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Posted: 13 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: HPmaniac
Thnx for the PM...sorry,bohut late se reply kar rahi hoon...but I had got a little confused so began reading from the beginning,which was a very good thing,coz somehow I had missed reading ViHa-cake part, idk how...but it was so cute!!! awesome!!!!
Part 8 was fun,poor girls!it's thier turn to get jealous now. Seriously, I cud totally imagine the guys being fida over Ms.Jennifer Gupta(btw, nice name😆...very smart guys! Loved her description and the background song😆) and the girls getting jealous!

loved Nicky and thier dialogues, as usual...

and "K: boys par Jenny ka jadu'girls honge bekaabu'interesting.."

lol,so true!!!! and the whole part where the guys plan for a party was hilarious!🤣 then the fire exit part was very cute and funny! (haven't watched dmg much,but even I remember how armaan used to pull riddhima into the fire-exit!😆)

🤣I can't believe Kriya thot that Rey was asking Ms Jenny out on a date! aise hi kuch bhi assume kar leti hai?? and the fire-exit part...(She den realised that she was holding Rey's hand and was shocked'her cheeks going pink'she quickly ran off'.Rey was left smiling)
awww,soo cute!!!!!

haha,"sweet and smile",good advice Prof. Karan!

matching outfits...really good idea!😆

not fair guys! yahan pe kyun stop kiya! I'm dying to know what happens next! Pleeease continue ASAP!

you guys are amazing.I loved all the parts...please update soon!!!

Thank you so much yaar.. ur wait will be over quite soon as next one is almost done.. btw, wts ur name??

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Posted: 13 years ago

#432

loved it loved it!!!!!! JJ wooowww kajen days hayeee 😍

mick and farah u bringing all DMG days back to my thoughts!!!! im really loving this plzzz get update sooonnn cant wait for the party yaar!🤔

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Posted: 13 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: ~~ MICK ~~

Thank you so much yaar.. ur wait will be over quite soon as next one is almost done.. btw, wts ur name??

ur welcome😊 still waiting 4 d update!!! name-Sarah😊

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Piyu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#434

Hahahah awesome part guys!!! Just loved how kria got jealous ...when rey asked jenny!!!...fire exit part ...hayee !!! <3 plzzz update soon can't wait for d party!!! pm me guys😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#435

nyc update...!!!

n KSG ke prankz n jj ki welcome prty ...

w8ing for them... :P😉

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~~ MICK ~~

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Posted: 13 years ago

#436

HEY GUYS, THIS PART IS A DIWALI GIFT FROM US!!!😳😳

WE WOULD LIKE TO SPECIALLY DEDICATE THIS PART TO OUR DEAREST PREETY(KUMJOO) AS IT'S A SPECIAL DAY FOR HER TODAY😳😳….HAPPY B'DAY PREETY🤗…AND HOPE THIS UPDATE BROUGHT IN MORE JOY TO UR SPECIAL DAY!!!😃😃 AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SUGGESTING THE TRACKS WHICH MADE THIS POST EVEN MORE SPECIAL..😃😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#437

Recap:

Kriya getting jealous of Ms Jenny n thinks ki Rey is asking Jenny fr a date.. 😛
Karan advising girls to be Sweet n Smile..😳
Rey, swayam n vicky taking each other's help so that they get to be in the same outfits as their partner..😃

Part 10:

Rey called up Sharon to help Swayam while Swayam called both Kriya n Neha to find out their dress colours..

Everyone arrived at the Party Venue'The huge hall decorated with drapes, disco lights all around a drinking bar on one side'and the DJ equipments on the other side'.from where boomed out the loud music as all the weakling and dazzling
girls entered'the boys were already in talking to each other but stopped when they saw the girls entering and started the look look hawa hawa...

Rey was blinded by her beauty'her sleek body was wrapped in a plunging V-neckline half sleeves knee length black dress which had black glittering laced big and small sequins on it'her hair straightened out perfectly silently sitting on her shoulders and her front fringes falling on to her face which she kept shifting behind her ears'.her face brightened up as she entered the hall looking around the coulourful sight'.everyone dressed in different colours looking all fancy'.
her cheeks rose up as she smiled cheerfully luking around'.and Rey was lost staring and smiling at her.

Swaym turned around when every1 stopped talking and saw her entering the hall'he was mesmerized by wat walked in front of him'Sharon wore an ornate strapless tasseled minidress'.the pleated bodice wrapped around her beautiful
figure which had white and silver beaded work on the edges and a deep v-neckline plunging low which ends meeting with a lavish white beaded and big stoned work belt from where continues the playful beaded tasseled skirt'.her wavy hair set beautifully on her shoulders and her eyes glittered with beautiful eye-makeup.

Vicky already felt he was falling off to the pool when he saw her'.she looked so cute and hot'Neha was dressed in a Navy blue butterfly top with silver beaded work and black skinny jeans'Her beautiful silky hair was half tied up while the rest fell on to her shoulders'She looked around excitedly lyk a kid while Vicky went on falling over Nilesh who himself was blasted off looking at Simmi who was dressed in a single shoulder bow strap shimmering deep purple jersey top with
black denim cut-off shorts'her sweet 16 smile litting up her face'both Vicky and Nilesh rested their heads on each other drooling over their girls.

On the other hand Amar looked at his cute little princess'who wore a pretty pink short A-line dress with beaded work on the straps and shimmering stoned work on her sweetheart neckline and the soft layers of her fabric which fell loosely over
her legs. Beside him Bharat stood busy staring at someone else'.Vishaka was dressed as usual in her tomb boyt avatar'an orange shirt with a short black denim jacket and black jeans'her dimples curmed up in her adorable beautiful face
which automatically made Bharat smile.

Amar: thitni achi dith rahi hai wo aaj..

B: I knw'.uski smile tou dekh..

A: smile tu tyun uska smile deth raha hai..

