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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys ...i wont be continuing for 2 days i guess cuz i am going out with my family ...on a 2 day vacation ..so hope u guys wouldnt be getting ur guns and daggers eady to kill me.. 😛 ok
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Heloo everyone ..u guys must be thinming that pehle waali ff bhi aisi thii ..laikin guys iam really sorrry i really dont get time to write the parts but this weekend iam sure i will write the stuff in my note book umnm well alot of it and then will gradually update it ..iam really tryingmy best ..but the whole week i get so busy .and on the weelends i fell like doing nothing ..so plzzzzzzzz frogive me and ill continue sooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww itz okay...i understand...i get very lazy on weekends too...buh dun worrie bout it...continue wen u can...buh dont take too long..lol
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hellow shellow people ill be writing the part today inshallah and ill post it soon enuff ok so stay hooked
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Posted: 19 years ago
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HEY guys ...hor u i will post the next part tomm inshallah but i wanted to ask u all something ..i wanted to change the name of the fan fic ..should i name it ankahi or should it stay the same?/..ankhai becouse there arealot things unsaid in the fan fic eh ..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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HEY guys ...how r u i will post the next part tomm inshallah but i wanted to ask u all something ..i wanted to change the name of the fan fic ..should i name it ankahi or should it stay the same?/..ankhai becouse there are alot of things unsaid in the fan fic eh ....and iam sure the next part would be longer and wont disapoint u ..and would make up for the days i havent continued 😆 😉 😊
ciao for now
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its good so pleease continue sooonn
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 13


As Alizay cuddled against Angad on a warm Sunday evening leaving Angad question himself ask himself again and again ,…. Is it possible to find her?

It was the beginning of the 3rd year when Alizay was brought home and exactly 2 and a half years since Angad started the search for her respective family. A year ago Angad found out that 3 out of 4 people from her family passed away in a harsh accident. he went to her old house and inquired about anyone else in the family who would like to take the responsibility and custody of her, but while he was there he wanted to runaway and hide Alizay somewhere no one could find her. They would stay happily ever after playing ludo and piggy back,leaving other half of him say "NO" its not right what if someone comes and creates problems afetrall she would there's more than mine.So he decided he will look for "HER" the lady mentioned by the servant at the house.he will have to go himself because of the problems with the visa and the legal matters with Alizay.

Angad named the litte girl Alizay because 3 yrs back whenever he would call her by her original name she wouldn't respond but when Alizay was said she trun around with glowing eyes..Alizay called him 'Daddy' for some reason.despite of everyone telling her that he ANGAD KHANNA isn't her daddy she would frown for a matter of 2 seconds and then continue on saying it.Angad couldn't deny he loved it a lot himself, being called 'daddy' by an adorable angel like Alizay was definitely something any man or woman would await.to wrap it all up he was her daddy and she was 'daddy's angel'.that was the thote which wrapped all those negative thoughts up and that was all he cared about ,the fact that he was her daddy and she was daddy's JAAN..

After twisting and turning on the bed for about an hour he sat up staright on his huge bed with hazel brown eyes wide open and a head of thick brown messy hair.sighed,stood up and walked across the room to the left side where his desk stood, sitting on the chair for awhile motionless trying too relax his mind.he had no clue but something inside was worried,worried about an unkown fear about something he couldn't pin point.Longed for someoneto talk to,to sharehis feelings with,to tell 'THAT SOMEONE' about how he spent all these years oh …how much he longed for someone beside him,hug him,to please him,pamper him,tease him on simply nothing and love him.hug him kiss him whenever 'that' person felt like not him.

Placing his hands at the back of his head like his head was a warm cup of coffe in it and wanted to keep the mug from falling with wanting to keep their hands warm aswell.With a sudden urge to look at the year books of hish school aswell as the university,his hand moved toward the lamp without letting him know ,switched it on dragged open the brown coloured drawer,second from the top.moving his hand towards the books and ulled out one of them which apparently was his highschool's.

The grip on the black coloured book was loose which allowed it to kiss the floor,the book fell with a loud thud.papers flew all over the floor.the fan on the white ceiling gave the papers another chance to move around and check out the room,scream out the past to the whole world.

As Angad toured the whole room collecting the papers,Alizay woke up crying,Angad placed all of the belongnings on the desk and a paper weight on top of it .on the way to the side of Alizay he switched the fan off,sat beside her and stayed there until she was deep in the world of dreams when she didn't utter a single word he knew she had a bad dream …after reassuring that she was fast asleep he stood up but realizing ,Alizay was holding the sleeve of his white cotton kurta.smilling at the kid before him he freed his hand from the tiny grasp and walked back to his desk..

Walking back to the bed with a load of 10 letters in his hands seemed like forever. He couldn't wait till he read all those letters after 8 years he had locked away everything which reminded him him of her.

After almost 8 years he went to his old room,sitting on the rocking chair just staring at the room,slowly drifting away from the real world.



😳😆Long time i continued eh!! well here is the part enjoy it ..and will write the next part soon inshallah..and [FYI] current age of angad is=28 and kripa's age is 27..the next important think i wanted share was that should i chnage the name of the ff to ankahee?? eep the comments coming and do tell me abt the name hopw u like the part ciao


-HANIA

Edited by Hania baweja - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice!!!! now i wanna no his past.. please update soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i think that little angel is neha lol i m 100% sure well gr8 job just fionished readin this ff n i must say its superb
continue soon

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