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bhakbhartifan

@bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

OMG... no idea how to respond to this update.. Maan is trying to save the company whereas Geet is trying to destroy it..

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harshithaaaaaaa

@harshithaaaaaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

another wonderful update...geet's father died because of KC is it the reason why geet want to destroy KC completely...geet and maan are in opposite poles for first time, geet want to destroy KC and maan want to save Kc at any cost...continue soon dear...waiting eagerly...

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

omg !

is geet betraying maan

pls dont do that dear

i cant take that

i want maaneet to be one

i know in ur ff we cant see them as one for most of the time dear

but atleast in this i want them as one

dear

cant see them parting

pls dear

and pls so liitle romantic scenes between them dear

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Uthra

@Viji79

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

Geet is turning out to be the key player in the game...cant wait for the next update.

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febinyusuff

@febinyusuff

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

that was totally unexpected Sookie...

Can't wait to read more.. please cotninue soon.

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

WhaaaT????? WHy is that? Is it cuz that was the company that caused Pratap's death?? Holeh moleh!! Sooks - your busy dropping bombs left right n center!!

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

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Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Ohhh!!

So will it boil down to Maan v. Geet?

Or will it still eventually be Maaneet v. Rest as I had anticipated?

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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#248

awesome...

does maan know what geet is thinking...y do i think he knows...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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Murlal

@Murlal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

Sookie,
This is terrifc.
I always knew there was more than met the eye with Deshmukh and I was waiting for that to come out.
But G wanting to destroy the business- well, that was a shock. So there's more to G than meets the eye, but why do I feel that G's intentions come, not from any hatred or malevolence or ill will.
Given the G we've seen so far there is another, most likely, an honorable motive behind her intentions.
I can't believe that, having been through all that she has, she has not reflected and worked on herself and her circumstances. She could not be where she is if she had not. Even though she is hurting, she is in a space above and beyond the meaninglessness of (a) destroying something and (b) destroying something in hatred or revenge.
I could be very wrong but my gut instinct tells me otherwise.

Edited by Murlal - 13 years ago

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#250

I am feeling terribly nostalgic today; nostalgic about Lapsus Linguae.
Not sure why the words from the FF have been buzzing in my mind since late afternoon.

I miss that writing. I miss writing without any sort of a major storyline - just about people and their thoughts...
Especially after I read this verse (from Chapter 4)

Order in chaos, silence amidst noise;

light in middle of darkness and ripple in a stand still lake.

His words cutting and piercing,

make the sweetest melody.

A distant fire whose heat make me sweat

And wraps me in its sweet melancholy.

On a break from writing today...

-Sigh-

Link, In case anyone is interested.

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1251290

Edited by -Sookie- - 13 years ago