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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

First of all--

CONGRATS

FOR

NEW THREAD

It was emotional update...Maan got pocket watch from his godfather as a gift. He knows the value of gift...he knows what Pratap expects from him...

thanx for pm

Edited by tushti-kiran - 14 years ago

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Shaheda

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Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Updated my post on pge 1...😊

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Tyro

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

congrats on the new thread...

finally a new maan in the making...

thnx for PM...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

wonderful 👏

first kiss 🥳

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meenu

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Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

congrats on a new thread!!
loved the update

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Deepa

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Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

congrats on new thread dear...

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basicquestion1

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Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Lovely read. Thanx for the update n Congo shongo on the update.

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cloudflower

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

congrtulations on new thread loved the update thanks for the pmcontinue soon

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362035

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

awesooome.
fab..
superb..
wonderful...
loved the upd.
cont.soon...
thanx for the pm.
take care...

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Deepa

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

part 28
wow that was awesome...
i did find some scenes sentimental...
wow Dileep is thinking how Maan became so ruthless...
good joke...
hes forgetting he is his father...
some traits Maan sure had to get...
now Maan will his ways without any meddling or interference...
wow Pratap felt Maan will one day meet up to his expectations and Maan sure did...
the last scene was fantastic...
cont soon dear...

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