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Posted: 19 years ago
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hello guys .....since 2 days my mind is blank seriuosly i cannot write ..i cant think of anything ..ok yea h inkow what to do but i cannot think of how to start and stuff how to write those dialogues ....so ..iam ve very sorry ill try tyo write today ...but i thin k i could barely do it ....but thank u guys for waiting ...just bare with my laziness plz...

plzz😕😭😆

bbye

-Hania

PS:ill try to make it up to u guys by posting alonger part

Edited by Hania baweja - 19 years ago
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Hey ok here i c that nobody hads replied hmmm ok...well ho was the weekend ?..hmm and yeah sorry for not updating here is the new part hope u all enjoy it

PART 10

IN THE KHANNA MANSION

Angad was being chased by Anu,they were running all around the house,Angad would hide behind people but she would catch because every one was too short ..heheh.they both end up on angads bed.anu sitting on top of angads stomach playing with the buttons of his shirt
"chachoo"…
"hmm"he said smilling.
"chachoo..you promised me!"
"oh iam so sorry bacha ..i forgot again" he said making a "sorry" face.and those twinkiling eyes on anus face truned sad and her lower lip moved a bit forward."aww ..anu..sorry bacha.."..and anu moved a bit closer to angads cheek and rubbed her nose against angads shaved cheek."oh no…not that bunny nose he said and handed her the chocolate and anu kissed hi cheek saying "thank you chachoo I luv u"she jumped off from hi stomach and ran away.

Angad stood up straightening hos shirt and walked away.coming out of the room he bumped in to Aaliyah.
"ouch..bhai..daikh ke nahin chal sakte ?"she said rubbing her head
"array…aiwain main …tum mere kamre main ari thi,tumhain nazar nahin aya?" Angad snapped at her rubbing his arm.
"deewar jaise to aap ho hi to mujhe laga ke deewar hai aur baad mian darwaza aye gaa" she said getting annoyed
"hahaha ..u carck me up .."he said sarcastically,made aface at her and waled away

DOWNSTAIRS
Anjali is standing in front of Angad asking him "Angad tum nain anu ko aaj phir chocolate laa di?"
"haan bhabi par…"
"par kiya …addi? Kyoun uss ko bigaar rahe ho?"
"bhabi..don't worry who bigar nahin rahi hai aur plus jab who kuch galat karti hai to main usse samjhata bh to hoon ! aur aapko to pata hai ke iss dunya main meri sirf 3 weaknesses hain (1) Aaliyah,(2) anu (3)…"his voice trailed off

Anjali hugged her dewar cum younger borther and said smilling "tum nahin mano ge naa!"
"never" he reaplied smilling ear to ear.
"bhabi yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat thi? Answer to sab ko pata thaa hai naa bhai!" Aaliyah said putting arms around her lovely bhabi.

"huh..aali don't you even think of talking to me"! saying that Angad turned around and walked towards the dining table.on the other side Anjali gestured Aaliyah asking "whats up with him"."come on bhai don't act like a kid"Aaliyah said walking towards him." Iam not acting like a kid" he said biting into the apple "oh..yes you are" Aaliyah snatched his aaple and said this waith a mouth ful of juicy "macintosh" apples

"Aaliyah give me my apple back"he said running after her "nahin ..nahin mile gaa jab tak…" before Aaliyah could complete her sentence aney was standing in front of her holding the apple up high.. "ab kiya hua?" Aaliyah was jumping up to reach the apple when amey caught hr hand.he was holding the apple in one hand and aaliyahs hand in the other.amey bit into the apple when Angad cam.and took the apple from aneys hand.they were almost the same height. Angad took the apple and offered it to alliyah teasingly.she was trying so hard to snatch it from him but he was toot all for her.

"uff tum dono ka bachpanaa kab khatam hoga itne bare hogaye ho laikin abhi bhi anu jaisee harkatain karte ho".sadi naina entering the room.

That's how the whole day went by,laughing,fighting and fooling around.
And soon that time of the day came when Aaliyah was suppose to leave .naina and dilip weren't there to see her off beocuse both of them had to go to London for an unrgent buissenss trip.they left for the airportat 4 in the afternoon because aaliyah's flight was at 9 at night and she had to go maximum 4 hrs earlier but you know how Angad is who want5s everything done on time or else he freaks out ?!…when both Angad and krips car came side by side everything stopped,time , people,heartbeats everything.Kripa and Angad they both felt something different ,a different sensation.even though they had no clue about the people sitting beside their car but it felt as if they both knew who was in it there was a connection which only their hearts knew.when the cars moved ahead Kripa tried to peek insed the other car.

Angad's car stopped at the departure area he got out of the car and so did everybody else
He opened the trunk saying. "chalo..cahlo aaali hurryup other wise you'll get late..agar flight miss hogaye to kiya hogaa? Mujhe tumhain ek aur din jhelna pare gaa".he said smilling and placing her luggage on the cart.
"how rude…bhaiyya..bhai ko daikho naa"Aaliyah hugged amey pretening do be sad.