B: eh kiska

A: Rinni ka

B: abbey mei uss plastic ki gudiyaan ko kyun dekhunga

A: tou bata na bharat thise deth raha tha (Amar teased him)

(On the other side Swayam looked at Rey who was smiling as if he won a prize)

S: kisse dekh kar has raha hai

R: huh kya mai wo'kisiko bhi nahi..

S: acha jhoot mat bol bata usse hi dekh raha than na

R: wo mai jisse bhi dekhu tumhe kya tu dekh na apne siren ko

S: wais ek baat toh hai.. acha hai ki hum sab perfect coloour combo mein hai..

R: haan (dreamily looking at Kria)

S: GS n assnt GS dono Black mein'dance toh tu usike saath karega na (he hit Rey wid his shoulders teasing him'Rey got out of his dreamworld and looked at Swayam)

R: hogaya'tu bhi kam nahi hai.. apne boss jaise same colour pehen kar aa gaya taki tu uske saath dance kar sake..

(Vicky interrupted between the two coming from behind them)

V: guys ye kya ho gaya..

S & R: kya hua?

V: ye color color theme ke chakkar mei humne toh ye nahi socha ke baaki log bhi same color pehnenge.. dekho RDX ne bhi blue pehna hai..

(All of them stared around in horror'.there were loads of others wearing the same colors as they had worn)

V: agar inn mein se kissi ne meri deewani ke saath dance kiya toh-

R: toh kya duffer (Rey hit him)'.jo bhi karna hai ab hume hi karma hai'.humari girls sirf humare saath rahe aur dance kare.. ab yeh sochna hai..

S: xactly wo fal hi kaisa jo mehnat se na kamaya gaya ho..

V: abbey mere filmy dialogue kyun mar raha hai??

(The girls walked towards the boys)

(Each of the girls looked at their respective boys)

Kria's eyes browsed around the hall and rested on Rey'he was staring at her smiling'she smiled back remembering Karan's words but could not resist smiling when she looked at him'he was looking dashing in a black three quarter sleeved
shirt and a grey waistcoat with casual jeans'one thing Kria had to admit that he did look dashing in black...

Neha looked at Vicky who as usual looked at her dreamily'but this is what she always admired about him'.Vicky always going dreamy looking at her it was soo filmy'but no wait Neha thot'.she cant be doing all this its all fake'.but then
somehow why dus she feel herself falling fr him'he's soo adorable nd cute'.PERFECT FILMY HERO'.even 2day he luked soo good in his navy blue casual shirt'.wake up Neha wat u do'.she started looking around everywhere but at Vicky.

Sharon was about to go towards Rey when she caught Swaym looking at her'somehow she always froze when he stared at her'it was like a wind pushing against her'.how much ever she tried to avoid him she still falls onto him and cannot stop herself feeling something'.she looked at him this time with an approval on her face'he actually looked dashing 2day in a white simple shirt with sleeves folded up to his elbow'wait a sec what's wrong with her she's complimeting a weakling and that to Swaym she has so lost it'but then omg she was surely going mad she needs to jus stay away from him.

Simmi found it strange but was it strange'he was staring at her the way he never did before'true she did have a soft spot for him but he always took it as friendship or did he feel something too does he feel something too'she was happy to see
him wear the same colour as her'.he did ask her before going to the party which colour she wold wear now she knew why'and he was looking so dashing in d dark purple casual shirt Simmi felt lyk going and hugging him.

Rinni looked at Amar who was wearing the same colour as her'he looked so cute she thought'she never knew a guy could ever pull off pink so well but Amar did'she stared at him going off to her dreamland'.both of them had a cute eyelock'.Rinni thought if I could dance with him tonight but then no she cant not in front of Sharon'but she would love to dance with him just lyk how they did at the socials'.sigh she could never forget that magical day.

Vishaka looked at everyone staring at each other and rolled her eyes 'boys nd girls' and she caught Bharat staring at her'.she felt awkward suddenly looking at him'what was that'but then she was happy to see that he wore the same colour as her in his own Bharat style...she went up to him and placed her hand on his shoulders.

V: Hey dude thnk god u r wearing the same color as me (she said cheerfully)

(Bharat could not respond he looked at her and her hand dreamily. Vishaka looked at him and then suddenly jerked up and removed her hand)

(Sharon before moving forward towards the boys warns the girls)

Sh: girls remember wat Karan sir said..

K: xactly we have to be sweet nd smile

All the girls move forward: Hello Boys...

(All the boys looked at them drooling and dreaming) { Rem d trip scene here..😉 }

BOYS: HIII (dreamily)

Sh: nice arrangements guys..

N: Neha tou luving the place..

V: mujhe kab luv karogi 😆 (he said which only boys cud hear and Rey hit him wid his elbow) ouch'.mera matlab hum sab ne milkar ye saare arrangements ki hai..

(Suddenly all the girls run off towards the entrance and the girls turn around to look wats happening. The girls gawk at the entrance'enters the HOT and DASHING Karan Malik dressed in a hot red shirt and a black waist coat'..he looks at all the girls who came to greet him and gave his cute dimple smile and moves towards RDX while all the weakling and dazzling girls gathered together drooling over Karan)

The boys on the other hand got super annoyed...

V: is Karan sir ko tou bulana hi nahi chahiye tha'dekho inn ko (he said pointing at the girls) kaise lut pit rahi hai.

Just then entered Jenny blowing out everyone's mind'now it was the boys turn to gawk while the girls looked at her with envy. Karan who was busy talking to RDX stopped in between and stared at Jenny'she was wearing a beautiful shimmering
hot red sari with intricate black sequins design on the edge'.and a hot sexy halter neck blouse'.which revealed her bare back but was covered with her silky smooth hair'Karan stared at her with awe'he never saw her so hot and so sexy before..
he couldn't believe he was thinking she's hot and sexy but hell yeah he was bowled over to see her new avatar'her face lit up with her huge smile as she was greeted by every1''.her beautiful smoky eyes fell on him and a spark hit through him'wat was that'.he had no idea'but one thing was for sure his cute little JJ has now become a hot sexy babe...

