HEARTBEAT: Part 14 updated [ EXAM FEVER ]

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@misslaugheasily

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Posted: 13 years ago

#421

😡😡😡

ITNA CHOTA UPDATE!😔

ab jaldi se next update karo, warna...

about the post, it was amazing!!

loved the kriyaansh scene! 😃

lol...loving the armaanish karan here! can't wait for the party!

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Karunyandrea

@Karunyandrea

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Posted: 13 years ago

#422

hey mike loved d fire escape scene n karans plan wid d girls ... waiting for d party update soon n pm me😊

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harshita gangwani

@harshita29396

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#423

FANTASTIC... SUPERB...MICK ND FARAH PLS DO KEEP POSTIN SOON...😊😊

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SugarCubes

@SugarCubes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#424

ohk, last tym (d 1st tym i saw ur ff), i was tooo tired so just saw d invitation nd went.. tdy, i read all ur parts nd it took me i think 2 hours, i was reading it continuously nd just coudnt stop reading!!!!!! nd wen i stopped at last i saw d tym nd was shocked!!!!!!!!! nd surprised 2 read nd was thinkin dat ur imagination is just gr8!!!!!!! i was imaginig it nd it was lyk i am drownin in a swimmin pool (lyk vicky)..😆 its an awesum, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, out of dis wrld, mind blowing ff!!!!!!!! luvd reading it!!!!!!!!!!! plz update d nxt part soon nd dnt frgt 2 pm me!!!!!!!! wil b waitin fr it lyk a mad person.. 😛

d date was lyk, dreamy!!!! nd i really luv dmg!!!!!!!!! i thot of jenny too wid ksg nd all, bt thnks sooo much fr including her!!!!!!!! luv kajen, kriyansh nd swaron!!!!!!!!!! 😉

really, u r an amzing writer!!!!!!!!!!! a veryyy gud job!!!!!!!!! 👏 👍🏼

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~~ MICK ~~

@~~ MICK ~~

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: Dancedevil
ohk, last tym (d 1st tym i saw ur ff), i was tooo tired so just saw d invitation nd went.. tdy, i read all ur parts nd it took me i think 2 hours, i was reading it continuously nd just coudnt stop reading!!!!!! nd wen i stopped at last i saw d tym nd was shocked!!!!!!!!! nd surprised 2 read nd was thinkin dat ur imagination is just gr8!!!!!!! i was imaginig it nd it was lyk i am drownin in a swimmin pool (lyk vicky)..😆 its an awesum, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, out of dis wrld, mind blowing ff!!!!!!!! luvd reading it!!!!!!!!!!! plz update d nxt part soon nd dnt frgt 2 pm me!!!!!!!! wil b waitin fr it lyk a mad person.. 😛
d date was lyk, dreamy!!!! nd i really luv dmg!!!!!!!!! i thot of jenny too wid ksg nd all, bt thnks sooo much fr including her!!!!!!!! luv kajen, kriyansh nd swaron!!!!!!!!!! 😉

really, u r an amzing writer!!!!!!!!!!! a veryyy gud job!!!!!!!!! 👏 👍🏼

thank u so much yaar.. 😃 glad u liked it..

next update very soon.. may be tomm or on diwali.. 😉

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ashree45

@ashree45

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Posted: 13 years ago

#426

OMG... this is flipping UH-MAZE-EING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love thisss!!! omgg hurry up and write the party part!!!!!! :))))))))))))))))))))))<333333333333333333333

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ashree45

@ashree45

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#427

i loved the kriyaansh argument! they are soo cute! you were so good at their part! it's def. something they both would say in d3!<3 !<3LOVE<3!

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Shagufta

@ShagufElina

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#428

hey guys this was awsome
every dailogue,scene,everything was superb i reallly liked ur ff
its was reeeaaalllyyy
ennnjjjoooyyyaaabbbleee
especiallly kriyansh

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Nishtha

@Jade_Precious

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#429

awesome part yr
somethin different
KRIYAANSH scene was fab
n all gals r 2gether
nyc one
n KARAN is too gud

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Sarah

@HPmaniac

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#430

Thnx for the PM...sorry,bohut late se reply kar rahi hoon...but I had got a little confused so began reading from the beginning,which was a very good thing,coz somehow I had missed reading ViHa-cake part, idk how...but it was so cute!!! awesome!!!!

Part 8 was fun,poor girls!it's thier turn to get jealous now. Seriously, I cud totally imagine the guys being fida over Ms.Jennifer Gupta(btw, nice name😆...very smart guys! Loved her description and the background song😆) and the girls getting jealous!

loved Nicky and thier dialogues, as usual...

and "K: boys par Jenny ka jadu…girls honge bekaabu…interesting.."

lol,so true!!!! and the whole part where the guys plan for a party was hilarious!🤣 then the fire exit part was very cute and funny! (haven't watched dmg much,but even I remember how armaan used to pull riddhima into the fire-exit!😆)

🤣I can't believe Kriya thot that Rey was asking Ms Jenny out on a date! aise hi kuch bhi assume kar leti hai?? and the fire-exit part...(She den realised that she was holding Rey's hand and was shocked…her cheeks going pink…she quickly ran off….Rey was left smiling)
awww,soo cute!!!!!

haha,"sweet and smile",good advice Prof. Karan!

matching outfits...really good idea!😆

not fair guys! yahan pe kyun stop kiya! I'm dying to know what happens next! Pleeease continue ASAP!

you guys are amazing.I loved all the parts...please update soon!!!