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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: JRia

Hey Hansini

loved the way u gave closure to Naini-Rishab
u nicely bring out the feelings of Maan-Geet
the hangovers was too good
loved Rishab and Yash stupid banter
lastly too glad that Maan-Geet are going to unite soon



Ok Ria...I can longer ignore you calling me Hansini...😆

I don't have a n there...Thought I was duty bound to point it to you...give that we are coming to a close.

Just kidding. Thanks for reading.
Hasini
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement



I think someone from Iyer and Khurana is virtually waiting to strangle your neck.

4 more updates + Epilogue and NY times is case closed.




😭 Sad its going to end, but waiting for Rooftop and Iyer vs Khurana.. 😉
😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

So I realized again today why I shouldn't read certain FFs such as NYT right before class and while sitting in the library. Short version is I looked like I had gone through a massive break up and couldn't control myself! 😆 I first off couldn't bare Maaneet fighting and that too about something they could have well sorted out with talking.

And then it just got worse. Every time of year when 9/11 rolls around I tend to get extra emotional. I was very young then but I remember it like yesterday and pain crops up anew every time. Your words painted the anguish and fear of losing a loved one so clearly that I couldn't help but be transported back to that day and get emotional. Losing a person who you love is no doubt painful but it's even more so when you wouldn't get the chance to let them know how much you mean to them. So reading Geet's agony and knowing the slight possibility that Maan might be no more was heart wrenching. You have no idea how much relief I felt when they found him at last. I think I've told you this before but your writing literally places me within their shoes and I am able to go through their emotions, it's amazing. I don't know what else to day except that the Amor Fati updates were absolutely brilliant. Looking forward to the next part...and also catching up with the past parts (for which you will have to bare with me) :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Limerance

I first off couldn't bare Maaneet fighting and that too about something they could have well sorted out with talking.



I can't figure out if that is a backhanded compliment 😆

Thanks for stopping by and I will get back to your PM too.

Hasini



Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
love ur writing style...it's very refreshing, vivid...
To rise and love, look beyond...to make things beautiful between them... Love of ones fate indeed...waiting for the next set of twists as this story moves towards the finish line...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Wela

love ur writing style...it's very refreshing, vivid...
To rise and love, look beyond...to make things beautiful between them... Love of ones fate indeed...waiting for the next set of twists as this story moves towards the finish line...



Oh! lord my deux ex machina is over gurl! The rest is just tying all the loose ends.

Thanks so much for reading.

Hasini
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just cant help myself from asking since i can see u r online :-)

R u going to update tonight?

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Posted: 13 years ago
I was fighting either to read from the beginning or jst give a peep on ur last para..
But I made my mind and start it from the beginning..
Each sentence was beautifully pen'd.
The attack was a painful memory till to date.
For me to watch it on tele gave me pain in heart.
To imagine those who gone through it.. surely unbearable pain.
This update is really brilliant..


Surely Geet was in hell in those few hours of Maan's search.
Thats the moments she recall back all their memories together.
The last mail of Maan.. He was willing to resign his job just to be together with Geet.
Maan. man with few words ... his action speaks louder.
Glad her family found her on time.
She was helpless.. roaming around for his glimpse.
Finally she found her man.. Thats what we need..
Am so eager to read coming updates...



ps: Hasini, if am not mistaken I saw ur changed ur profile pic. It looked really amazing.. Sth like Freedom !!!!Or I was jst imagining 😕




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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement


Oh! lord my deux ex machina is over gurl! The rest is just tying all the loose ends.

Thanks so much for reading.

Hasini

Will be waiting for the next one...dot the i's and cross the T's :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement



I think someone from Iyer and Khurana is virtually waiting to strangle your neck.

4 more updates + Epilogue and NY times is case closed.


H, I am a huuugggeee fan of Iyer and Khurana also. If you promise us continuous updates of that FF immediately after this, then I will feel better about this one ending,
Edited by Soapoperasrfun - 13 years ago

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