(Suddenly RDX patted on his shoulder)

RDX: Karan you okay??

Karan: yeah yeah I'm ok'I was jus-

RDX: Ms.Jenny bhi aagayi lets go meet her up

(They move towards Ms. Jenny)

RDX: hi'looking very nice Ms. Jenny

Jenny: thanx RDX..

(She looked at her Karan and her face hardened'but Karan was lost looking at her)

Karan: Hii (he said half dreamily)

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Edited by ~~ MICK ~~ - 13 years ago

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#438

Rey takes the Microphone n makes an announcement...!!!

Rey: i Welcome u all to this fantastic Dance party...!!!! This party is there to welcome the 2 new ppl in St Louis...Karan Sir n Jenny Ma'am... soo lets celebrate...!!! But before that, i want to introduce to the host n my dost of this wonderful evening... He is none other than Channel V's favourite VJ, Nikhil Chinappa...!!!!!

https://www.fullhyderabad.com/images//previews/jan10/arts_entt/events/nikhil_chinappa_torque.jpg

Rey: And before we proceed to the dance floor, i want to invite Karan Sir n Jenny Ma'am here and cut the cake.. { d3 ki party n cake na ho?? aisa kaise ho sakta hai?? } 😆🤣

After the cake cutting everyone goes out to the dance floor n have fun…

All the weaklings are dancing on one side and all d dazzlings on the other...the DJ plays 'Tonight's gonna be a Gud Nite' and all the dazzler friends and weaklings friends groove together….The weaklings form a circle on one side while the dazzlers form a circle on the other side….Rey looks over at Kria enjoying and dancing and wished if they could dance together just then it was playing 'I got a feeling that tonite's gonna be a good nite'…he really wished it wud be good good nite...

Swaym looked over a the dazzler grp and saw Sharon dancing off happily with her friends he stood there watching her admiring her…he too wished dat tonite wud be really a gud nite...

Swaym and Rey goes towards Karan Jenny and RDX and pull them over to dance with them…all of them start grooving together….Karan and RDX dances off with all the girls while Jenny grooves with the guys…

DJ Nikhil stops the music n makes an announcement...

Nik: hey wts up u ppl.. R u having Fun?? Make some NOISE...!!!!!!
Ok.. So let's have a Small GAME to add some more fun...!!!!!
And for the winners, i have a surprise...!!!! 😃

Ok so R U READY PPL???

{Huge Roar of YESS all arnd...!!!! }

Nik: OKK.. so this game is called "Musical Magnets"...

Rules for this game are very simple...!!

I will play the Music n u guys have to dance.. N in between i will stop the music n the lights will go off.. Then i will call out a Number randomly. All you need to do is to form groups of that number in 5 seconds while the lights are off..

Suppose i call out the number as 6.. So u need to be in a group of 6 within 5 sec..
n u wont be able to see the ppl around u as the lights will be off. N the ppl who are not with your groups will be eliminated..

Sounds Fun rite??

And do remember the most important Rule of this Game:
Make sure you u want to win this game with some one Special...!!!!

and and and one more thing...!! U can't be dancing at the same place all the time.. Keep moving around n try n form differnt groups...!! u will be eliminated if u r found dancing at d same place all the time..

So R u guys ready for this???? All the people who want to participate in this game please step onto the dance floor...

(20 people step onto the dance floor)

Nik: so lets start boys n gals...!!!

( Nikhil plays the music (PARTY ROCK ANTHEM) n everyone on the dance floor is dancing.. Initially they are dancing in their repective groups.. but nikhil asks them to spread across )

Music stops n lights go off:

Number 7

( So 2 groups of 7 ppl are formed )

Weaklings + Karan
Dazzlers + Jenny

6 ppl go out..!!

Music plays again n every1 is dancing again...!!!

while dancing, Galti se Simmi steps onto Bharat's shoes while dancing..!!!

Immediately, Music stops n lights go off:

Number 9

So wen lights turn on, Bharat is in a position showing his fist ready to punch who ever stepped on him.. Bharat, Rinni, Simmi, Amar, Vishaka ( OUT ) are together while the rest of them are in a group of 9...

Music plays again n every1 is dancing again...!!!

Vicky n Neha are dancing together. Nil is arnd as well..

Music stops n lights go off:

Vicky holds someone's hand..

Number 6

So wen lights turn on, Vicky ends up holding Nil's hand instead of Neha..( OUT )

Neha is ghurring at Vicky gusse se.. Rest 6 of them are together..(IN)

Music plays again n every1 is dancing again...!!!

6 PPL LEFT.. KRIYAANSH, SWARON, KAJEN/KASH ( watever u like )

Music stops n lights go off:

Number 2

So everyone finds one partner closest to them.

Karan with Kriya
Rey with Jenny

Sharon initially finds it awkward to be with swayam but he pulls Sharon towards him n both are lost in each other's eyes...Sharon stood shock as Swaym pulled her…she could not react there was a force acting on her and she couldn't help but
getting lost into his eyes of innocence...

So No one is out..

Music plays again n every1 is dancing again...!!!

Karan realizes that its the right time to get out of the game so that it helps them clear their issues. So he purposely goes n starts to dance near Jenni so that he could also move her aside from the game as well…Jenni looked at him with a confused expression but Karan went on dancing with her.

Music stops n lights go off:

Number 3

Karan pulls Jenni close to him…while Sharon is left alone as she deliberately moves away from Swaym who stands beside Rey who was holding Kriya's hand tightly.

So, now only 3 ppl are left.. Kriya Rey n Swayam...

Rey remembers what Nikhil said at the start of the game. Someone Spl….he looks at Kria n smiles...

S: Rey music jab band ho jaye tou mujhe pakar lena...

R: kyun…tujhe kyun pakru mai??

S: wo suna nahi tune….two people will win dis game….two special people...

R: abbey oye tu kaunsa special hai..

S: acha toh Kria hai???

(Rey tries to say sumthing but shuts up…he knew wat Swaym was trying to do)

S: bata bata..

