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Angel

@Endurance

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#401

awsum micky and farah yar invite humain bi karo thats not fair hum bin bulaye mehmaan bankar ayenge wats says

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farah sharmin

@sweetshine

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: bakho
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RECAP!!! hahaaha... asli show wali feeling aney lag gai hai ab tou full on!!! hehehe

(OK WHILE READING DIS SCENE IMAGINE THE SONG TUMSE MILKE FROM MAIN HOON NA😳)

hehehe imagining 😆

came the sound of little bells ringing 🤣

all the guys turned around to find the source and their mouths dropped down

😲 aisa kya dekh liya!!!

coming up the stairs was a BEAUTY'

😲 haila ...new entry!!!

made all the guys go gaga over her 🤣🤣

aweesum explanation yrrr...😊.. u guys r soo gud wid da words...👍🏼. explaining da new character.. i can totally imagine her lyk dat... and karans thoughts..and den Jenni's( btw i didnt knw it was jenny... but i was at da AT side by side tou u guys tld aarti woj JJ nd dhokaibaz wala stuff tou mujhe pata chal gaya..hehe😆) feelings... awwweeessuummm!!!!!!!👏
(aww thnk u 😳😳lolz we jus thot adding a twist wud be interesting😉)
and the most precious thing it gave her was friends'

awww...😊

Nil: phir se bhaj gaya is ka recorder 🤣🤣🤣

Yeh hain Ms Jennifer Gupta'and she is here as the new Dance assistant for our College..

niceee... i likes... 👏

Boys: yes sir ofcourse sir no problem sir..
Jenni: Wow' the boys seem to be more mature here' well then I'll c you all later for rehearsals. 🤣

This angered the girls more and they left off from there.

jealous haannn... batao batao..tell tell... 🤣 im tou loving it!!! 😆

kiske bare mei soch raha hai??

V: Ms. Jennyyy.. ~~ ❤️

i can sooo totally imagine dis scene!!! awweessuummm!!!! 😆

K: boys par Jenny ka jadu'girls honge bekaabu'interesting..😆😆😆

(Rey who was standing beside Vicky hugged him)

R: kya idea diya hai tu.. toh pakka mera bhai hai.. kitni achi soch hai teri

(said Rey both hugged each other while Rey kissed him on the cheek) { lol }

Nilesh lukd at dem wid disgust..

N: GUYS (he screamed out and separated the 2) tum dono ko ho kya jata hai party ka naam lete hi??
V: arey tu chodd na (said Vicky nd moved Nil away nd went nd stood beside Rey hugging him nd both strtd kuchi kooing each other while Nil hit his head on d desk nd Swaym Bharat nd Amar stood dere laughing)😆😆

🤣 cant stop laughing!! 🤣🤣🤣
arey yaaarrr... ilove u guys for adding dis... i missed RECKY sooo much!!! 🤗
(oh i knw miss RECKY too😒)
opened the fire exit door and pulled Jenny in.

awww... dmg ki yaden taza ho gai!!! 😊

K: wait a sec u knw wat I think tume zaroor yahan BAI ki naukri mili hogi hai na hai na (he said xcitedly)🤣

lemme guess shayad paanch saalo se FAIL ho rahe hoge.. is liye abhi tak yehi aatke hue ho'sad...!!!!🤣🤣🤣 maar dalo gai hasa hasa kar!!!

J: OMG councilor'.kis andhe ne tumhe councilor banaya'.aur kis cheez ki counseling karne aaye ho? yehi ke tattoos kaise banwane hai? ya phir doley sholey kaise banana hai?? ya phir usse bhi acha ek din, ladki in ka funda...

😆 amar ko tou yehi sikhaya issne... 😆
(i knw😆)
RDX: ab chup chup ke fights karne lag gaye ye weaklings aur dazzlers😆 🤣

Karan and Jenny stopped with fingers pointing at each other as they noticed RDX on the door and looked embarrassed and moved away from each other.

🤣🤣🤣 totally imagining dis scene... students ki larai khatam karne aey they yeh!! hehehe🤣

K: andhe..🤣🤣🤣

RDX: and the Princi said it would be a delight if you both would work together and bring them all 2gether..

