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purplelolo

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Posted: 19 years ago

#61

Hi aww..guys thnxz for ur support ...ill try my best to type the part up this weekend but if i cant then sorry in advance and yeah muqualp good luck for ur exams.... and kneeduh ...yes i will adjust surely i will lol ..so which school do u guys go to??...lol

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Nida Chaudhry

@kneeduh2000

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Posted: 19 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Hania baweja
Hi aww..guys thnxz for ur support ...ill try my best to type the part up this weekend but if i cant then sorry in advance and yeah muqualp good luck for ur exams.... and kneeduh ...yes i will adjust surely i will lol ..so which school do u guys go to??...lol

Good u'll adjust..i go to St. Joseph, how bout u?

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himani

@Sour Skittles

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Posted: 19 years ago

#63

good luck everyone hope you scoe goooooodd 😃

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purplelolo

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Posted: 19 years ago

#64

hey hmm nida i go to rick ..im sorry i couldnt ..becuz i have a math exam tomm ...soriiiee nida..i thought i wud ...sorrie 😭

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vidhi

@vidhi_rocks

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Posted: 19 years ago

#65

hey read ur fanfic really amazing....
and 4 tht gurl a weird guess but i thnk it may be neha...maybe not bcoz how will she b there and upon she 2 died in the car accident na?also kripa wld never 4get her>................lolz really confused
HOPE U CONTINUE SOON

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purplelolo

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Posted: 19 years ago

#66

+Hey guys thanks for waiting for so long ....yeah its been a while I posted but here Iam back with my new part .
There were several reasons for not continuing... such as (aisa lag raha hai koi exam ka answer likh rahi hoon lol)

1) I couldnt write my fanfic ...becouse I couldnt let it out into words..It was difficult to express, besides knowing what to write and what the characters had to do next shaping my thoughts into words was not easy and it took a bit of time.

2) Some part of it was laziness...

The 3rd reason and from which i could easilty get away is that i had exams ....

The 4th reason is that i was travelling and the jet lag or is it jet lack??...lol..so here iam sitting in my khala's rooom typing ..yup frnds iam in Pakistan woohoo lol...ok and yeah its extremely hot in here so i have to think a 100 times before going outside...
anyways over with my "DUKHI DASTAAN" lol and now I hope you all like my new part and plz this time post some comments .

"Sirf Yeh Nahi Likhna Ke haan Achi Thhi Plz Continue Soon Cuz That Is The Last Thing U Guys Would Wanna Write From Now On..LOL KYOUNKE ...You Guys Have A Resposnbility From Now On... What U Have To Do Is Tell Me What I Have Done Wrong And Need Improvment In ..".

are we ok with all the above??
shall we proceed with our new part??
ok..ok i wont take anymore of your precious time and sunao u my kahani ..here i go with it..again hope u like it.

Right now all he cared about was this girl still shivering from the cold outside.He checked her forehead which was now burning.15 mins later Angad sat in the fully lit room with a bowl of ice sold water and peices of cloth in it.He took off the lime green coloured comforter form the gril and started putting the "PATTIYAN" on her feet , forehead and the neck so the fever gets low.He was up the rest of the night nursing the little angel.Every now and then checking her forehead,making sure she was confortable,tucking the blanket.After 12 the fever got really high so Angad started putting "THANDE PAANI KI PATTIYAN".

As the sun starteed to rise it filled the room with light and made Angad wake up.He streched and looked around the room which was looking as it was 5 years ago.Those same pictures on the wall, the same bed,everything was the same except for him.He changed,he had changed big time,he was afriad to let everything out,even to look for her "AGAIN" that is.those hazel brown eyes welled up with tears so he practically ran out out of the room.

The sun was bothering the girl,twisting and turning she finally found a position she was comfortable in.Angad was standing in the patio with tears rolling down his cheeks, did anyone know? could anybody think, only in 2hrs only 2hrs his whole life changed,His whole life .Who knew what that day would bring....it started off as a normal day...a cry mad him come out of his thoughts and he ran inside the huse.As he walked past the kitchen and living room and came closer to the bedroom the cry changed into a scream.thats when Angad sprinted,entering the room huffed and puffed finding the girl nowhere he got scared and forgot that he had been cryin,he forgot that his muscles hurt and started looking for her.He checked in the bathroom first; no luck running his hand through his hair,he walked towards the window and to his surprise he saw the little girl crouched behind the dresser,tears rolling down her cheeks,with fear in her eyes.He felt his heart stopping,trying his best to pick up the girl hesitated and her eyes made Angad stop in the place he was.

Defeated he went outside in the patio thinking;probably later.probably she needs sometime alone,to collect herself and her thought in place.but why was she so scared? her eyes full of fear.who could harm this cute little angel.who could be so heartless.later the girl interrupted Angads thoughts by cming outside and throwing her tiny arms around the giant man ..a stranger but still she felt like it a if she knew him.and Angad smilled cuzz he knew she wanted to say sorry."hmmm... toh now you know i wont hurt you right"he said touching the girls nose with his index finger who was now sitting on his lap busy playing with his other hand.

hmm so do reply now ok bye ppl

Edited by Hania baweja - 19 years ago

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hershii

@Smileyface

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Posted: 19 years ago

#67

hey tht was really good....u need to continue soon cause i realy wanna know why angad was crying and who is this grl...can i take a guess though???...i think it is prithvi and mishtis daughter...well to c if i m rite or wrong u need to continue so plzz hurry up and dont take too long like last time...lol.. 😊 😊 😊

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soaps_01

@soaps_01

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Posted: 19 years ago

#68

hey

I just finished reading the fanfic and its really good! I think the little girl is neha! But wouldn't kripa notice that her body was missing in the hospital and in the funeral? I really want to find out what is happening so...
...plz cont soon