R: jus forget it..

Music plays again n all 3 are dancing again…

This time Kria tries moving away from Rey and dances wid Swaym…but as soon as the light goes off Swaym lightly pushes Kria who falls onto Rey….the lights cum bak…Kria finds herself holding on to Rey's shirt and his hand relaxed on her back….{Oho ho ho la la la la} ❤️

Nik: WOHOOO...!!!! we have the winner here now and it is Kriya and Reyansh...😃

Everybody cheers and claps for them…👏 Nik's announcement revives them and they both stand straight...!!!!!

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Nik: ok guys now here is the surprise…!!! Kria and Reyansh will be giving us a SALSA performance ...!!!

(everybody starts cheering)

K: salsa but kyun??

Nik: dats ur prize…Now can we have the winning couple onto d dance floor please...!!!

All of them move away from the dance floor…Kria looks at Rey who was smiling and felt on top of the world...!!!!!!

Nikhil plays this track n the crowd goes wild.. The best two dancers of their college are performing a salsa for them..

{ Please play this video along as u read ahead }

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The lights went off and then as soon as the guitar started playing Rey came behind Kria and caressed his hands on from her arms to her palms and swiveled her rite at the beat taking her other hand on his hand...he then kept her hand on his shoulders and waltzed at the same place moving from side to side…..then they separated and danced around doing the same step…'NOTHING CAN STOP US TONIGHT'.. At this point they both caught each others hand near their face and came so close that their faces were inches apart…he swiveled her around and picked her up from behind as the song went 'BAILAMOS'….Kriya was nervous in the beginning as it was the first time she was dancing with Rey but somehow his touch sent down a warmth in her body and calmed her down….and at every lift she trusted him more then ever.. he lifted her like a feather…her heart was also dancing with joy….she started smiling at him as she was enjoying the dance so much…she was lost in to him completely she could not feel the eyes of hundreds of 100 ppl…she jus danced along taking in the moment as Rey lifted her and they swiveled and twirled around…..Rey saw the smile on her face and knew that everything was just perfect the song the dance and them...and it felt MEJICAL...!!!!!!!

After the mesmerizing salsa performance of Kriya n Rey the host announced for a color theme partner dance..

Niks: ok guys I know after this most hot and sizzling performance every1 or shud I say all couples must be itching to hit the dance floor….soo come on guys hit the dance floor but this time I wana c only couples…eh any gay couples here(Nil and Vicky were standing beside each other who moved miles apart as Nik mentioned about gay couple) ok ok jus kidding guys now lets rock nd roll….i wana c all the colour theme partner's please..!!!

(Vicky stretched out and jumped from side to side as if he was going to play cricket)

N: abbey oye tu kya kar raha hai..

V: prepare kar raha hoon apne aap ko uske saath dance kar ne ke liye..

R: Vicky tu aise ucchal ucchal kar jaaayega na toh bhul jaa wo kabhi nahi dance karegi tere saath..

V: aisa mat bol.. tu mera dost hai ya dushman.. (he said pouting lyk a baby)

N: Vicky duffer hero ban ke jaa.. aise villain jaise kyun act kar raha hai..

R: xactly usse sweet romantic hero pasand hai neha ko.. remember??

(Neha who was standing few feet away from them spoke out loudly to Vishaka and Kria)

N: look look RDX wearing same colour as Neha…Neha go ask RDX or wait for RDX..

K: jhalli…RDX kyun aa kar puchenge tujhse..

N: oh rite den Neha going asking..

V: OMG ye ladki pagal hogayi hai..

N: wat Neha do??

V: Kria isse samjhao warna..

K: calm down calm down….Neha RDX teacher hai I dun think wo dance karenge..

(Neha made a sad face and stood watching others on the dance floor)

On the other hand Vicky who heard her was having a heart attack.

R: jaldi jaa warna tota udd jaayegi..

V: tune mere deewani ko tota bulaya..

N: abbey jaa na..

(Nil said pushing Vicky forward. He straightened up in front of Neha and put out his hand)

V: Neha will u dance with me???😳

(Neha who was shocked to find Vicky in front of him was confused whether to be shocked or be happy)

V: hum dono ka color bhi same hai..

(Neha looked at Kria and Vishaka who urged her to go on. Neha put her hand forward and they both went on the dance floor)

Kria eyes went on to Rey who was already looking at her…both were speaking out from their eyes…Rey wanted to go and ask her for the dance but was hesitant should he….will she reject but what's there to try…Kria stared at him thinking the
same…will he ask me…but why was she thinking of him asking her…does she want him to ask her..

Rey moved towards her his eyes fixed at hers…Kria knew it that he was coming to ask her for dance..ofcourse she will say no but why did her heartbeat increase suddenly why did she feel weak on her knees..

R: Kria will u dance with me .. again??

(He said smiling putting his hand forward. Vishaka's eyes went up in surprise she noticed Kria standing numb. Kria woke up)

K: haan (she said weakly)

(Vishaka was more surprised to know her answer…she then gestured her with her eyes to give her hand to Rey who was still holding out his hand…Kria realised it and put her hand on his hand…a warmth spread through her body just like when
she was doing the salsa performance with Rey. Rey felt on top of the world and pulled her to the dance floor and started dancing holding her hands twirling her around)

(Simmi who was waiting for so long for Nilesh to ask her for dance could not wait anymore…she turned down so many people just hoping Nil would ask her…but no he was busy staring at everyone and talking to Bharat and Swaym…finally he
moved towards the drinks table and Simmi went up to him)

N: Hey simmi

S: Hi Nil can I ask u sumthing

N: wat baby

S: will u dance with me?

