'Unkahe Pal[ finally back chk last pg] - Page 6

Hello ppl..me is ver very sorrie for not continuing this fanfic for like amlmost 3 weeks eh ..but i haev been planning for a very big twist and ine ssare different ideas arahe hain ke bas ..lol ....and i planned to add a twist to the fanfic in the next part kyounke ..main itni bbhi buri nahi hoon 3 weeks se contniue nahi kiya ..aur ab jab karrongi ..tho ..just that plain boring thingi so iam gonna add a twist to it ...and to make u guys think ...brain kis liye hai haan??lol
acha so iam stil discussing it with nabby ..so i will post the part tomm inshallah
and
sorie
again
so ....socho and post ur guesses until then ok
byeeeeeeeeee
luv ya guys..
😆 😳 😳

iam sorrie guys i told u that iwill update todaii but unfortunately i cant becouse iam going out ..ill try and do it when i cum baq

😃 Hey guys ..how r u?...sorry for keeping u guys up for aloooooooooooooooooooong long time eh ..ok but here is BIG update ...here it is which will make up for those 3 weeks ..and leave u guys thinking and i hope u guys like it 😆

PART 11

samain yun he chalta hai
saman yun badalta hai
chupa chupa rehta hai
meri yadoon main koi
din ke saray pehroon main
sham ki udasi main
raat kay andheroon main
yaad ata hai koi
jhuki jhuki ankhoon main
ruki ruki sansoon main
kaisai janoo yaar pyar kay
kaisay kaisay rang raag hain

hooo oooo hooo oooo hooo oooo ooo
hooo oooo hooo oooo hooo oooo ooo

lagta hai kay jaisay koi ass hai koi pass hai
saiya hai usi ka ya kai mera hi ehsas hai

lagta hai kay jaisay koi ass hai koi pass hai
saiya hai usi ka ya kai mera hi ehsas hai
dil kehta hai woh jo bhi hai
meri ankhoon main abb aaa basay
ab dil say milay uss dil ki lay
aur sur say uska sur milay
jhuki jhuki ankhoon main
ruki ruki sansoon main
kaisai janoo yaar pyar kay
kaisay kaisay rang raag hain
hooo oooo hooo oooo hooo oooo ooo
hooo oooo hooo oooo hooo oooo ooo

chahta hoon pochoon kai tu kon hai kia nam hai
khwaboon main jo ati hai muj say tera kia kam hai

chahta hoon pochoon kai tu kon hai kia nam hai
khwaboon main jo ati hai muj say tera kia kam hai
teri ankhoon main jo raaz hai
meray dil nay usko pa lia
teray hontoon pay nahi kiu aeya
woh geet jo main ne ga lia
jhuki jhuki ankhoon main
ruki ruki sansoon main
kaisai janoo yaar pyar kay
kaisay kaisay rang raag hain
hooo oooo hooo oooo hooo oooo ooo
hooo oooo hooo oooo hooo oooo oo

Angad entered Bombay at 12 in the afternoon. He was driving through the busy and the most chaotic roads of Bombay. The city to fulfill one's dreams, that's where he came to pursue his dream. To become a singer. all these streets awakened all those memories which were "locked" in the "safe" of his heart, he was just too scared to let it all out, too scared to face it. After all what happened he never dared to come back to Bombay, it just never felt right.
But now here he was again in the world of fantasies. he had to come here for his dadi and a concert. Angad's car entered a beautiful white Victorian style bungalow. The gates were black wrought iron. He got out of the car and walked through the heavy metal doors. After 20 mins Angad was sitting with a man his age. Laughing on something. This is Josh Angad's best friend since childhood. They are 2 souls in one body, Josh and Angad's parents were really close friends, but in an accident josh's parents died josh was brought up by the khanna's but in spite of him calling them ma and papa Aaliyah was never like a sister to him. They were childhood lovebirds, in a way they knew that they both liked each other, but in a way both of them were clueless.
"So Angad… Aaj ma se baat hui thi," said josh.
" Oh really! That's not fair, lagta hai sirf tuhmhi unke bete ho:Angad said teasingly
"Haan tumko rooz dhek dhek ke maa ki aaknkhen khaarab hogayi hain na, aur phir she loves me more u knw" josh said playing along.
"Haah in your dreams" said Angad
"acha khairr," said josh, putting the empty glass on the table in front of him
"haan yaar.. show kitne baje hai?" Angad asked josh.
"7 baje, you hav plenty of time" josh replied galancing at his watch.
Angad wqaas in his room reading a book when josh entered his room, knocking the door.
"oh josh you don't hav to be so formal" Angad said putting his book away. Jjosh just smiled and sat down forcing Angad " I just receivesd a call from mr Sharma. He was suppose to organize your show but unfortuanly for some reason the show is cancelled."
"what?.. laikin how can he do dat? At thevery last moment!" Angad said getting furious.
"yaar chorna.. kuch kehne se kya faida? Look at the birght side.. dadi ko surprise dete hian.. call" josh told Angad

