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Shalve

@Shalve

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

congrats on yr new thread...superb update...loved it

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Congrats for the new thread...

Awesome...

Loved the lunch part...

Maaneet n Maya's convo was emotional...

I dont understand are they really boyfriend - girlfriend...??
I'm confused...

Ohh...he kissed her...

Updt soon.
Thanks for the pm.

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

eeek HAILA! omg my expectations are building Sookie is becomeing spooky in her handling of maaneet relationship... i beg of you not to burst that bubble i love spookiness u get it?? 😃

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harshithaaaaaaa

@harshithaaaaaaa

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

wonderful update...

nice...

so will dileep accept proposal...

pratap some had feeling that maan will become CEO...wow...

that's so good when some one had belief that he will reach greater heights in future...👏

we r getting some interesting facts about past...

waiting for past to be relived fully...

what might be reason for pratap's death...

why dileep feel that after past is out geet will hate him...

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Lonely.Cat

@Raina123

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

congratz on the new thread sookie

love the update ...everything about it

looking frwrd to the next installment

loving it

raina

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640638

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

nice update. I like growing up with your characters.

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Congrats for the new thread !!!

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richiiiii

@richiiiii

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

awesome update sookie😊

loved it

but when did they become boyfriend-girlfirend...as in committed.. did i miss anything😕

however

!!!!they kissed☺️

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

lovely update . loved the convo btw maan and dileep .

Pocket watch is more personal and is private from the world's eyes. The beauty and the time belong only for the owner to see and not to anyone else. You develop a close bond with it, though unwilling at first. It stays close to you, the gentle clicking sounds reminds you of the past that was, future that is going to be and the present that is." Pratap replied, serenity taking over the two men.

loved the analogy of pocket watch .really , it is so private and personal belonging of the owner .i was always so fascinated from gandhiji pocket watch and today you really made so special by giving its analogy .loved it and great going .