(Nil was taken aback….he looked at her…her spoke something different today something her could not register yet)

N: ofcourse anything for u

S: so lets go

(Simmi said excitedly. And they both hit the dance floor)

(Swaym looked over at Sharon who was standing there watching everyone groove to the music…She wished Rey wore the same colour as her maybe they could have danced together but she was furious out of all the dazzling girls Rey went to dance with weakling Kripa…Swaym moved towards her…Sharon noticed him moving towards her…she knew it he wore the same colour as her and he would never leave a chance to ask her out…oh gosh she will go mental with her rudeness…she was tired of being rude and angry all the time especially with Swaym….especially when he cared soo much for her and always xpressed his love for her…omg what is she thinking why is she thinking it like this….she's certainly loosing it)

Sh: oh pls (when Swayam came to her) don't even try…u know what my answer will be..

S: but Sharon tumhe kaise pata mai kya puch ne wala tha (he asked innocently)

Sh: haa…u think I'm dumb Swayam….sab ek saaath dance kar rahe hai…u r wearing the same colour as me and u wont loose a chance to ask me for the dance….puh-lease don't make me laugh..

S: actually I will make u laugh…coz mei tumse dance ke liye puchne nahi aaya..

(This hit on Sharon…she felt furious….he did not want to ask her for the dance…why??)

Sh: tou kyun aaye ho yaha (she screamed out)

S: tumhe drink dene (he said offering her the glass)

(This made her more furious she was about to scream when Nik comes there)

Nik: wat r u both doing here…come on guys go hit the dance floor

Sh: no I think I'm fine..

S: come on Sharon sab dance kar rahe hai…lets go dance (he put out his hand)

(Sharon somehow felt a joy inside her…wait no she does not want to dance with him)

Nik: come on Sharon go dance (Nik said pushing both of them towards the dance floor)

(Swaym was relieved and top of the world that Sharon was calm and agreed to dance with him)

(Rinni who was now standing alone looked around…there was no one who asked her…not even Amar…she looked towards him, he was busy talking to Bharat)

(Amar now noticed that Rinni was alone as Sharon and Simmi were on the dance floor…he was looking out for this opportunity to ask Rinni for the dance otherwise she would have rejected if Simmi and Sharon were there with her. He went up to her)

A: Rinni (he said putting out his hand)

(Rinni did not wait for him to ask and took his hand)

Vishaka came to stand near Bharat…Bharat was in a dilemma should he ask her or not…Just then Karan was passing by when he saw the two standing together but looking miles apart.

Karan: guys come on go hit the dance floor..

And he pushed both Bharat and Vish to the dance floor..

Karan: gosh inhe tou dhakke maar maar ke sab kaam karwane padte hai (he thot to himself)

Soon aftr the dance was over the girls gathered around in a corner near the drinks table...

Sh: girls r we all set??

Si: yes Sharon its ready..

K: guys mujhe kuch sahi nahi lag raha hai...

N: zyada thinking not Kria..

V: come on kria kya ye sahi hai ke ladke unpar toot par rahe hai jus look at dem man..

(All of them turned around and looked across the dance floor where all the boys were talking cheerfully to Jenny and laughing about... All of the girls were filled with jelousy)

Rinni: Jenny maam ke saath in ladko ko bhi drinks deni chahiye….sabak sikhane ke liye...

Si: Rinni (all were staring at Rinni)…tune pehli baar kuch samajhdari ki baat ki (every1 agreed with Simmi)

K: oye pagal ho gayi ho kya..

Sh: iss mei pagal wali baat kya hai…guys its time to teach d boys a lesson…inki party spoil karne ka acha mauka hai..

K: guys par it's a risk I mean alcohol..

N: me also thinking the same..

Sh: weakling ho same hi toh sochoge..

(Vishaka was abt to say sumthing but Kria cut in btw)

K: guys Karan sir ne kaha tha na ke-

Si: Come on guys…hume pata hai ke Karan sir humari help kar rahe hai lekin ye mauka toh hum nahi gawa sakte…. aur RDX sir ko pata chal bhi gaya toh bhi woh kuch nahi karenge.. he'll jus give a warning agar pakde bhi gaye..dats it..

R: excalty RDX ki party yaad nahi hai kya??

N: arey waha toh RDX khud going talli (said Neha laughing)

K: aur yahan boys ko drinks deni hai jhalli..

V: guys jo bhi karna hai lets do it fast…anyways sab saath mai hai abhi
(she said looking towards d guys still talking to Ms.Jenny)

Simmi turns towards d table nd adds few drops in sum of the glasses. Sharon calls d waiter and directs him to hand over the glasses to the right people. After d the waiter leaves all of them hi5 and watch d boys take d drinks.

(Ms Jenny then excuses herself from the boys nd all of them spread out in different direction)

RDX sees Vicky Nilesh Amar nd Bharat and goes towards them..

RDX: guys agar aap log baat karne ke jaaga dance floor jaayenge toh it will be much better…d dance floor is empty come on guys..

N: as u say sir….Givmme d beat guys (Vicky gives d beats while all of them moves towards the dance floor)

Chale hum jhoom jhoom ke naachen

Coz d dance floor is all empty

DJ giv us sum rocking music

Coz here's d dancing stars of St.louis..

A: aley pehle drinks rakh lete hain..

V: oh rite chal drinks de I'll go keep it on d table baad mei pi lenge..

(Vicky and Amar both takes d drinks towards the table while Nilesh nd Bharat start dancing... Vicky jus den sees Neha talking to Ali)

A: thal thalte hai

V: eh…Amar tu jaa mei washroom ho ke aatha hoon..

A: theeth hai

(And Amar goes off to d dance floor while Vicky luks furiously towards Neha nd Ali)

V: Meri deewani.. fir iss chipku k saath..

(he picks one of the drinks and moves towards Neha and Ali)

V: Hi…deewani…sorry naina…I mean Neha..

(Neha looks at Vicky confused and then goes back to talking to Ali ignoring Vicky. Vicky then gets an idea)

V: arey Ali yaad aaya mujhe…tujhe na Sharon dhund rahi thi..

A: wat?? Mujhe kyun (said Ali not believing his ears)

V: pata nahi kuch kaam hai shayad ya phir tere saath dance karna chahti ho…tu jaa jaake dekh...