K&J: WAT??

hahahaha... wat a joke!!!🤣🤣🤣 hogai teams aik ab achi tarhan se!!🤣🤣

farah nd micky... maza aa gaya!!! ...kya likhte ho yarrr .👏... brilliant... aweesuumm...mind blowing...outstanding...out ov dis world... balke main tou kehti hun out ov dis universe!!🤣 aur kya kahun main... ainda dictionary pass rakha karun gee for more words!!🤣🤣🤣
lagey raho ishi tarhan!!! 😊

awww BAKHO luv ur comment🤗...THANK U SOOO MUCH 🤗soo glad u ENJOYED it 😃😳and LAUGHED also which u usually make us do🤣...lolz ab mujhe yaad aaya how cum i din reply earlier wen i read ur comment i was laughing for 5 mins literally but den had to leave nd latr on forgot😛😆SORRY😳...lolz dictionary rakhne ki zaroorat nahi hai tumhare bhare bhare LPHB se hum samajh jaayenge🤣🤣

Edited by sweetshine - 13 years ago

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~~ MICK ~~

@~~ MICK ~~

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#403

Recap:

Entry of Karan n Jenny.. Boys planning to throw a party for Ms Jenny n Karan..

Part 9:

(Kriya was walking in the corridors looking around for Rey…she peeped into classes but could not find him anywhere. Finally he spotted him near the Fire Exit.. she called out to him but he did not respond…he was blindly walking towards someone and when she spotted that someone, she got really furious….Rey ignored her n did not even hear her calling him. This was utterly disgusting on his part)

(Kria moved closer so as they wont see her and tried to eavesdrop)

Rey seemed to be asking for something. All Kria could hear was:

R: so 7 is fyn?

J: yes Rey its perfectly fyn and thank u soo much I'll c u at 7..

(Jenny said smilingly nd left….Rey was all happy and he turned around when he was met with an angry furious face)

R: oh Kria….hi

K: DISGUSTING

R: wait wat??

K: aap itni cheap harkat kar sakte ho ye kabhi nahin socha tha..

R: waise bhi tum yeh kab nahin sochti …tumhare liye toh mei hamesha gira hua hun..

(Said Rey getting angry nd leaving off... Kria walked behind him)

K: lekin aaj toh hadd kar di aapne…ek teacher ko

(Rey stopped nd turned to her)

R: wat teacher ko….tum kya keh rahi ho mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai..

K: kyun aayega samajh….chori pakdi gayi…bahana bana rahe ho..

R: chori wat chori?

K: sab jaan gayi hoon mai…ke aap Ms. Jenny ko date pe leke jaa rahe ho..

R: WAT?? R U OOUT OF UR MIND...???? OMG

K: zyada baniye mat achi tarah se pehchaan gayi hoon aapko (said Kriya like a little miss know it all)

R: kuch nahi jaaanti tum….tum tum ….u r mad seriously

K: mai mad hoon….fyn abhi jaa kar batati hoon princi ko ke kuch ladke aapne hadd paar karne pe tule hue hai

(said Kria nd walked off but Rey jus caught her nd pulled her in d fire exit)

K: ye kya kar rahe ho aap..

R: tumhari problem kya hai haan?

K: kya??

R: tum hamesha galat kyun samjhti ho mujhe?

K: galat insaano ko galat nahi samjhu toh kya samjhu?

R: urrgh

(screamed Rey in frustration nd moved closer to her pinning her to d wall)

R: tumhe jo bhi samjhna hai samajho.. I dun care now..(he moved away from her)…aur haan assistant GS aaj raat ko party organize ki hai hum logon ne humare naye profs. ke liye…agar help kar sakti ho toh ..!! Naah..!! just forget it..

(Kria realized she acted like a fool thinking dat he asked Ms.Jenny on a date wen he was just inviting her to the party)

K(thinking mann mein): universe ji !!! mere kya dushmani hai aapse??

(Rey was about to leave wen Kria caught his hand and moved up towards him)

K: Rey I'm really sorry who mujhe bas aisi hi laga ke

R: its ok…waise bhi I dun think tum kabhi bhi mujhe samajh sakti ho.. leave it.. aadat ho gayi hai mujhe ab iske..

(he said depressingly n was about to leave wen Kria caught his hand again and this tym not leaving it…Rey was lost in to her holding him)

K: plz I'm really sorry….aage se mai bina soche kabhi bhi aapko galat nahi samjhungi….sorry

(Rey stared at her innocent face….he could not believe it that he is just falling for her more and more day by day)

R: oh really or iski kya gurantee kya hai??

(Kri looked wid a guilty face and was embarrassed)

K: Romaira is really sorry…mai kya karun who mujhse

R: galti se galti ho jati hai

(both smiled at each other and started laughing remembering how Kria dropped paint on Rey and den dey suddenly went quiet. Kria still held Rey's hand Rey moved closer.. ohooo hooo la la la la (luk luk hawa hawa)

R: lekin tumne abhi tak ye nahi bataya..

