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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update🤗
loved the way rishima takes care of riddhima
loved ar moments❤️❤️
plzzz..update soon
waiting for ur next update😃😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
wooowww... Nyc part yaraaa. Loved itt... Loved how rishima took care of rids...i read the next parts in the blog... Plz epilogue b likhna...and bachon k saaath unke dheerrr saaareee momentsss...plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part! just loved it!
loved how Armaan nd Rishima took care of Ridz!
eagerly waiting 4 next part! plz update soon
thnx 4 pm:))

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part! Loved it.. esp Rishima! :) Thanks for the PM & do update soon!! Looking forward to next updates!!! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Punam di... when you gonna update this?????????????????????/ and you know what... this is my 100th post :P so i thought i will post it on your Thread only... hahahahahaa... luvvv uu a aloottsss DD... :) :) :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

following members liked the last part...

PoonamT, peachgirl, sweetkajen, destinationn, TANVI_SEXY, KaJen_addiction, crazy4KASH_AR, teenorchid and rajani.

thanks a lot friends for your like tabs and inspiring comments...sorry for late,actually hell busy because of our durga puja festival.


@asma dear ..sorry so sorry , for not reading your ff...actually i was very busy for our main festival and after that suddenly my computer had some problems... had deleted all downloads ...now,again i downloaded my fav. ff and trying to manage time to enjoy the most waited part.love...


recap ---








Riddhima caressed her stomach lovingly…..


suddenly she felt pain arose in her stomach...she tried to control but it was started to increase...


Gunahon Ka Devta




now chapter --28




and riddhima understood that it was her labor pain...she shaked arman gently ..."arman..arman..please utho..



arman opened his eyes at once and sprang up on the bed with a jerk ,he looked too much concerned..."kya hua riddhima? pain ho raha hai? bahut jyada ? o"my god! !!mujhe itni need kaise lag gayi? shitt!mai tumhara khyal bhi nahi rakh sakta!!damn it!!



riddhima tried to calm him..."arey arman ,aisa kuch nahi...kuch nahi hoga..mai bilkul thik hun..bas tum hospital phone kar do aur ambulance manga lo...i am fine.



arman was very tensed...he was not able to understand what should do at this situation...he was getting nervous as could n't able to search hospital's number in his mobile...



riddhima took the mobile from his hand..."arman,ghabrao mat..mai phone kar deti hun,tum bi ko bula do...


arman nodded head and left the room hurriedly to call bi...riddhima phoned dr. kirti and informed her about it...



dr. kirti : "don't be nervous riddhima,mai ambulane bhejti hun...


riddhima : "dr. kirti,mai nervous nahi hun,wo arman bahut ghabraya hua hai..


dr. kirti :"hmm…wo to tumhare choti si problem me ghabra jata hai,abhi to hoga hi..koi baat nahi,mai aur subhankar aaj hospital me hi hain...chalo bye..mai sari taiyari kar leti hun aur tum ghar par padma ji and nani ji ko phone kar do..


riddhima : "ok,dr. kirti...


arman entered with a worried face..."riddhima,kya hua?maine atul aur anji ko phone kar diya hai,wo aa rahe hain..aur dr. kirti ko bhi..aur nani ji ko bhi..


yet she was in a pain,arman's face made her smile...she tried to calm him .."arman,tum zara gahri saans lo,kuch nahi hoga mujhe..mujhe experience hai,aur tumhara beta itni jaldi papa nahi kahega..abhi subah tak wait karna parega..


arman cried in fear..."kya!! tumhe subah tak pain sahna parega!! abhi to sirf 12 baze hain!!


riddhima assured him ..."kuch nahi hoga arman..mai thik hun,chalo ..abhi ambulance aa jayega..


but before she get up from bed ,arman came to her and said.." nahi riddhima, tumhe bahut pain ho raha hai..mai le jata hun tumhe meri bahon me..please basket..


riddhima smiled.."ok,mai janti hun tum manoge nahi..


arman picked her in his arm and came outside where ambulance was ...arman placed her in the ambulance comfortably and himself sat next to holding her.

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Riddhima saw that rishima came running there.

riddhima : "beta,tu keun uth gayi?

Rishima : "mumma,mujhe bhi jana hai hospital aapke sath."


Riddhima : "beta,apni neend keun kharab ki? Subha aa jati…wahan baaki sabhi honge na…

Rishima : "offo! Mumma,aap kuch nahi samajhti… I know papa ki kya halat hai, wo nervous hain na aur unko sirf mai hi sambhal sakti hun.hai an pappa?
Arman nodded his head with teary eyes.


Rishima : "dekha mumma,pappa abhi se ro rahe hain..chaliye driver uncle….




The ambulence was on the way of hospital and inside it,arman was sitting holding riddhima's hand with a scared face and riddhima trying to control her pain to make arman relaxed and rishima was consoling her pappa .


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Dr. sashank,nani,padma,anjali,atul..all were present there .dr. kirti and subhankar was in the OT where was riddhima. Dr. kirti informed that because of a problem,riddhima need a surgery.



Arman cried with a fearful face : "dr. kirti,riddhima ka case to normal tha na!!aap aisa keun kah rahe ho? Kya aap logon ne mujhse kuch chupaya? Kya riddhima seriaous hai?plz… dr.kirti…



Dr.kirti: "plz. Dr.arman,calm down. Aisa kuch nahi hai…but mai aur dr. subhankar sochte hain ki surgery ho jaye to thik rahegi…humne abhi abhi uski sonography ki…



Dr. sashank: 'dr.kirti,tell me,kya meri bachchi ke sath koi problem hai? plz give me the report…



Dr. kirti : "sure sir…


Atul : "arman yaar,tu bhi report dekh le na…tu ek dr. hai…



Arman cut in the middle and cried…"mujhe nahi dekhna report…agar basket ko kuch hua to,to!…mai kya karunga?mai basket ke bina nahi ji sakta!!….
He hid his face into his palm and broke into tears…..



