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Posted: 13 years ago
Rey observes that Kriya is high n gets worried abt her.. so he moves closer to her.. On seeing him, Kriya stops dancing n starts staring at him. She comes very close to him n says something to him in his ears..

She tells him to please take her out somewhere from here..

Rey starts to move out of the dance floor n Kriya follows him...

Outside the hall, there was a beautiful pool somewhat like this..

http://vistalandtravel.com/images/hotels/2008_03/964/pool%20copy.jpg

They both sit at the stairs nearby..

R: mana kiya tha na shots lene se.. mere baat kabhi toh maan liya karo..

K: (making a sad face) tum hamesha mujhe daante kyu rehte ho.. kabhi toh pyaar se baat kiya karo jaise aap Ms. Jenny k saath karte ho..

R: hey bhagwan.. tum ab tak wahi atki ho? acha baba.. theek hai.. ab mein tumhe kabhi nahin daantuga.. magar ek shart hai..

K: kaise shart?

R: Tum aage se kabhi drink nahin karogi..

K: ok Promise..

She stands up n starts moving towards the pool n shouting zor zor se. . Rey follows her n trying to ask wt happ now'she then starts singing loudly:

K: Zara sa Jhoom lu mein..

(Rey catches his hand)

R: arey na re na re na..

(He said stopping her from tirling round and round)

K: zara se ghoomlu mei (she said walking away)

R: arey na re baba na (he ran aftr her)

K: aa tujhe choom lu mei (she said falling on to Rey)

Rey stood there shocked holding her...he didnt know if he should laugh or not'Kria suddenly realised wat she said and looked at him embarrassed and moved away from him saying sorry'.and walked off'and den started screaming again..

R: arey ab kya hua tumhe?

K: mein aisi halat mein ghar kaise jaungi.. mom maar daalegi mujhe..

R: arey dnt worry.. thodi der mein tum normal ho jaogi.. fir rani laxmi bai ko kuch ni pata chalega.. trust me..

K: nahi but mujhe ghar nahin jana.. mujhe yahi rehna hai tumhare saath.. 😳❤️

She falls into Rey's arms n they hug for a long long time.. { Not like D3... almost hug dete hain woh log toh..😆}

(while hugging)

K: mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai..

R: haan kaho..

K: Mein bahut buri hun..

(Rey separates the hug and sees that Kriya is crying)


R: aisa kyu keh rahi ... ( interuppted by kriya)

K: shhh... ( puts her finger on his lips) mein bol rahi hun na.. bahut buri hun mein.. Mom se jhooth bolte hun mein roz ki mein dance nahin karti.. chipke dance karti hun..

R: but tumhari mom tumhe dance karne se kyu rokti hain??

K: woh nahin batati mom.. woh sochte hain ki dance is a waste of time..

R: toh kya tumhare mom ko pata nahin ki tum kitna acha dance karti ho??

K: mein dehradun mein apne school mein dance competition mein 1st aayi thi.. chote ustaad dance india dance competition tha.. woh last time tha jab mom ke saamne dance kiya tha.. uss din mom ne mujhse mere trophy n certificate liya n fek diya. woh chahti hain ki mein padhai karu.. ache college se MBA karu..she does nt want me to do dance..

R: bt tum iss sab ka reason toh pucho.. i mean tum itni achi dancer ho..

K: dance mera 1st love hai.. n i cant live without it.. toh thats y mujhe maa se jhooth bolna padta hai..

( starts to cry even more n goes bak into the hug again )


(Rey hugs her tighter this time n makes her feel comfortable)

R: dnt worry kriya.. sab theek ho jaega..m sure tumhari mom ko bhi yeh realize hoga ki how spl a dancer u r.. please rona band karo ab, warna mein gussa ho jaunga tumse..

(kriya breaks the hug.. Rey wipes off her tears)


R: tum smile karti hui itni buri bhi nahin lagti.. 😉

K: he he he.. thanks Rey.. thank u fr being there..😊

(Rey thinks of a plan so that she becomes happy as well as she comes to the normal state.. he takes her close to the pool n both of them jump into the pool together like we saw d last time)

{ After both are in the POOL }

K: yeh tumne jaan k kiya na.. ( while smiling )

R: haan ( smiling ).. taki mein tumhare cute se face p yeh wali smile dekh saku..

K: aree woh toh mein aise hi de deti.. poori bheeg gaye hain hum.. mere dress bhi kharab ho gayi..😭

R: tumhe normal bhi toh karna tha na.. n iss se better option ni mile mujhe.. are u feeling better now??

K: ya i am.. pata hai mujhe hamesha se try karna tha ki log kaise feel karte hain wen they get High.. but sach mein today, i felt so nice...

