HEARTBEAT: Part 14 updated [ EXAM FEVER ] - Page 39

Originally posted by: kajen

heyyya mickah😆

kaise ho

sab badhiya

good news kab suna rhe ho

bolo bolo

tell tell

sharmao mat

i don't bite😆 (tu kabhi nahi sudhregi🤣🤣)

anyways coming to heartbeat (dhak dhak😆) (😆😆😆)

firstly i m really sorry (friendship mei no sorry no thnku😳😳)

farah u r one of the most understanding people i have ever talked to (🤗🤗)

believe me i felt like a stone was uplifted frm my heart when i told u

that i m not continuing with the reading of this FF

u were amazing and phenomenoal (😳😳😳awww thnku aarti)

because u understood me

n that statement sumhow was really rude on my part (na na it was honesty and sumthing straight frm ur heart it wasnt rude at all😳😳😳)

even m a amatuer writer here (u r a fab one😳😳)

even though i told u on ur face that i m not gonna read it

u read my work (u r my frnd aarti nd i totally understnd u...nd plus i cnt do dat wid ur work u knw how much i luv ur work so can never ever do dat nor to u or t ur writing😳😳)

i think that is sumthing even i can't do

u know like m really sorry (arey no sorry i told u even dat day i understnd y u dnt want to read so no pressure chill😳😳)

i told u how m not in lovey dovey stuff n comedy reading thingy

coz sachi me that is not my genre

i m a boring person when it comes to writing n reading

totally melancholic (u r a unique piece😳😆😆nd luv u for dat😳)

MICK

dude how do i say sorry to u

okay in simple words m extremely sorry

rey k kan pakad k sorry bolti hu (🤣🤣🤣)

actually in reality

m a person who loves sadness i guess

bcoz i love to play with sad emotions thing

n what u write is alll so goodie goodie

so that sort of turned me off

but no more

m into this fic now

PROMISSHHH

u were constantly asking me

did u like the part n all such ques

n i was feeling all guilty

my conscience was not allowing me 2 lie all the way again

so i thought i'll tell u the truth

its like i don't enjoy dialouge form ifcs nd color color ones (m boring i tell U) and joint ventures i never thought they can be succesful

but believe me after reading this

i can't help but say kudos to u guys

for writing together (thnk u aarti🤗🤗)
i totally suck at this thing

my dominance makes me become rude n i fail at this thing

i m done with my apology for now

coming to the REAL HEARTBEAT NOW

i enjoyed reading it

it took me back to the dmg tyms

with every line i read

i was reminded of fav show DMG (awww dats a very awsum comment😳😳)

i guess by now u guys don't know how much i adore this show

i have done horrendous things to get a chance to talk to karan once n all that

seriously i was crazy (😆😆😆)

who m i kidding

i still am

this update constantly reminde me of the after armaan's partial amnesia stage

the way he said teacher

the way he irritated her

it was all DMG

my heart really beats for DMG (same here😳😳😳)

jenny's anger was like the time when bubbly entered the show n was all chipko with armaan

the nakchidi ridhima

n also the ridhima who was all gussa with armaan after their roka bcoz of the camera thing
the way jenny was reacting was just like ridzy's reaction before the salaam namste dance

kriyaansh ofcourse weren't there in this update (next update for sure😳)

but believe me i loved it

jenny's description was simply fab

that really is jenny

i guess jenny is the single actress in the industry who is so naturally beautiful (sooo true😃)

i love her in sarees n even though m a gal
i m totally fida n flat over her

karan was again the cheerful armaan

who uses physical antics to get his ridzy back

the fire escape scene was similar to the car scene actually

the scene where armaan kisses jenny's cheeks to stop her from talking

n he was like stop warna next kisss tumhare gal par nahi hoga

it made me go back in that time n relive those memories

nil n vicky were the usual nicky here

i kinda have this lil soft corner for nicky bcoz of their innocence

n that was totally visible here

i think i m at loss of words now

but sachi guys it was fab👏

i bow down to u guys for ur efforts

n again i m really sorry for my behaviour

i was acting too stupid n rude

n for the first tym in my lyf

i enjoyed the dailouge form

(awww aarti really luv ur comment thnk u sooo much🤗 🤗)

n farah darling i wanna come there kiss u(mick pls don't mind😆😆😆 hmara sis-mance pehle se hai) (lolz...yes sis-mance partner aaja😆😆😆)

u are simply outstanding

mick tu bhi acha hai

but farah to i sachi me love her

(LUV u tooo🤗🤗🤗)

apologetic frnd of urs

aarti😃

(seriusly appreciate dat u read it...nd sooo HAPPY dat u luvd it😃...and dun worry agar kuch bhi ho dil mei batha diyo aftrall we r frnds and we all understand each other😳😳)

Originally posted by: sweetshine

in BOLD😃

mick tu kuch karta kyu ni

Amazing promo!! Plzz update me when u write the next part!!😊

Originally posted by: pyaar_kya_karna

I really like ur FF plzzz PM me wehn u upd8!!!!!!!! 😃😆😃😆

PS are u a KaJen fan??? cuz I'm KaSh all day everyday!!!!!! 😛😛