Dr. sashank checked the report and said …"ok,dr.kirti,aap surgery kijiye…paper dijiye mai sign kar deta hun.



Dr. kirti : "thanks sir…and plz aap sab arman ko sambhaliye….i am going to surgery ..and promise jaldi hi good news ke sath bahar aaungi.



Anjali : "arman,tum mad ho gaye ho kya? Report dekho,kuch bhi problem nahi hai ridhzi ko.



Arman wiped his tears and stepped towards the OT …"mujhe nahi dekhna…mujhe riddhima ke paas jana hai…mai andar jata hun.


Now Dr. sashank came to arman and held his hand to assure him…"dr. arman…please aisa mat kijiye…aap jante hain patient ke relatives allow nahi hote..aur aapka face dekhkar riddhima bhi nervous ho jayegi…



Gunahon Ka Devta



Suddenly arman started to cry bitterly hugging dr. sashnak...dr. sashank patted his back…"dr. arman…..don't worry,jiska life partner itna pyara ho usey kuch nahi ho sakta. Aap report dekhte to achcha hota…aapki dar chali jati…



Meanwhile ,atul had checked the reports…he asked to arman…"achcha arman,riddhima ka last sonography kab hua tha?


Arman turned to him and asked nervously…"3rd month me,dr. kirti ne kaha sab normal hai to humne phir sonography nahi karwayi..it's ray is harmful for baby,so we decided not to do it…but kya atul? Kya hua?



Atul : "mere bhai ! Kuch nahi…reports fine hain..koi problem nahi hai…maine bas eun hi pucha,means curiosity…mai bhi dr. hun na..mujhe bhi sab janne ka haq hai..



Anjali frowned : "atul!! Aaj pata chala tum dr.ho? keun beechare arman ko darana chahte ho…


And to arman…"arman,sab reports thik hain,tumhari basket ko koi tumse cheen nahi sakta..please shant ho jao."


Hearing these consoling words again arman's eyes started to flow….now rishima came forward to manage ….she caught arman's hand…"pappa,chalo na hum thora bahar ghum aayen..samne hi ek naya icecream parlour opening hua hai ,just kal hi…chalo na pappa…



Arman wiped his tears and said…"nahi rishima,tum janti ho mai abhi kahin nahi jaunga…aur abhi itni raat ko icecream parlour khuley nahi honge…



Rishima smacked on her head…"dhatt tere ki !! kya Bade nani!! Kaisi idea dete hain aap!! Bilkul flop idea !!..kya bade nani!


Nani made a sorry face and said…"mujhe kya pata arman ka dimag abhi sahi jagah par hai,maine socha ……


Padma : "kya ma ,aap bhi…arman meri beti ke liye pagal hai,sachmuch ka thore hi hai? keun arman?



Arman smiled to hear their conversation.how all were trying to hold him! how all loved him! even in this situation,when their dear riddhima was in the problem ,they were trying to make arman smile with their silly jokes!!!




Atul yelled :"ya,hansa!! Hansa to fansa!!



Dr.sashank came towards arman and said : "dr.arman,chaliye hum log new sanjiwani ke kuch discussion kar len.anjali,atul bhi hain yahan."



Gunahon Ka Devta



Arman opposed : "but sir,riddhima nahi hai na…


Dr.sashak smiled..:"aap hain na..aur new sanjiwani aap ko hi sambhalna hai..aisa karenge humare golu ke naamkaran ke din opening rahenge new sanjiwani ki…



Arman smiled..: 'sir ,aapko bhi uska naam pata hai?


Dr.sashank patted him…"yes! My boy!! Mai,rishima and angel to roj golu ki baaten karte hain,planning karte hain aur kabhi kabhi ma aur padma bhi join karti hai humare planning me…



Golu's discussion made arman calm down.he said…"sir,mai abhi kuch bhi discussion nahi kar sakta,please aap bura mat maniye,jab tak riddhima ko ek baar dekh na lun….….



Dr.sashank: "its ok,I understand arman…but please khud ko shant rakhen…all will be fine!…


Arman sat on a coach and closed his eyes to take rest.rishima and angel sat either side of him touching his hand to give a support….nani,padma ,atul ,angel and dr.sashnak ..all were seated silently..waiting for the new guest of their family..the little prince golu.


After 2 hours ,OT's red light got off and dr.kirti came with a broad smile ….


Love you all
punam






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Posted: 12 years ago
hey punam
I am first one this time
just loved the part
poor armaan
all were consoling him
how cute😊
hope everything will e fine
our little golu arrive soon

tc
lots of love
Ria
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Posted: 12 years ago
DD... uvv uu sooo muchh... super awesome parttt... as always.. i luv ur writing... dd why r u not ol since many dasys?????????????? kya aap itni busy hogayi hai kya???? meko aapse baat karni hai... i will be waiting for u... luvv uu diii
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

and thanks for PM

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey Punam!
superb part! loved it!
Armaan is so cute yaar! i felt like laughing seeing his situation!
cont soonish...eagerly waiting!
thnx 4 pm
take care
Sunita:))

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