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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: ajenn

pS: So i was not hallucinating... Indeed its ur profile pic..👍🏼

Oh! I never got your question about the profile pic. Did you mean to say the earlier one was better?

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jenny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Oh! I never got your question about the profile pic. Did you mean to say the earlier one was better?

OOh that so poor of my English 😳...
Well I meant to say.. Your current profile pic really looks amazing..
I love it... You should continue using it..
The precious one resemble for an writer..
And the current one resemble for freedom
The Freedom Writer = Hasini 😉

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jazzerette

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

Awesome pics...

Awesome song...

Awesome teaser...

Can't wait for the next update!! :)

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

hasini update soon please..harr dus minute main tumhare ff topic par chakkar marr rahi hoon with a hope that you might have updated...😊

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#225

😉Hey dear... i was scanning the ffs on this forum...& i found ur ff..."NEW YORK TIMES"... I'm glad that i found this fab piece of work..👏👏👏.

Its been last 2 days that have been reading this ff... & i'm badly hooked to it...

ur an awesome writer... i hve read 2 threads and can't wait to read further😊😊

The way u hve defined & described each character..their views... mindsets...confusions...thru their monologues...hats off to u!!!⭐️⭐️

" HOT CHOCOLATE"...WOW no way to describe...so beautifully u even made me feel wat Geet was trying to convey Maan...the dream catcher...all in all. good... Then came the walk in the Central park... the promise made... 😊

Then came Dev's part of separation... Geet's breakdown... & Maan's dilemma to be with her...well potrayed . The way Geet opened up to Maan at niagra...was so touching... also the way Maan assureed her of his support..to good... and the Gym sitout...and the way u described the handholding there... i was speechless...

Then came the phase of bringing Geet out of this whole thing... each one trying their best...VEGAS... To the game played😆😆😆... to the whole convo between MG..⭐️⭐️

Then Geet's hiding from ppl...& Maan in his own way helping her & making her understand to not close down on others...then the Waterlily.. and photo session..my my!!!!😳😳

This followed with Geet trying to solve problems of finance , phone, & home... loved the way...Maan was there for her.. without forcing her but just letting his presence be around her...

Flea market & the whole process of them each giving a part of them in form of the Crystals was again beautifull.. and the way u connected the crystals symbolising them.. awesome!!!!...followed by the brunch & bed & bath... & Maan trying to resist... & his dilemma of defining his position in herv life & his need...too good...

Then his runing away tio canyon... and final acceptance of his feelings... for geet...esply..." The first day of loving Geet and her alone thruout life" that line just took me to another world...

Oh Oh... now Geety goes cold...randomness .theory... but again loved the way Maan brought her out of it... trying to warm her to ppl... the whole phase of Maan opening up to her at naigra again at the same place where c opened up to him ...his way of making her again to trust ppl...and his promise to her to walk with her...wow!!!!!!!

The birthday cupcake... searching of polaris😉😉...sweet nothings.thumb mittens...and finale with the fireworks again at niagra was like so mindblowing...!!!!!

ur an amazing writer...dear hats off to u 👏👏👏👏👏

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: Onir
😉Hey dear... i was scanning the ffs on this forum...& i found ur ff..."NEW YORK TIMES"... I'm glad that i found this fab piece of work..👏👏👏.

Its been last 2 days that have been reading this ff... & i'm badly hooked to it...

Thanks for writing back all that you liked. It was great to hear them.

Trust me you are going to get tired by the time, you get to the end of this.

Hasini

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Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#227

Then came the unexpected yet well needed problems.. misunderstanding... Mars & Venus...they had to understand & accept their flaws as well shortcomings of understanding each other.. the momno episode..😆😆😆 the way Geet made her assumption...taking care at the same time keeping the mask of indiffernce...well potrayed... project J...and finally Geet understanding hw her amswer pushed Maan out ...& her need for him..FIRST BREATHE ... was like awesome... beautifully put forward⭐️⭐️

another problem tackling with the dependability.. and not understanding the care,... pink slip...and then comes MK the hard exterior to the forefront ...their fights... crossing over of boundaries...and finally Maan taking it in his own hands and bringing it to a closure in House arrest... again superb👏👏👏.. u have so precisely... described each person's view & confusions... no words...

the whole of the day spent with each other.. with Geets expert observation... 😆😆😆 and also Maan's understanding & acceptance of Geets past along with everything was so well written... seriously ur tyoo good dear...

i knw i must be broing u with my comments btu i just couldn't help myself from commenting... now i'm off to read the remaining parts... just can't wait to knw wat's ahead... will comment later about the reamining parts that i have read upto thread 2... sometime later if u don't mind my such long chatter rite nw the temptation to read the remaining parts is too much to resist... bye dear

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Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Thanks for writing back all that you liked. It was great to hear them.

Trust me you are going to get tired by the time, you get to the end of this.

Hasini

hey dear prwesently ... i have to knw wat lays ahead... anyways... lets see.. i'm pretty sure it will be worth the tiredness...😆😆😆

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: Onir

i knw i must be broing u with my comments btu i just couldn't help myself from commenting...
sometime later if u don't mind my such long chatter rite nw the temptation to read the remaining parts is too much to resist... bye dear

Not at all...This feels like a good recap of all that has happened and some of them have prompted me to go back and read a few.

Thanks for writing.

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Princess DD

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Posted: 13 years ago

#230

Hasini ... sorry dear...

I know I owe you 4 comments on the last 4 parts and a response to the PM too... Will definintely do it... Just a bit caught up now.. But still i'm squeezing some time out to read all the updates and was pleasantly surprised... 😊 You just make me fall in love with NY Times even more everytime there is a twist for the Maaneet story 😊

Will come back with comments!! And thats a promise 😳

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