time to talk if she takes this to dadi maa means what will happen lets wait for the right time to explain her# he decided to make her under stand every thing in the morning and about to switch off the bed lamp she slowly turned towards him by removing sheets from her face in sleep

he seen her face for the first time very closely he mesmerized in her beauty
she having very light shades of make up he murmur to him self
dadi is right she's very pretty than he switched off the light and slept in another side of the bed

morning she wake up soon its her regular time to wake up as soon she get up she see him sleeping in another side of her bed
what the hell is this ?why he slept in bed ? why he can't sleep in that couch?what he thinks of him self?

by saying this she left from there and entered in to wash room freshen herself and return she dressed herself in the dressing room and came out yet he didn't wake up form his sleep she came out of dressing room her eyes suddenly falls on him

she saw him and said he's sleeping like kid and smiled at the corner of her mouth #if this marriage happens with my wish and he is my loving husband i might have gave him a wake up kiss right now he so cute while sleeping but while he wakes up always shouting at that bechara servants yesterday also he shouts at them# SARU she said that word little louder which makes him to move she started running from there and let relief breath after leaving the room..

Dadi waited for her down in the kitchen as the ritual she prepared some parata and dadi teaches her to prepare black coffee of his taste and she learned soon as she is aware of some basic things in cooking its easy for her to learn some other maan's favorite dishes too...

Dadi knows very well about her grand son and also about geet so she didn't expect them to be close with in a night she knows they need time so she take the initialization by pushing them to come closer as the first step she gave the coffee cup to geet and said

geet beta maan is having habit of taking coffee immediately after freshen up so go soon else he will shout

she again enters her room he is still sleeping but this time his face is very clear due to the beam of light coming from the balcony which has only glass door covering with curtain through the small opening in the curtains beam is entering in to room this light made his face very bright his pink lips and cheeks started glowing due to the light effect

she lost her self totally in his glowing face he made a slight moment by rubbing his eyes because of the irritation created by the sunlight to his eyes he slightly opened his eyes he can't see any thing clearly but the image of a women with coffee cup in her hand

he again rubbed his eyes hardly to get a clear view of her she's wearing a white saree with red border
#she's more pretty than yesterday she's look awesome in this saree#
he get up quickly form the bed and stand before her he stares her for a while

she extend her arms to him gesturing him to take the cup from her but he stares at her as he didn't understand her gesture because of her mesmerizing beauty latter he come to sense and took the cup in his hand
and after a while said

Thank you firmly to her..

as soon he get ready he moves to his office as usual skipping his break fast and shouting at servants for not keeping his things in proper place

she watched every thing from dinning table while chatting with dadi maa
he wear his favorite black and white formals and came down

bye dadi maa.
maan beta take your break fast and go
dadi maa i have an urgent meeting bye...

saying this he didn't wait for her reply and left from there...
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Now
Maan return to home after his work he first went to see dadi she is sleeping peace fully and no one near her.. he en quires servants about geet and all don't have any idea about her so he decides to went to his room but before going to his room he want to see Maya so before he climb steps he went to geet's room which is in down floor near dadi's room he make sure that geet is not inside and went near to maya who's is sleeping peace fully in her bed cuddling her favorite teddy in her arms
like this

she will remain very cute with this isn't how can maan move form there seeing his cute lovely baby like this

oops sorry yet maya introduction is not given right...

Maya is the main lead of this FF she is a 10 month old baby who is crawling well and trying to walk but she will stand by her own little legs by holding some thing.....

precap: geet searches Maya..

part 5

sorry for the grammatical and spelling mistakes due to my limited knowledge...plzzz comment me with your negative comments too which will help me to improve...

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Edited by nishha - 14 years ago