Now they were in the airport.
"hay bhagwaan tu ne mujhe yeh din dikhaane main itni der kyoun lagai…kaash pehle hi is musibat se jaan churadete"….Angad exclaimed looking up in the skyand hands raised.
Aaliyah got so mad that she started toto hit him . "Aaliyah tum fashion designing kyoun parhne jarahi ho …WWF main chali jaao naa …meri to aadhi body main fracture hogaaya hai..uff itni zor se maarti ho"..Angad said…to tease her even more.
Angad got hold of Aaliyah's hands and hugged her.saying "oh my god iam gonna miss u so much".

Amey Anjali and Anu bid their good byes and left because they knew that Angad and Aaliyah wanted to have some time alone…. when Angad and Aaliyah parted the first thing Angad asked Aaliyah was
"Aaliyah do u have your passport and ticket"
"Yes bhai" she replyed looking for something in her bag.
"Emergency numbers, money, gum, and candy cuz u get sick on the plane" he required.
"Bhaiyya …no…don't start..plz..ma chligayee laikin apne iss bete ko chhor gayee ..Uff bhagwaan mera kiya hoga ..shukar hai main Canada jarahi hoon warna yaha reh ke to main pagal hi ho jaati" Aaliyah said getting annoyed ..
"Aaliyah aisa kehna parta hai..Jab koi bahar jara hota hai to ..waise bhi tumahree kise fikar hai…hai naa..hehe" Angad said

"Yea..yea. ."Aaliyah had said..Hugging him..And she went off..To security check

they were already getting late only 3 hrs were left for boarding. Thanks to ronit who had to sleep in today "oh god when is he gonna realize hi responsibilities and grow up///she thought but was interrupted by a loud bang …oh. Why didn't I think earlier …its ronit closing the trunk. ."What the hell is his problem ...could he act a bit more immature?" oh well my am I thinking abt him?''…. After like 30mins Kripa was in the lounge … she went to the book store and started looking around after 15 mins a book caught her eye as she kept her hand on it another hand came towards the book Kripa turned sideways to look who was this person …there was a pretty girl almost her height, who was wearing jeans and kurti which made her look very angelic and elegant was standing in front of her …that face looked familiar…who was she ??..Where have I seen her ?..oh well it's a big ..City I would have seen her somewhere …"she shook the thoughts out of her mind.
The girl standing in front of her said "oh..u can have it ..u can have the book"
She moved the book towards her. " No u can have it " Kripa said
They argued for abt 5 mins then Kripa took the book and left the store.

Kripa was sitting in the departure lounge reading the book and enjoying her sandwich. She got so engrossed in the book that she didn't even realize what time it was when a polite lady came and shook her.
"Excuse me! are you miss Kripa Sharma?" she said
"Yes" Kripa replied
"The whole plane actually boarded and you are the last person to get on …can you plz hurry up" she said in a fluent and accented English.
Kripa quickly gathered her stuff saying "Iam sorry actually I got so engrossed in the book that I …
"Oh ..Don't worry abt that just hurry" the lady said helping her carry he baggage.
15mins later she was sitting in the plane with a seat empty beside her" oh well Iam alone in the plane gr8" just then I girl sat beside, she was the girl Kripa met at the book store

and that's how Kripa and Aaliyah met. It's been almost 6 months; they live together in Mississauga, Canada. Aaliyah and Kripa they both work and that's how they were able to own a condo of "Daniel" builders". They live near square one and the subway station.
Aaliyah and Kripa became are more like sisters now what abt nihi huh… Kripa left her past in India and whether its right or wrong she doesn't know that ,but she is living with it!

It was 8 in the morning when Aaliyah enterd kripas room scratching her head,sleepily.
The room was dark,curtains drawn closely.
"I am awake"said Kripa,before Aaliyah could say anything. Kripa walked over to her cupboard took out a pair of pants and a lime green kurti with sequins on it and walked out of the room.
About 15 mins later when Kripa re entered her room she found Aaliyah sleepiging on he r bed. Kripa just smiled. That's what Aaliyah used to do everyday. She would come in kripa's room to wake her up for she could go to work in the meanwhile Kripa would wash up Aaliyah would doze off again on kripa's bed.
It was ten when Aaliyah woke up, she netered eher room wchih was clean, and the bed made (Kripa did it) and got ready for her class. Aaliyah entered the kitched wearing a shirt, walked over to the phone and turned on the msg Kripa had left. "hey liyah.. goodmorning. There is a sandwich on the table fro you and coffee is in the brewer. Your class starts at 12, so don't get late. don't forget ur assignment or sle u're failing this course. 3 baje meet me at my work and Puhleeze bring burger king I'm tired of eating subway everydat. Good luck for your tes.. byez"
While listening to the message Aaliyah ate her breakfast and washed the plate. She was standing out in the hallway getting a last glane at her clean house, she locked the door and walked through the hallway which lead to the elevator, wchih had to go to 6 floors down, then she had to walk a mile or so to the subway station from where she would get to st george's campus downtown. She hated Monday's because of her classes downtown but oh well..

