::OS::Destiny's Child part 2 2 OCTOBER PG 10

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Aysha

@matwamango

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909
so beautifully written
loved it

I need a coffe break. Next update 2 mprrpw.

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362035

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

awesooome...

fab ending..

loved it...

thanx for the pm..

take care...

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Silvy

@SilverBell

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+ 14

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Very Nice Chapter Loved It.

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VRITIKA

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

awasm dear
wao jus luvd it.
luv u
vritika

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Aww...such a beautiful ending! 😛 Loved Piya's trust in Abhay when she told Alina that she knows Abhay would never deceive her! And I'm glad Jannat and Pranay accepted their parents and now everyone is one big, happy family! Awesome OS 👏

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

awesome update ayesha
sometimes i just could not find suitable words to praise
it was really a rocking ending
the way jannat and pranav realise their mistake was amazing
u wrote everything pretty well
i could almost visualise it
pranav and maithali u really shock us at times
anyways congrats for a gr8 os

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Aysha...
Love u so much for this installment

ur the best!! Its the perfect ending. JanNay are too good. I love them so much. Naughty kids.. Just like their Dad

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Neytiri

@Neytiri

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

And dey live happily evr after...beautiful endng aysha...lvd it...

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

What was the third child u never told us. But as usual brilliant update.

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PRERNA VERMA

@prerna26

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#130

Superb Update!!!👏

Pia's faith in Abhay is unshakeable...Even after knowing the truth that Abhay was Pranay's father, she had full faith in him that he can't do anything wrong.😃True love is so powerful that it can overcome any obstacle!! They are reason for each other's existence.😍The ending was just Pefect! Finally the Raichand Family is complete. Pranay found his Perfect match in Maithali, Alina found her Soulmate in some Professor and Jannat found warlock for herself ! You are truly amazing...👍🏼Loved the whole concept and the end too!⭐️

Edited by prerna26 - 13 years ago

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