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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

congratulations on your new thread...

and fantastic update ⭐️

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

congratulations on your new thread...
loved the update...little emotional part...
waiting to know the next...

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Mansi Roy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Great one again!! Loved the convo between Pratap and Maan, Maya and Maan, and the sweet suprise for us at the end 😳

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Woot! Woot! New thread! Shaheda di, not fair!! 😛 Haha..

Great update, Sookie! That meeting with Maya was unexpected, but touching. That Venkat is a fishy character, who was he talking to at the very beginning of this journey. Maan's keeping him out of the business is a smart move. The end of this chapter... LOVED it! Can't wait to read Geet's reaction and what she thinks about Maan's rationality.

Thanks for the update, Sookie!

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Shaheda

@Newdime

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
Woot! Woot! New thread! Shaheda di, not fair!! 😛 Haha..

Great update, Sookie! That meeting with Maya was unexpected, but touching. That Venkat is a fishy character, who was he talking to at the very beginning of this journey. Maan's keeping him out of the business is a smart move. The end of this chapter... LOVED it! Can't wait to read Geet's reaction and what she thinks about Maan's rationality.

Thanks for the update, Sookie!

Krish...my girl...where are you? You are like a morning star...

All is fair in love and war Girl friend? 😉 😆

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-Deepzz-

@-Deepzz-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Congratulations for the second thread 🥳

Loved the impromptu lunch between Sr. and Jr Khurana ..Man Dileep got the shock of his life...His son is far more ruthless than him.😆...The student becomes the master 😛

I loved the contrast you brought between Dileep and father figure Pratap...who knew 'Son' Maan's capabilities better than the one who sired...

Maan must be a a very good BF 😛...he even advises Satya on relationships 😆...Thanks for the kiss...waiting to see how Geet reacts ...Fab Update Sookie 👍🏼

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

congrats 4 da new thread

amazin update luvd it

👏👏👏

fanx 4 da pm plzz cont soon x

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Ok Sooks, I'm about 10 updates into the FF.

The story so far has great momentum, and I love the way you have incorporated the technicalities of mergers and acquisitions and all the under the table financing that happens with ruse companies.

Well, I can only hope I can take the weighty stuff coming my way. Special mention goes to the part where Maan and Geet are only kids and talking about the death of the rabbit.
It takes real talent to write for any character under 12 years and I love the scene.

Borrowing from Bridget Jones (again)...

Sookie is nothing, if not a perfectionist.

If I want crisp details I always find myself reading one of your OS/FF/SS...
With that, I take leave and meet you after I make it through a few more updates.

Hasini