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purplelolo

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Posted: 19 years ago

#81

hey guys read the title page i changed it ....hope u guys like it and yeah i will continue this weekend and yeah u guys are in for a treat.

luv ya guys lol
and yeah hug
-HAnia

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anon343

@Anon12378

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Posted: 19 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Hania baweja
hey guys read the title page i changed it ....hope u guys like it and yeah i will continue this weekend and yeah u guys are in for a treat.

luv ya guys lol
and yeah hug
-HAnia

i love treats do continue soon 😃

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Divjot_10

@Divjot_10

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Posted: 19 years ago

#83

Hey Hania,
I just finished reading ur ff. And man its good. Trust me girl I really enjoyed reading ur hard work. 👏 👏 👏 I love the story. Man the events the two have had in past are really getting me curious to keep reading ur ff. And i think u r gonna continue after hecka long aren't u!! Hope u had a great vacation and i think u r back at school. Aren't u??? Well Good Luck and plzzzzzzzzzzz i can't wait to read more of ur story. Good Luck and Bye!!
Divjot 😃

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purplelolo

@purplelolo

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Posted: 19 years ago

#84

Hey pple ..how r u all and how was the first week of school aall ur fav subjects this semester??...ok here is the part and ill post the treat some time late ..and yeah the part will we LONG

PART 14

Anjali was walking around the house worried looking for Angad.the last thing she could think of was about his room,the old abandoned room.but here feet took her there,not wanting to though the way Angad came in here.Shocked yet pleased Anjali entered the room carefully,trying not to startle Angad she placed her soft glass bangled hand on his shoulder.
Despite if her being so careful Angad cried "Alizeh" getting startled.Anjali's hazel brown eyes welled up with the salty water,walking in front of him placing her hands on his knees she kneeled down and cupped his face .Half of her happy upon him unlocking the room and half sad.After a 2 min silence he placed her hands on her lap and walked away leaving Anjali staring at the half open door he just exited through.
Looking at Angad who was sitting on his bed with his hands in front of laying flat. He was staring at the lines in his hands, "bhabi meri to haathon ki lakeeron ne hi mujhe dhoka de diya". Anjali with a thought of talking to him closed hi hand on hi left hand but pushing back the idea she just hugged him,Angad who had been controlling for uncounted days broke apart the balloon of tears and sadness blew out.
Kripa was sitting on Aaliyah's bedher face placed on the boat of her hands staring at aaliya who was blabbering continuously walking back and forth dumping stuff in a suit case and Kripa moving her head as a kid in whichever direction aaliya hopped to.she looked like a little girl who was sitting on the bed looking at her mommy doing her chores.
She seemed so happy outside but only she knew how she ahd spent these 3 yrs of her life … even she didn't know what was she sad at leaving her 2 best friends back home? Yes that's what it was ..her best friends. No it was something deep in her heart ,deep deep down inside.
"yea you're having fun aren't you? Seeing me all frustrated and troubled,honestly if it wasn't for my jobi wouldn't have been leaving,I hate that man" aaliya said fuming.
"aali chhoro naa..shukar karo you get to once in a while main to 3 saaal se yahin hoon you get to move around atleast" Kripa tried her best to caml her down and make her feel better.
"oh hello… you don't like moving around remember"Aaliya stopped nidway to the sofa where her purse sat.
"I will kill bhai he was the one to convince me to come here" aaliya's all day radio started again
"huh..haan" Kripa nodded her head claiming yes she got whatever came out of madame aaliya's mouth.
"haan kya? What did I say?" aaliya asked while putting her bag in the trunk of "toyota's new vits" and closing it.
"wohi the usual stuff" Kripa was now sitting in the car
"Kripa tum bhi naa"
that day aaliya left for Vancouver she had to go on some business tour for 2 weeks where she had 2 confrences to attend those 2 confrences had to last 3 days each giving her only a day to rest then all of the next week was a workshop for the students of pshcology.Kripa was closing her shop for a week due to the renovations.Christmas was 2 months away and she wanted to change the stuff around in her little shop.
2 days passed easily on the third day she sat on the bed ,confused nored yet relaxed and that relaxation was bugging her she was so used to the stressed life yet happy to have gotten sometime for her self.Angad was sitting with alizay on his lap in their bedroom
"daddy why do you have to leave?" Alizay asked him putting her hands around his neck.pulling Alizay away he wiped her tears and kissed her ofrehead.
"Angel daddy has to go…he has an important buissness conference there he promises to bring u back loads of chocolate and dolls for you and he'll call you everyday" Angad sounded sweet and daddy like.
"Chachooooooooo…."there comes anu.. she ran into his arms kissing his cotton shirt.
"ji chachoo ki jaan" Angad kissed her forehead while straightening her skirt.Anu handed Angad an envelope.both of the girls standing hand in hand fiddeling with there skirts looked at Angad.
He took the card out from the blue colored envelope which the two angels had painted on with a "U" upside down to show a sad face,smilling Angad flipped open the card which read:
Chachoo/Daddy
&nbs p; We will miss you a lot bring back chocolate and the crazy frog toy please.
Luv you a lot
Anu and Alizay.
The writing was horrible it took him 15 mins to read the card and he was awestruck pulling both of them in a bear hug he carried them down stairs.

Hmmm so ..how was it ?... and yeah for u divjot ..hug ..ok ..and yeah the treat is still awaited eh..

-HAnia

Edited by Hania baweja - 19 years ago

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

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Posted: 19 years ago

#85

aaaaaawwwwwwwwwww anu and alizah!! continue soooooooooon

they are soooooo cute..

im sure "alizah" is neha.. please let kripa meet her once. that'll bring ak together.. im suree

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anon343

@Anon12378

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Posted: 19 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: brainychild92
aaaaaawwwwwwwwwww anu and alizah!! continue soooooooooon

they are soooooo cute..

im sure "alizah" is neha.. please let kripa meet her once. that'll bring ak together.. im suree

I agree they sound cho sweet 😳

Edited by kripa_angad=luv - 19 years ago

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Shagufta

@JanuaryEmbers

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Posted: 19 years ago

#87

awesome story cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!1 👏

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Amneet

@amneetkaur_24

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Posted: 19 years ago

#88

i just caught up, awesome fan fic! Love it! Cont. soon!

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Divjot_10

@Divjot_10

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Posted: 19 years ago

#89

Hey Hania,
awwwwww......... that was sucha cute part!! Anu and Alizay are soooooooooooooooo cute!! U r also sucha sweetheart 🤗 🤗 Love u and thanx for writing the part for me!! 😊 Thanx a bunch!! and Loved the part!! I hope Angad and Kripa meet soon and Is Alizay Neha?? Kripa's bhatiji!! 😕 and how come she forgot her!! K... I'm sooooo confused but loved the part!! Good Luck and Bye!!
Divjot 😃

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Tania

@Sadaf.B

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Posted: 18 years ago

#90

hi just read the last part gr8 cont soon 😉

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