K: kya?? (said Kria softly as she felt weak wid him soo close but y she thought)

R: kyun farak padta hai tumhe ke mai kisi bhi ladki ko date pe leke jaun..

(Kria did not know wat to say she looked around to think)

K: mujhe jaana hai...class shuru hone wali hai...

(She den realised that she was holding Rey's hand and was shocked…her cheeks going pink…she quickly ran off….Rey was left smiling)

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Rinni and Simmi were walking towards the locker to meet Sharon when they saw the notice board and stopped dead..

R: OMG

S: wat the hell is dis????

Up on the board was the notice for the invite to the party tonight...

R: Simmi iska matlab planning already shuru bhi ho gayi?? Sharon will be soo upset to hear this..

S: I knw lekin batana toh padega...

R: yaa... M sure she will plan out something nice..

(They both run off to the locker room)

(Neha and Vishaka were waiting for Kria in the locker room….Sharon came out from the washroom n then entered her chellies Rinni nd Simmi)

R: Sharon...!!! bad news hai

Sh: who nayi teacher humme dance sikhayegi and dat to wid dese bloody weaklings... isse zyada bad aur kya ho sakta hai

R: lekin Sharon news sach mei bahut buri hai..

S: yes Sharon d boys….dey r jus too much…wo party throw kar rahe hai for Ms. Jenny...

Sh, V, N: WAT???

N: u mean dazzler boys rite..

R: nahi even d weakling boys

Vish: how can u b soo sure abt than man

S: abhi dekh kar aa rahe hai sab party discuss kar rahe the

(Sharon stood there stunned nd furious)

Sh: dis is sooo disgusting…ladke hume bina bataye party plan kar rahe hai.. They shud have at least asked us abt it..

S: Sharon we have to do something…ye teacher na.. she's jus going to ruin everything

R: xactly...!!! hum dono grps ko ek saath dance... no way!!!!

(Neha nd Vishaka looked at them and gave an agreeable look)

V: interest toh hume bhi nahi hai tum logo ke saath dance karne ka

N: Neha thinking jo bhi planning doing ek saath doing.. will be easier fr us

R: u r rite…Sharon hum sab ko milke Ms. Jenny ko nikalna chahiye..

(Sharon thot for a while)

Sh: fyn lets plan sumthing...

(Just then Kria entered the locker room and Vishaka nd neha called out to her but Kria was lost….she wasn't responding…she was smiling and lost thinking about something. Neha came nd jerked her up)

N: Kria which world u in…hum kabse calling

K: huh uh wo mei kuch soch rahi thi

N: wat u also knowing abt it

K: knowing wat Neha

V: ke dazzler boys aur weaklings boys r planning a party for Ms. Jenny

K: haan wo toh pata hai mujhe

N: wat how u knowing??

V: how chodo neha, ab wat do v do??

K: karna kya hai (all confused)

(Simmi goes to Kria)

S: kya tum chahti ho ke hum ek grp ban kar rehearse kare??

K: mei wo

V: ofcourse not (ans Vishaka for Kria)

Sh: isn't it irritating ke ladke pagalo jaise behave kar rahe hai jab se yeh Ms. Jenny aayi hai

N: xactly hume toh ms.Jenny ko tata babye karna padega….how boys staring lyk owls at Ms. Jenny

(Kria was confused she didn't know what to think… yes she was frustrated that Rey was all so going gaga over Ms.Jenny .. oh wait.. wat is she thinking no no….all d boys not only Rey….nd she was confused wat is happening to her wat was all dat
abt in d fire escape….oh Universeji aap hi kuch karo)

Sh: so guys ready for planning

S: yes mission Ms. Jenny out..

(And all the girls cheered together while Kria was sumwat lost)

(Karan observed from outside…his mind got struck with an idea sumthing that will keep these girls together and something that he will enjoy to watch)

(The weakling nd the dazzling girls walked in confusion)

N: y sir calling us girls..

S: mayb wo humse baat karna chahte hai (all dreamy)

R: Simmi mai faint ho jaungi toh mujhe pakar lena..

(They reach Karan's office who was reading a file and looking at the girls gets up immediately to welcum the girls)

Karan: aaah WELCUM girls cum in cum in (xcitedly)

Kriya: sir aapne hum sab ko kyun bulaya??

Karan: maine tum logo ki help karne ke liye yaha bulaya hai

Sh: help.. for wat sir?

Karan: Ms. Jenny

All of dem: WAT???

(Neha went near to Kria nd whispered nervously)

N: how he knowing our planning??

Karan: girls dun be shocked…I understand…I really do... is liye toh mai counsellor hoon..