A: haan abhi jaatha hoon….bye Neha

(said Ali and ran off xcitedly….while Vicky was trying to control his fits of laughter)

N: y u laughing??u doing something..

(Vicky straightened up)

V: nahi Neha.. Sharon sach mei usse dhund rahi thi..

(Neha looked at him wid doubt and then started walking off Vicky then stopped her holding on to her hand….Neha turned and looked towards Vicky who was lost into her eyes….Neha looked at his cute adorable face and her heart softened…wenever she would look at him she cannot help but not be angry at him…she smiled weakly)

V: ye drink tumhare liye (he offered her the same drink jisme gals ne add kiya tha)

N: for me…thnx deewane…sorry wo (she started blushing and both of them laughed…then Vicky put his hand out to her)

V: dance??

(Neha looked at him wid awe and then smiled)

N: Yes

(Neha quickly finished her drink and went off wid Vicky on the dance floor)

Meanwhile Rinni and Simmi were going on, on their giggly talks and deir gossips while Vishaka looked around bored looking for Neha who suddenly seemed to disappear and waiting for Kria who went to the washroom. She looked around for Bharat but could not spot him also..

Suddenly RDX cums up to dem..

RDX: girls hi

R&S(all dreamy): hi RDX

V: Hey sir (throwing a disgust look towards Rinni nd Simmi)

RDX: girls aap log yaha kya kar rahe hai…come on go to dance floor and enjoy

R S V: Yes sir

They go to the dance floor and spot Nil Amar Bharat and next to them Vicky and Neha. Nil moves towards Simmi and Rinni and starts dancing with dem while Vishaka dances with Amar and Bharat.

The girls get thirsty and go to the table where the drinks dat the boys kept were still there. Not knowing its d same glasses where they added alcohol.. Rinni Simmi and Vishaka drinks from the glasses and hit the dance floor all of them dancing
together now while Neha was going bonkers bouncing around as she was high while Vicky was trying his level best to make her stay at one spot and dance..

Sharon came out of the washroom looking for Simmi Rinni when suddenly she slipped and fell into sumone's arms.. She was abt to say sorry when she looked up to see who it was. His grip tightened around her waist holding her while he had a drink on the other hand…and Sharon held on to his shirt and shoulder for support. His touch created a spell around her body and she could not move. She just stared into his innocent eyes which looked back at her with so much love and care in them. Why why did his looking at her and his love affect her so much. She could not believe that someone could love someone so much. She's always so rude to him but still he stands lyk a wall and accepts her rudeness her arrogance wid
open arms. He understands her so well sumthing which she can probably never do but sumwhere in her heart she wants to but then there's her arrogance which is stopping her..

Sh: Just leave me...

S: Sharon agar mein tumhe chodh dun abhi toh tum ghir jaogi..

Sharon realised she was totally imbalanced….because of her heels she couldn't stand…slowly she gripped more tightly on his shoulders and moved closer to him while his hand slided from her waist up to her back supporting her from the back to
come to a standing position. It gave Sharon a tingling feeling on her spine and she jerked up and went so close that their faces were inches apart. Both stared into each others eyes lost as Sharon held on to him and Swaym's hands rested on her
back. Swaym stared at her wid awe, she looked lyk an angel in white her beautiful big deep eyes where he always drowns and her soft skin which he always wished to touch…yes she was definitely an angel.. his angel...

Suddenly Sharon came back to her senses and drew back away from Swaym as she was balanced now. She was furious at herself and was about to leave when Swaym stopped her...

S: Sharon u ok na?

Sh: tumhe kya(she scremed out)…I'm ok

S: tum gusse mei kyun ho..

Sh: dats my prob u dnt need to bother..

S: fyn nahi karunga bother…waise Jenny ma'am keh rahi thi…arrangements r really good..

(d mention of Ms Jenny did it)

Sh: oh of course y will u bother abt me now…Jenny maam jo hai abhi..

S: wat?? tum kya keh rahi ho??

Sh: u knw wat I dun care wat she thinks..

(nd she was abt to walk off when he stopped her again)

S: Sharon calm down acha tum ye drink pi lo u'll feel better..

Sh: excuse me I can take care of myself u dnt need to bother..

S: theek hai toh mai ye drink kisi aur ko offer kar leta hoon maybe Jenny maam ko

Swaym was joking arnd wid her but this hit like a rock on Sharon's head and she took the glass from Swaym furiously and drank d juice in one sip .. nd Swaym looked at her in shock while she handed him d empty glass back and walked off..!!

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Meanwhile Rey was talking to some people and kept his drink on d table'After the people left, Rey turned towards the table and set his hand out for his glass but realised he was not holding the glass but another hand which was already gripping the glass. He looked up and at the same time so did she..

K: aap??

R: tum??

K: aapki problem kya hai?? mei jo bhi cheez pakdu, aap hamesha uske peecha hi pad jaate ho..

R: mei peeche padta hoon?? oho tum hamesha ussi cheez ko haat lagati ho meri hoti hai

(He took the glass from her)

K: tameez toh hai hi nahi aap mein..

(She snatched the glass from him back)

R: tameez excuse me'tumhe tameez hai ya nahi?? this is my drink

(Rey snatched the drink from her again)

K: Rey aap mujhe ye drink de rahe ho ya nahi'maine pehle liya tha isse..

(She took the glass from him but he didn't let go and both of them held the glass pulling towards each other)

R: glass maine rakha tha table par..

K: naam nahi likha yahan'mujhe drink chahiye aap dusra le lo..

R: mai kyun dusra lu'tum lo na ye mera drink hai..

K: nahi ye mera hai..

R: mera hai..

And they started bickering and they pulled the glass soo hard that all the juice went out and splashed on to someone's face'.

it was Nilesh.

N: WAT THE-

(Both of them stood shocked with d glass in their hands)

R: sorry sorry Nil

K: really sorry Nilesh jaan bhuj kar nahi kiya.. { i hope u don't wanna c the same paint wala scene, i.e kriya cleaning up Nil... lolz.. could'nt help myself imagining that.. that was tooo funny..😆🤣 }

N: jaan bhuj kar'.ye kindergarten party hai kya jo bacho jaise ladai kar rahe ho??