It was 10:30 when Aaliyah entered a boutique cum art gallert. It was full of bright colored clothings, cushions and canvases full of paints. Aaliyah tip toed up to the cashier and stood behind the firl standing near the counter putting the painting in a box. Aaliyah came near to her ear an d said "Kripa" she turned around a bit scared. Yes Kripa owend this boutique cum art gallery. He are the things made by Kripa anything nad evryhthin, you name it, she has it. From kurtis to candle holders, from skirts to cushions, glass paintings to canvas paintings, it all done by Kripa. "ohh aali.. You scared me.. on and aren't u getting late for ur class? " inquired Kripa catching her breath, getting hold of her heart beaet; which skipped few when Aaliyah screamed in her ear.
"oh yea.. I was, and I still am but I cannot go to my class and hand in my assignment without seeing you because when I see you.. well ya it kind of makes my dady.. it goes very well, its a blessing, cuz you are like an older sister to me" said Aaliyah acting like a kid, all these sweet, honey coarted words made krripa's eyes moist she reluctantly kissed aaliyah's forehead and gave her a bracelet which had the symbol of protecting one from the "evil's eye" Kripa just smiled at her. "thaknk yiu.. ab mera dum buhat acha guzre ga.. bye.. luv you" Aaliyah said hugging her in a rush and ran off. "bye" Kripa said waiving and smilled reurning at her work.

&nbs p; &n bsp; &nbs p; &n bsp; *- - - - - - - - -*.
Anjali entered angad's room, wchich was way.. way too clean for a guy to own it. Anjali was proud of him because if it was for anjali's own brother. Hah.. frorget it his room wouldn't even some close to the word "CLEAN".
Angad was putting his stuff/clothes in a hand carry bag, he looked up, "oh hi bhabi" and made her sit down
Anjali sat down and started helping him with his packing.
Finally she spoke up" Angad.."
"ji bhabi" he said sitting down on the floor near her feet.
"Do you really have to go? Amey bhi nahin hai,mom dad bhi London gaye hue hain.what am I gonna do here all alone?" Anjali asked
"arey bhabi…main to waise bhi 2 din main araha hoon ek concert hai aur phir dadi ke paas bhi jaana hai naa" Angad told her

it was 30 mins later when Angad was off to Bombay in his red beauty. this was the only time he got for him self since that day where he saw that girl at the caf. Her images just crossed hi mind, how beautiful she was yet so innocent, angelic, elegant and childish
Who was she? Angad thinking of her, just smiled and the only thought, which came to, his mind was


(u have to listen to this song …here is the link http://www.muziq.net/songs/Shiraz_Uppal/Jhuki_Jhuki/
the song it self is jhuki jhkui too ..so go ahead)
samain yun he chalta hai
saman yun badalta hai
chupa chupa rehta hai
meri yadoon main koi
din ke saray pehroon main
sham ki udasi main
raat kay andheroon main
yaad ata hai koi
jhuki jhuki ankhoon main
ruki ruki sansoon main
kaisai janoo yaar pyar kay
kaisay kaisay rang raag hain

hooo oooo hooo oooo hooo oooo ooo
hooo oooo hooo oooo hooo oooo ooo

lagta hai kay jaisay koi ass hai koi pass hai
saiya hai usi ka ya kai mera hi ehsas hai

lagta hai kay jaisay koi ass hai koi pass hai
saiya hai usi ka ya kai mera hi ehsas hai
dil kehta hai woh jo bhi hai
meri ankhoon main abb aaa basay
ab dil say milay uss dil ki lay
aur sur say uska sur milay
jhuki jhuki ankhoon main
ruki ruki sansoon main
kaisai janoo yaar pyar kay
kaisay kaisay rang raag hain
hooo oooo hooo oooo hooo oooo ooo
hooo oooo hooo oooo hooo oooo ooo

chahta hoon pochoon kai tu kon hai kia nam hai
khwaboon main jo ati hai muj say tera kia kam hai

chahta hoon pochoon kai tu kon hai kia nam hai
khwaboon main jo ati hai muj say tera kia kam hai
teri ankhoon main jo raaz hai
meray dil nay usko pa lia
teray hontoon pay nahi kiu aeya
woh geet jo main ne ga lia
jhuki jhuki ankhoon main
ruki ruki sansoon main
kaisai janoo yaar pyar kay
kaisay kaisay rang raag hain
hooo oooo hooo oooo hooo oooo ooo
hooo oooo hooo oooo hooo oooo oo



there it is...liked it?
comments plzz
bye tc 😃
Edited by Hania baweja - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 part!!! wish i was more organized like kripa!!!! cont. soon!!!! hmmm, chalo good start, atleast angad kripa ko yaad to kar raha hai
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Great Part... the story is getting intresting.. cont soon.


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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow, awesome. continue soon plz.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!! iw ish i waz more organized like angad 😆 😆 cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey people sorrie i couldnt continue ill try to do it as soon as possible ..yeah skittles u wish lol
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wow i just caught up! it's gr8! cont soon!plz!
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hey awsome ff...plz cont soon 😊
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hey guys ...ill try to continue ..buh i just had a party yesterday ...lol ...yup aim 16 now wow iam old heheh...acha ill try buh i have an essay due on monday so if iam not able to post it ..sorrie in advance

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