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Kripa was sitting in the living rom worried sick. She stood up and started pacing the floor back and forth. When Aaliyah entered the house, with a guilty look pasted on her face.
When Kripa saw her, not able to contril her self startesd souting.
"Kidher thiin aap?"
"Wo.. Di…" Aaliyah tried to explain
"Wo di kya haan! Time paata hai kya ho raha hai? Phone kyun nahi kya? Uss main iss larki ka kya karron! Ek din heart attack ajaye ga mujhe iss ki wajah se" hald of the stuff, kripa said to herself.
Aaliyah knew Kripa cannot get mad at anyone.
"Khaana khaalo.. table pa rakha hai" Kripa said—acting as if she is still mad. As Aaliyah sat beside Kripa stuffing herself with the daal chawal Kripa cooked.


Angad sneaked into a house through the back door. Walking through this hallway always made the old memories come alive in his mind,. Entering a beautifully but simply decorated room made him realize that he was in his dadi's house. Angad knew it but the feeling of her dadi there just struck him. Angad was extremely close to his dadi, evnen thouhgh josh was his best friend he would tell him everything but dadi would know his littlest secrets.
We see an old lady sitting in chair reading a book Angad tip toes to her and puts his hands on her eyes. The lady has a smile on her face as she feels the hands on her face, she touches them and turns around. "mera acha waala bacha agaya" said the lady kissing his hands
This is Devyani Khanna, mother of Dilip Khanna. She loves both her grandsons but her favorite one is Angad. "Haan dadi main agaya. Aaj aapka birthday hai naa. Haapppy birthday dadi". Saying this Angad hugs her after 10 min they both were sitting around the dining table eating the signature dadi sponge cake. "Dadi aap itna acha cake kyun banatai hain?" asked Angad with a mouthful of cake. "takay meraa beta kha sake" dadi replied lovingly. After they were done eating, dadi went to make tea in the kitched. Angad went to his room and got his cell phone.

Kripa was watching kyun hogaya naa. Tomorrow was Aaliyah kripa's off, it's a long weekend. Aaliyah was eating ice cream now sitting beside her when the phone rang. "Hello" Kripa said receiving the phone calls
"Hi" said the caller
"May I speak to Aaliyah please: said the caller again.
"Of course but may I know who is speaking?" asked Kripa
"Yeah this is her bro Angad. And who is this?" replied a cheerful Angad,
"Oh hi. Angad how are you? This is Kripa," she said
"Hi…I am fine thank you, what abt you?" he asked respectfully
"Yeah Iam good, here ill give the phone to Aali" she said.
That's how they used to talk and Angad would just keep thinking "agar iss ki awaz itni pyaari hai to khud kaisi hogi" whenever Angad would call Aaliyah on her cell phone it would be turned off so he would call at home and Kripa would pick it up even though talking all these months on the phone should change their way of talking to each other but no they will were as formal as the first time they spoke to each other.

Kripa handed the phone to Aaliyah who was still eating the ice cream.
"Hello bhai… kaise ho?" Aaliyah said licking the spoon
"sont hello bhai me ok !" Angad said switching his tone to the angry one.instantly aaliyahs spoon fell from her hand and she sat back straight.