K: maine nahi isne strt kiya tha..

R: oho maine strt kiya'glass tumne mera liya tha..

K: first come first serve..

N: CHUP dono CHUP..

(Both of them stood straight as Nil screamed)

R: arey Nil chod na sorry bhai ab chal tu saaf kar le..

N: AYE'haath mat laga'mere muh pe daal diya hai tumne juice ab udd gaya hai mera fuse..!!

(Kria took sum tissue from the table and gave to Rey and Rey went and hugged Nil)

R: sorry bhai tu mera chota bhai hai na'chal mei saaf kar deta hoon..

N: meri shirt bhi kharab kar di..

R: haan abhi saaf ho jayega..

(And Rey takes him to the washroom)

Kria on the other hand caught her head'.kya kar rahi hai jhalli'.Karan sir ne kaha tha sweet and smile'aur mei chali jung ladne...ufff!!!!!'.dats it ab se jo wo karenge mai wohi karungi'.sweet and smile...!!!!!!!😳😛😉

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Rey n Nikhil (DJ) move towards the bar section.. They order Taquila shots fr themselves.. !!!

Kriya follows Rey as she remembers the mission on which she had come to party.. (To b close to the guys n be sweet n smile )

Rey n Nikhil r sitting on the stools right in front of the bar.. Kriya comes n get seated next to Rey..

R: Kriya ,Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho. .??

K: kyu, mein jahan bhi jaun.. tumhe kya..

K ( to the bartender) : Taquila shots for me too..

R: What?? u mad or wt?? Tum shots nahin piyoge.. this is not meant fr gals ( tells the bartender not to give her )

K: Excuse me.. who r u to stop me??

K:( to the bartender) Aapko sunayi nahin diya meine kya kaha.. i need shots.. abhi

K( To Rey): agar aap shots lenge, toh mein bhi lungi..

( Nikhil excuses himself n goes away leaving them alone ) { sensible guy }

R: theek hai ur wish.. baad mein mujhe mat kehna ki meine roka nahin..

( Rey thinks ki ek shot ke baad iska pagalpan khatam ho jaega.. n wont affect her also much)

K: haan haan theek hai.. nahin kahungi.. acha yeh toh batao, isse lete kaise hain??

(Guys please try mat kar lena sachi mein.. 😆🤣)

R: acha just c ki mein kaise leta hun..

The bartender puts two small glasses wid taquila wid lemon n salt.. (nicely decorated)

{ i wish i cud click the pic of these glasses in my mind n post it.. some of u might have seen it as well in movies..😃 }

R: Have some salt 1st n then take the glass and have d entire thing in one go.. have d lemon n salt.. just follow wt i do..

Rey shows her what to do.. n she follows..

Kriya gives a very weird expression after having it..

R: kaha tha na.. now.. lets go n enjoy at the dance floor..

Kriya holds his hand n stops him..

K (To bartender) : One more shot plz..

R: tum pagal ho gayi ho kya.. acha mein bhi aur nahin lunga.. toh tum bhi nahin loge.. (to the bartender) plz give her a soft drink or a juice..

K( To bartender) : hum party mein guests hain.. so jo mein bolenge, aapko follow karna padega.. give us 2 shots...

Bartender was also helpless.. he gave them.. { mujhe bartender imagine kar sakte ho waise }

R: m not having it n neither r u.. so come we will go..

K: aree gr8.. toh matlab yeh dono mere?? bye Rey..

R: shut up kriya.. chup chap chalo warna mein Jenny maan ya karan sir ko bula launga yahan..

K: Oyee. . dhamki kisko de rahe ho.. jao tum apni jenny maam k paas.. mujhe koi farak ni padta usse..

( She takes her 2nd shot )

R: acha kriya toh theek hai.. ab u had one more na.. toh chalo lets go now..

K: jab tak u wont have another one wid me, i'll keep having.. { She started feeling something now }

R: meine kaha na, ki i wont have more..

(Kriya is abt to take d 3rd one now but is stopped by Rey)

R: acha, toh 1st promise ki this is d last one u r having it..

K: haan promise..

(Both have them together this time.. Kriya gets high at this time.. Rey is all fine)

{ Gals ko generally hits really fast wen compared to guys }

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Kria gets separated from Rey and goes to Vishaka and Neha who themselves were high'Sharon Simmi and Rinni laugh out loud cracking useless jokes and cums to d weakling girls..

K: abbey tum logo ko bhi chad gayi hai kya??

Sh: mera tou mann kar raha hai ke jhooom utthu nacho gaaau...

Si: tou lets dance Sharon..

V: DJ music pls...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SmM0653YvXU&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

And all the six of them hit the dance floor going crazy and dancing around'all of them were grooving on to the music as if they all were best of friends.

The guys suddenly noticed some noise towards the dance floor'everyone was cheering around'.they then noticed all the girls dancing mad..

Sw: inhe kya hua hai??

A: mujhe tou aisa lad raha hai te mai sapna deth raha hoon..

V: pata nahi dude ye logo chad gayi hai shayad?? Neha toh kabse talli hui padi hai..

R: but kaise'sirf Kria ne hi tou piya tha mere saath.. but in logo mei kaise transfer ho gaya (Swaym heard it and gave him a look'Rey looked at him)

R: wo usne zid ki thi.. maan hi nahin ri thi..

S: jo bhi ho guys ye ladkiyan sahi nahi lag rahi.. kuch ulta seedha na kar baithe.. so we have to do sumthing...

N: but kare kya ye toh tut padi hain dance floor par..

B: abhi batata hoon in sabko (said Bharat twisting his hand and going towards the girls but the guys stopped him)

R: ruk bhai tu ruk jaa.. maar se nahi pyaar se handle karna hai... samjha..

(Karan came up to the boys)

K: wat's happening boys??

