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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#211

part 33
wow now this is another twist...
Damini and Deshmukh are friends...
BTW
"You screw it up, I will destroy you."

who said this, Maan or Varun?
cont soon dear...

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#212

I wasn't expecting an update anytime soon Sooks. Again, good timing.

First part was of course hilarious. Jerks like Varun are perhaps the truly useless people in the society if left to act by their choice. They need constant ass kickers like Maan, Vikram and Mitalee so that they can be used. ;)

As for Maan's strategy, let us wait what you have in store. Declaring bankruptcy will be a total disaster of course but then I think Deshmukh deal will pull them out of this mess. How ironical that Maan has to now straighten up the mess he created himself. Too bad.

Cliffhanger again?? Sigh

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#213

What they say? Behind every successful man there is a woman. Right? Every back has a back bone and I feel Geet is one for Mr Maan. Beauty with brains, I have to agree on that...

Now what is the funda behind Damini ka anda...it was silly i know...

The moral of the story I read here is any dimwit could be the main assets to save ur rear if it has to be.

Deshmukh the reason he was following Maan around there must be a reason behind it. And now we see Damini Aunty in the picture.

I enjoyed the way Maan pulled Vikram's pants off...3 mints to take the major decision. Tick Tock Tick...fun to laugh. He is a big time Nautanki Eh...

So eagerly waiting how many more skeletons to come out...

Bravo...

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bhakbhartifan

@bhakbhartifan

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Where does Geet get all this information from? For a Doctor, she is really informed about so many matters.. Sometimes, I feel even thou geet and Maan have been apart so much, each decision Maan takes has been influenced directly or indirectly by Geet.
Emily was great as usual.. I really like her.. She is one of a kind..

Awesome update as usual.. Loved how the story is proceeding..

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640638

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#215

I feel that this is going to be too tough for Maan. Mommie dearest has it in her hands to help him, should he ask? That would mean forgiving her at some point; on the other hand everything is at stake here, not just his but whole company's future.O the tales you weave Sookie. Love all the characters. Here I thought Varun was a spineless character but even he had his day all three minutes of it. I know all artists live off of feedback that they receive but you have to agree that the majority of audience here me included would have a hard time understanding the workings of a mega company such as this. A lot is greek to us which is why the characters, their traits, their interactions etc are what makes them come alive for us. So if we don't "get it" sometimes, don't feel that as a slight. I would really take heart in the fact that even with something that is a hard subject for us we still persist in staying with your characters and try to get to their depths with you. If you wrote hormonal and physical stuff (not that there is anything wrong with it) I am sure you would have 400 to 500 likes and pages of comments but we are here for a better story and deeper characters and you can give it to us. Getting of my podium again. No offense to anyone.

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#216

ossum part dear

and pls show liitle romance between maaneet dear

we want to see geet and maan together for sometime

and the link which u are giving i cant open dear

hope once see and give

ossum update dear

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sanjh89

@sanjh89

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#217

BACK WITH A BANG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

U Know how to make your readers suffer...

again a fab update,,,,,,,,, Humor to begin with😛,,,,,,,,,,,,,Shock to end with😲...

So, Whn is nexxxttt????????????

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ninand

@ninand

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#218

I was watching Parks and recreation and 'this' made me jump here in haste and post it😆 , of course for no particular reason😆

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-kbHGPXcG1w

Edited by ninand - 13 years ago

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: ninand
I was watching Parks and recreation and 'this' made me jump here in haste and post it😆 , of course for no particular reason😆

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-kbHGPXcG1w

Ofcourse... 😆

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#220

Hey sookie, i just recently started reading your ff, and was addicted till i got to chapter 30. Its awesome. The way it flowed, and the relation between the characters, getting better or worse as time went. I enjoyed every part of it. The mystery and its gradual revelation, wow. Now i cant wait to see if maan will succeed or not. A well done job. Another thing i got to learn quite some things from ur ff, and for that i heartily thank you. I can just imagine the amount of time it might have taken you to think, research and all that t give us such a fab story, so a big thank you! I love your writing.
Could you pls include me in your pm list?

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