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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#231

O O Geet wants to destroy Khurana Capitals because it was the cause of her father's death...and what about Maan...the persons who can help him financially don't want to help him...

amazing update...thanx for pm

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

Huh...???

The last lines...???
What was that...???

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579908

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#233

WOW... What a twist ⭐️

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#234

nice update...so now geet wants to destroy Khurana Capitals because it was the cause of her father's death...waiting for the next part...

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krati

@krati5

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#235

ds ws sumthng out of blue... m shocked... uff... waiting for next part

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#236

i can understand geet not wanting to see the company flourish but its maan's game does she feel nothing at all for him?

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Amiiish

@Amiiish

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#237

Wow didnt see that coming, I mean the last few lines. What a twist, cant wait to find out her explaination to Emily. Seriously cant wait. Keep up the great work dear

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#238

STUPENDO FABULOUSLY FANTASTICAL 👏

All thou my first reaction was 🤣
It's comes as a wave of shock and I break into laugh next moment. Then I say why you are so shock? Don't you know who is the author of the story.

Didn't I just recently praised Geet being Maan's BB? Should I take my words back or it would be too haste to come to the conclusion.

I could understand Geet's statement she blames Sr Khurana for her father's absence. That's why she wants to destroy Khurana Capital. Now the table has turned and Maan is the operator, should I think that there is nothing in between them from Geet's side? Oh please tell me I'm wrong to think that. Love, hate, betrayal will this destroy all? I can't imagine how Maan will react once he finds out or he is well aware of this. He knows very well that Geet is the major share holder. He would not expect Geet to rescue him.

The surprise was there when Maan didn't realized that Geet has brains in finance he will know for sure once he finds out what she is up to.

Meeting with his mother, and his decision of utilizing personal assets to save his company. He is being emotional isn't he? Damini can feel the worse. Help Maan plz.

Gosh the head is spinning.

Sook your ending is always my starting of the comments...

Edited by Newdime - 13 years ago

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#239

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Edited by Newdime - 13 years ago