S: sir we have no idea (he said stopping Rey to say anything abt Kria)

V: sir ye ladkiyon ko to suddenly chad gayi'.mei tou Neha ke saath dance kar raha tha aur meri deewani mujhe chod ke bhaag gayi kahin aur naachne...

K: ok I see'waise party toh tum ladko ne organize ki hai na?

V: yes sir acha laga (he asked xcitedly and Nil hit him on d head)

K: acha toh laga'lekin ye dekh kar RDX ko shayad acha na lage and Princi ko bhi sunne mei acha na lage..

A: toh sir hum thya therein..

K: mauke pe chauka..

BOYS: WAT??

K: well girls abhi nashe mei hai aur yahan wahan bhatak rahe hai'go save dem and be der hero (all went in to imaginary dreamland) and mayb seduce dem (sab sharmane lag gaye) aur phir ghar chod ke aao (said Karan seriously and all of dem
agreed)

BOYS: yes sir

After Karan advised the guys to take the girls home he looked around for Jenny its been a long time since he din see her' he was thinking if she went back home'he asked RDX nd few other students but they didn't notice her'he went around the hall and bounced and fell over a red huge thing sitting resting on the pillar'.later he noticed that red huge thing was someone..

K: wat the hell'.kaun hai ye?

She jeerked up her head and looked up

J: main hoon (Jenny said in a funny cheery mood lyk a kid)

K: JJ tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?? (he said all confused and worried looking at her weird behaviour)

J(she got up but lost her balance but Karan held her): wo na baby mai pata nahi jabse juice piya ajeeb lag raha hai'kabhi man karta hai jhoomu tou kabhi bahut sad feel hota hai'mai confused hoon..

K: tumne pi rakhi hai..

J: hai???oye mei piti nahi hoon'maine toh sirf juice piya tha baby (she said pulling Karan's cheeks)

K: oh god kya karu tumhara'ab RDX ke saamne bhi nahi leke jaa sakta..

J: theek mai jati hun fir (she said about to go)

K: arey ruko tum.. tum party mei nahi jaa sakti (he said stopping her)

J: kyun??

K: kyun ke maine kaha hai..

J: tum na (she said pointing her fingers at his face) bahot bure ho'u r very MEAN(she screamed)

K: chilla kyun rahi ho meri maa'acha tum mere saath chalo hum ek aur interesting party mein chalte hain

J: NAHI

K: kyun (said Karan thinking hard of wat to do)

J: kahan na maine tum bohot bure ho'u r very bad (she said tears rooling down her cheeks'Karan stood shell-shocked'.he looked deep into her eyes and he felt as if it was the first time he saw her'all he saw was pain)

K: kyun JJ'maine kya kiya (he whispered softly)

J: tumne mujhe bahut hurt kiya'mei tumhari bestfrnd thi na'but tumhare liye har cheez mazak tha'u betrayed me'.mujhe utna bura nahi laga'but u betrayed our friendship'bahut bura laga (she said pouring down more tears and resting her head on Karan)'.mai thak chuki tumse ladai karte karte'plz dun fight with me anymore..

Karan didn't know what to do'he felt helpless'how could she say he betrayed her'when she did the same'how could she say he fights when she started all the fights'.she was the one who left him without saying even a word as if deir friendship never existed'but the truth was even though he was hurt sa much as she is, he still cared for her'he still luvd her as his best buddy his JJ.

Karan held her face and wiped her tears.

K: lets go I'll take u home..

Jenny was half asleep to respond'and Karan picks her up and leaves with out being noticed'.he puts her on the car seat and gives a call to RDX to inform him that he and Jenny are leaving...

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After the gal's talli dance Kria and Sharon sat on the table singing loudly...

Sh: Kria you are so much fun yaar..

K: I knw tum bhi yaar..

Sh: lekin hum hamesha jagadte rehte hain..

K: tum ladti ho mai nahi..

Sh: I knw mai bahut buri hoon..

K: aww nahi tum achi ho (she said hugging Sharon)

Rinni: kya mujhe sach mein chad gayi hai ya mai sapna dekh rahi hun??

N: neha also not believing Sharon and Kria's behaving like?

Si: u knw wat we shud learn from dem'chalo hum bhi dost ban jaate hai..

V: u r rite Simmi...

And all of dem except Sharon and Kria have a group hug and Vicky Nil Amar Bharat breaks the group hug and takes away each of the girls back home.

Rey and Swaym moved towards the girls to take them out of the party.

R: Swaym ye epic moment ka toh video shoot karna chahiye... imagine Shaorn and Kria hugging.. kal coll mein dikhayenge yeh video unko..😆

Sw: seriously dude aise mile hue hai aaj jaise bichre hue behene ho..

R: Sharon

Sw: Kria

R: chalo ghar chalo

Sh: Nahiii..

(Sharon screamed and got up on the table)

K: abey kaha chad rahi hai tu ??

Sh: shhh bohot bolti ho tum'.MAI GHAR NAHI JAUNGI..

R: Oh God abhi toh RDX yahan nahi hai.. agar isse dekh liya toh we r dead dude..

S: kuch toh karna padega'.Sharon plz neeche uttar jao..

Sh: kyun kyun uttro mein??'mei yehi khadi rahungi..

K: arey chal mai tujhe company deti hun (and she held Sharon's hand to get up but Rey caught her and pulled her to sit and Kria pulled Sharon's hand and she fell right into Swaym's arms)

Swaym caught her right on time'Sharon had her eyes shut..

S: its ok u r safe now..

(She slowly opened her eyes... look look hawa hawa)

(Behind them Kria started laughing)

K: gir gayi gir gayi Sharon Swaym ke baahon mei gir gayi...😆🤣

S: Rey tu usse sambhal mei isse sambhalta hoon..

(Rey looked at Kria with a serius face)

K: maine kya kiya??

R: ab chalo..

K: nahiii mujhe dance karna hai (and she jumped off the table and ran off to the dance floor but also pulled Rey wid her)

Edited by ~~ MICK ~~ - 13 years ago