HEARTBEAT: Part 14 updated [ EXAM FEVER ]

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Amina

@KreyaArshiLover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#411

HA HA HA LOLZ ROLF you really made laugh at the Kran part and the evil laugh was also so damn funny Kriyansh why why god are they so cute loved the part bothe holding hands so cute

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Araina

@-Araina-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#412

Read part 8

Short comment again --

WOW!! Kya twist hai!

Loved it yaaro.

JJ and Karan.. fighting.

Lolzz RDX beech mei.

Well, I never really was fan of JJ

Still am not

But you guys portrayed it really well

Both working together.

Love the new rule JJ put up.

Abt them having to dance together.

love the flow of the story.

COnt soon.

Yes, even I had thought maybe Kriyansh.

But was still unsure

Now I get why I was unsure

Ha-ha

Will read the latest input soon.

Love you both.

Take Care!!

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Araina

@-Araina-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#413

WHAT!! Part 9 is this short???!!!!!

Well, still can't read ryt now.

So will read tomorrow or on wednesday..

Nytime this week when I get time.

Finally M catching up

Yayyy

Haha

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kumjoo

@kumjoo

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#414

Achha...I am not editing the Reserved Post..LOL

UPDATE REVIEW:

YEH KYA UPDATE THA??? Aandhi ki tarah Aaya, and Toofan ki Tarah chala gaya...ITNA CHOTA??

HATT!! Kya Kya soch kar baith rahi thi main...DIL KE AARMAN ASOOWON MEIN BEHE GAYE!!! 😭 LOL

Kya yaar!! I was ready with my dancing Shoes ...

Anyways, Tum dono ki Writing ki toh, everytime ek hi baat kehni hai ...MINDBLOWING UNDOUBTEDLY ...

Sawal raha Story ...Hmmm...Karan Mallik on Girl's side ..Hmm..Interesting ...D3 mein he is on Boy's side and in this FF..Girl's side ...Thats very interesting ..Hmmm...

BTW, Next part is also Karan and Jenny kya??

KRIYAANSH ko BHOOL gaye ho kya MICK and FARAH!! GAJINI toh nahi ho gaye?? 🤣 ..LOL , I am kidding ...

UPDATE FAST else Aarti ko Bol kar tum dono ko ghar se UTHWA lungi...🤣

LOL ...VERY GOOD YA! GOOD JOB ...AS ALWAYS ...👏 Mere bolne ki Jaroorat hi nahi ..You guys Know it ..I am gonna love it ...

HAPPY WRITING..😊

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sana

@_sana.Magic_

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#415

sweet and smile...kria's plan and now applied by karan is surely gonna work on the boys

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#416

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Angel

@Endurance

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#417

OMG OMG haila party

main to abhi se party k khaaab dekh rahi hun lol

marvellous work both of u bravo

gals jealous hahahahahahahahahaha ab pata chala larkon par kya beeti hai

bravo to u ...

party jaldi karo tum log

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Himani

@Infinities

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#418

awesomme job mick n farah yaar , u r juzt too fabulous at this , and the party , yaar jaldi update karo , i relly cant wait 4 it , loved this part !!!