R: i know.. bt that does nt mean u do it everyday.. its bad fr u..

K: tum kya roz karte ho?

R: tum kya mujhe tanker samajhti ho??😆 actually aaj nikhil ne insist kiya toh i agreed... i generally avoid it.. i do it very very occasionally..

K: m sorry Rey.. mere wajah se tum enjoy nahin kar paye apne friend k saath..

R: haan woh toh hai.. but instead mujhe apne doosre friend k saath quality time spend karne ko mil gaya..

K: toh kya aap mujhe apna dost samajhte ho??

R: mein toh samajhta hun shuru se.. but ..

K: but aap toh mujhe hate karte ho na..

R: Yeh tumhe kisne kaha?

K: kaha nahin but mujhe pata hai..

R: i wish tumhe pata hota baatcutter ki mein kya feel karta hun tumhare liye..

They stare at each other lost into the moment. Suddenly Rey who was holding Kria's hands pulled her close to him'he didn't know why he did dat but at that moment he just wanted her to be close to him'she was shivering in the water..but when Rey pulled her to him she felt a current spread through her spine'and a warmth spread through her body'their faces were inches apart'but somehow as if they were being pushed they were pulled towards each other'

Rey moved so close his hands traveled from her hands to her back while Kria felt she was drowning with his touch.. Rey pulled her so close their faces were an inch apart'Kria's heart thumped inside her as if it will come out rite now' she slowly closed her eyes as Rey moved forward..


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THAT'S IT FOR NOW😃'.SORRY FOR POSTING "THE PARTY" PART SO LATE.. I HOPE THE LENGTH OF THE POSTS WUD SUGGEST U HOW MUCH WORK WE DID ON THIS..

WE LITERALLY HATE DANCE PARTIES NOW AS IT WAS THE MOST DIFFICULT PART FOR US TO WRITE SO FAR...😆🤣

BUT HOPE U ALL ENJOYED READING IT AND ENJOYED THE PARTY!!!😳😳

PLEASE LEAVE UR BADE BADE COMMENTS FOR THIS BADA WALA POST...!!!

Thanks for Reading...!!!!!!!!

~~ Mick N Farah ~~




Edited by ~~ MICK ~~ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
The part is really long and plain superb guys!
No words but you both are doing great.
Keep it up :D
Edited by Princess_Khushi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMg u r giving us diwali gift yaya!!!

*Res*
plzz mick post fast... have to sleep 😳
~~ MICK ~~ thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 100littledevils

OMg u r giving us diwali gift yaya!!!

*Res*
plzz mick post fast... have to sleep 😳



piyu.. might take some time yaar.. spl effects bache hain abhi daalne.. + small additions here n there.. so dnt wait.. will take min 1 hr more.. !!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ~~ MICK ~~



piyu.. might take some time yaar.. spl effects bache hain abhi daalne.. + small additions here n there.. so dnt wait.. will take min 1 hr more.. !!


I'll be here

So waiting!!


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Posted: 13 years ago
JALDO POST KARO !!!! ORDER HAI !!! 🤣
~~ MICK ~~ thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kumjoo

JALDO POST KARO !!!! ORDER HAI !!! 🤣



SORRY FR BEING LATE PREETY..

U CAN CHECK NOW.. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
AHHH OMG THAT WAS SOOO SEXY I CAN'T EVEN BREAK DOWN HOW MUCH I ENJOYEDDD THAT TOOO GOOD LOVED IT YAAR I WAS AT THE END AND IT STOPPED...I CAN'T WAIT TIL THE NXT UPDATE AND YAAR AGAR AISA UPDATE KAROGE THO AAP 2 MONTHS LAGA SAKTA HO!!! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
I luvved it!!! Please update asap 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG OMG OMG OMG i have no words!!!! rey and kria DANCED ???? i wish issi tarah d3 mein b hojaye ek dance!! BAILAMOS IS MY FAVVV SOOONG I LOVE IT!!! ty for selecting it!! and ofcourzz DDLJ ki 'zara sa joom loon mein" ahwww that was sweetest!!!!! rey and kria conver on pool side! mindblowing!!! thier fight for juice thn falling on nil se face heheheheehee it alwzz happns wid nil BALI KA BAKRA!!! 😆
and Shots wala tho awsum tha!! 😉
and ya i was really imagining kriyaansh pool side scene!!!😍 it mite happn in d3 as its nt let less than fiction wat we can watch in tv serials!!! awsum writters u r!! i wish i could write like u both😔
ASWUM AWSUM LOVEEED IT!!!! 🤗
want th nxt update asap!! 😛

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