"arey bhai kya hogaya…?"Aaliyah asked getting abit scared by his "DAANT"
"aapko yaad hai kuch..aaj kiya date hai?" Angad asked her getting furious even though he didn't want to and he wasn't mad either but to show her he just had to change hid tone.
"Umm…haan aaj 19th august hai naa".. After the words poured put of her mouth she realized what she had forgotten; and bit her tongue.
"Haan aur jaise aaj tho kuch hota hi nahi hai naa" Angad questioningly said
"Oops..iam so sorry bhaiyya..who aaj itne saare kaamon mein main bhool hi gayi.." she said she had to say it because Angad was very possessive abt "his Dadi"
"Acha lao dadi se baat karado" Aaliyah practically requested him as if after all this he wouldn't let her speak to her.

After the call Aaliyah plopped back on the couch next to Kripa
"how was the DAANT?" asked Kripa teasingly.
"kya ..Kripa…. aap bhi!" Aaliyah said getting sad.
"Array main to sirf mazaaq karrahi thi, sorry" Kripa said apologetically, making acute face, holding her ears.
Aaliyah's face went aww and hugged her.

*----------------------------------------------------*

it was Saturday and Angad was on his way back to Dhradun. Angad felt sad because dadi couldn't come but its ok she'll be with him week later, plus josh is there to take care….. NO …Dadi is there to take care of him. That stupid josh. Angad just smiled thinking about his family.
Angad was out of the city's rush and on to the high way when it started raining cats and dogs, it was almost midnight 11:30 and Angad was in the middle of nowhere, but luckily last year Angad bought a cottage here. Why a cottage so far away and in a middle of nowhere. Well he had some reasons for that too. Its because…no. I will not let my mind wander to that side of reality, he reminded him self.
Angad didn't want to drive at thi hour so he decided to go to the cottage, parking the car he ran towards the cottage sheltering himself from the rain by holding his button down over his head but the wind blew it away.
THE "BHEEGNA" in the "BAARISH" caused moisture in his eyes.
Avoiding all of it he headed for the cottage but something stopped him from moving ahead. He took a step back and found a little girl about 4/5 years old sitting on one of the steps in the corner all soaked wet and shivering. Without thinking once he walked over to her, took the little angel in his arms and walked inside.

As he walked through the door and into his bedroom a lot of questions popped in his mind, who is she? Where did she come from? Where two of them
First he laid the girl down on the bed and looked through Anu's clothes from some of the clothes she left here and Angad dried her and made her change clothes. After getting himself washed up he sat down beside the kid who was now fast asleep; thinking.

hmmm so how was it??....who is the girl??.. post ur views..
byeee

omg!!! is the girl who i think she is???? hai rabba, i am soooo excited now!!! gr8 work hania, really very well written!! n i love the twists u have put in...... my prediction: nahin abhi nahin, kuch aur parts baad 😉 !!!!take care n cont. soon

great part plz cont soon! who's the girl?

Hey guys ..how r u all doin?!!..hmm sorrie for not updating for a long long time ...laikin i have to study for my examz which start next week so plllllzzzz wish me luck lol ...hmm my examz end on the 20th so i will try to update then but im not sure if ill be able to cuzz iam leaving for pakistan on the 25th and that is for good so ....i have to pack all the stuff up laikin ...i will try ..iss ka matlab yeh nahi ke i wont update before i leave ...iam gonna try my best and it shall be a longer part with a few twists and surprises...ok....hmm

Anyone whos having examz ..GOOD LUCK ....and STUDY guys lol ..kk keep on guessing who the girl is and what will angad do ..and reply baq..
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
and take care
-Hania 😳

ur leaving for pakistan for GOOD??!?!?...r u sure ur goin to adjust their ezly? r u sure ur not goin to miss Toronto/Mississauga...ne wayz good luck on ur exams. My exams r also around da corner 😭 ne wayz. I can't wait till u continue ..k Later

Nida 😊

good luck for ur exams, my exams finish on the 20th too! have fun i n pak u lucky girl! and its ok cont when u can!