(All d girls looked at him as if he was alien and talking alienish)

Karan: I know tum log nahi chahte Jenny yahan par rahe….but how will u do it??

R: ye toh abhi tak nahi socha sir..

(blurted Rinni and Simmi hit her wid her elbow nd Sharon gave her the look)

Karan: xactly mai tum ladkiyon ki help karunga.. u c I knw Jenny inside out.. toh mein aur ache se help kar sakta hoon tum logo ki

(All of dem looked at him suspiciously)

V: sir agar aap unko jante hai itne acha tara se den y wud u help us against ur friend

Karan: well thats coz ke I luv to play pranks on jenny.. aftrall meri frnd hai wo..

(All of dem nodded quite confused nd not really sure if they should believe him)

R: Sir wat do u think we should do?

N: yes sir ye boys toh acting very bad

Karan: hmm boys ke saath gusse se nahi pyaar se baat karo..

Every1: KYA??PYAAR SE?

Karan: yes…gussa mat dikhao wo tumse aur dur chale jaayenge (he said walking around d girls slowly while all of them were thinking deep into Karan's words)
socho agar tum boys ke saath rahoge toh wo Jenny se dur rahenge aur wo kya karte hain, ya woh kya karenge, iss ke baare mein bhi tumhe khabbar hogi….act sweet nd smile...!!!

Karan: well for now enjoy the party today...

K: sir dats really sweet of u to help us thnku..

Sh: yes sir

Karan: oh come on we r all frnds here and dis is nothing…tum ladkiyon ka khayal rakhne Karan aa gaya soo relax..

All the girls left Karan's office while he smiled mischieviously thinking of his plan..

Karan(to himself): ladkiyan phass gayi…plan A successful….ab inke beech ke diff ko khatam karna hai.. lekin usse pehle BUHAHAHA(his funny dmg evil laugh)….sum pranks on JJ…kitna maza aayega..

(he said xcitedly lyk a kid)

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Edited by ~~ MICK ~~ - 13 years ago

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~~ MICK ~~

@~~ MICK ~~

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#404

After the college.. Rey, Vick, Swayam meet up at Rey's place..

Vick: yaar.. yeh party host kaun karega??
Rey: well, dont worry abt it.. mein kar raha hun iska kuch..!!!!!
Sw: yaar.. i hope aaj i get to dance wid sharon..😳
Rey: woh tabhi possibe hai jab u'll be in the same outfit as her..
Vick: matlab??😲
Rey: matlab aaj ki party ka theme hai colour.. agar tujhe neha ke saath dance karna hai, toh u both shud be in the same colour outfits..
Vick: haan samjha.. but humein pata kaise chalega ki ladkiyan kaunse colour k outfits pehenegi??
Rey: usmein swayam tumhari help kar sakta hai..
Sw: What?? Mein??
Rey: Tum neha aur Kriya ke friend ho.. toh kya tum yeh pata nahin laga sakte ki woh dono kaunsa color daal k aayenge?
vick: aree haan.. yeh idea acha hai..
Sw: haan toh theek hai.. Vicky ko neha pasand hai.. tabhi he wants to know ki neha kaunsa colour ka outfit pehne wali hai..but Rey tujhe Kriya ka colour kyu jaana hai??
vick: mein bhi yahi soch rha tha..
Rey: wooo woo mein mein toh aise hi.. ab socho, agar waha koi dance battle hua, toh mujhe kriya ko face karna padega na..
vick: ohh acha.. swayam kriya ka bhi pta kar dena..😆
sw: woh toh mein kar dunga guys,, but tum bhi agar sharon..
Rey: of course dude.. dnt worry abt that.. i'l keep u informed..!!

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Thats all for Part 9.. i know ki next part was suppose to be a Party.. its coming up really soon.. in fact more than half of it is already over.. will post that too in a couple of days i guess.. it was a while since we had updated.. so we added this one here..!!!!

I can promise that party is gonna be really amazing...!!!

Thanks for Reading...!!!!!!!!

~~ Mick N Farah ~~

Edited by ~~ MICK ~~ - 13 years ago

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Araina

@-Araina-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#405

So finally free today.

Will finish reading chapter 7...

might give short comment though :(

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farah sharmin

@sweetshine

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#406

HEY PPL HOPE U LOVE ND ENJOY DIS PART...VERY UNUSUALLY SHORT PART😆😆...BUT D NEXT ONE IS GONA BE A LONG ONE AND U GUYS R SURELY GONA ENJOY IT AS ITS PARTYYY TIME😃...WILL UPDATE SOON D PARTYY😃😳

Edited by sweetshine - 13 years ago