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Posted: 12 years ago



hey,PoonamT, peachgirl, destinationn, KaJen_addiction, crazy4KASH_AR, vidu87, teenorchid, XxDeansChickxX, samades..thanks a lot friends for your precious comments...hope you will like this part too...love...





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Arman smiled and before his lips curved his name on her creamy skin,riddhima switched off the light..……now that world was only for arman-riddhima's dreamland…no one had allowed peeping into it…..those moments were only for a newly married couple,who had totally lost into each other… busy with their sweet ,passionate moments..busy in making their dreamland…busy to blossom a new bud in their love garden..as "GOLU".


chapter -- 26









now(after 7 months)


"offoh" sab kuch mujhe hi sambhalna parta hai..ye dono to pata nahi kamre me sara din kya karte rahte hain,itne din ho gaye sadi ke,par inki baaten hi khatam nahi hoti...na apne saman thik place par rakhte hain aur na mera dhyan rakhte hain,pata nahi mai inki bachchi hun,ya ye dono mere..." rishima was pissed of with her mumma-papa.


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YA, 7 months had completed of AR's marriage,riddhima was pregnant,it was her 6th months…. and our hero arman ordered her strictly … "koi bhi kaam nahi karna hai,aram karo. Mai,bi aur rishima sab kar lenge…mujhe koi bahana nahi sunna…"


seeing riddhima busy in work , used to get angry and worried about her , whole time took good care of her,they went hospital together and even in the hospital,he called riddhima after a short while…."riddhima,tum thik ho na,koi takleef to nahi? medicine li? tired ho gayi to thora rest kar lo..."riddhima got irritated with arman's care..the whole hospital staffs and even patients knew about it…they teased riddhima with this topic…and it made her annoyed with arman,always she had promised to have a blast on arman but seeing his cute face ,she forgot her anger...her heart explained her ….."kitna tensed rahta hai tere liye wo riddhima ! shayad wo khud pregnant hota to bhi itna nahi hota,jitna apni basket ke liye hai..."and imagining about arman's pregnancy, a broad smile had come in her lips…then she thought…"agar aisa hota to kya wo bhi arman ke liye tensed hoti,jitna arman hota hai?"



then her heart had replied her quickly ,"sure,shayad isse bhi jyada...beechara arman! kaise sambhalta apne aap ko! " imagining arman's bloated tummy, she giggled.



muskan : "hey riddhzi,arman to yahan hai nahi,kis baat par hansi aa rahi hai?

riddhima smiled : "nahi,bas aise hi...


muski : "bata na,private hai kya? hero ki baat?


riddhima : "haan,tere hero ki hi hai,but personal nahi..


niki came with a pissed face and sat beside riddhima like a defeated soldier : "to bata na..mai bhi hansna chahti hun ,burna humari life me khushi kahan?(sad)..mai to haar gayi hun!!


muski staring her : "tujhe kya hua? dr. abhi jaisa pati,itna pyara beta...dekh nikki,abhi se rishta pakki kar le,tera beta aur meri beti ki...



nikki : "aur wo bhi apne papa jaisa kanjus nikle to? teri beti ki life mai barbaad nahi kar sakti..


anji :"hey nikki,kya baat hai? itni sad keun? dr.abhi se jhagda hua kya?


nikki waved her hands in a great displeasure : 'aaj kitne din ho gaye sath bahar gaye hue..har waqt busy busy!...wedding anniversary ko singapore chala gaya,mai to tang aa gayi isse...arman ko dekh,kitna khyal rakhta hai riddhima ka..



anji made understand her :"hey nikki,unki nayi sadi hui hai yaar,aur tu to janti hai arman pagal hai...


nikki (sighly ) : "kash! mujhe bhi aisa pagal hi milta...


muski : "chod na nikki,riddhima,tu bata keun muska rahi thi?


riddhima tried to make nikki laugh .."nahi,wo ..mai soch rahi thi ki agar meri jagah arman pregnant hota to kaisa dikhta...bas usika ek sketch…


the girls looked at riddhima surprisingly,imagined arman in this state and in a while...they burst out of laughter...



muski :"bada maza aata..hahahahahaha...


nikki : "haan,agar humare badle ladke pregnant hote to maza aata...beechare! special dress banbane parte…ye tight fitting shirt and
t-shirt nahi pahan sakte na…


anji : "atul beechara apne plants se kahta..."bete,aapke bhai or bahan aane wale hain,abhi mumma aapka jyada khyal nahi rakh sakti...hahahahaha...



muski : "aur wo idiot rahul apne sare kaam mujhse karwata..mai kuch kahti to kahta...dekhti nahi mai ma oops! pa banne wala hun...hahahahaha..


arman ,rahul and atul came there...


rahul : "kis baat par hansi chut rahi hai? muskan,teri hansi ki awaz sunkar patients dar kar faint ho rahe hain...hahahaha….


muskan ( making face): "really!! To sun!! hum imagine kar rahe hain ki humare badle agar tum sab pregnant hote to kaisa lagta...



rahul : "no way! mai bachcha leta hi nahi..adopt kar leta..maine teri takleef dekhi hai...



muski hit him : "pata tha nashpite...tu kuch kaam ka hai hi nahi...


rahul rounded his eyes.: "kya kaam ka nahi? itni khubsurat beti di hai tujhe...


arman : "ok,ok..ab lado mat...agar aisa hota to mai bahut khush hota..mai basket ko takleef me nahi dekh sakta...


riddhima looked at him with full love in her eyes...


arman : "bhagwanji aisa to kar hi sakte they,ekbaar ma ko ekbaar papa ko pregnant karte …...to phir akeli ma ko itni takleef nahi sahni parti na...



all friends shaked their head with yes as they are fully agreed with arman "haan..yes!!its true!!! "aisa hi hona chahiye tha!!


and next, they burst out of laughter...


rahul : "tu bhi na arman,bilkul nahi badla...riddhima ke liye tu kuch bhi kar sakta hai..



arman came to riddhima and held her hands lovingly : "mai badalna chahta bhi nahi...hum dono hardam aise hi rahna chahte hain...hai na basket?



Riddhima nodded her head in yes…



atul : "but arman –riddhima , rishima ab badi ho rahi hai..thora to khud ko control karna parega,thora usey bhi care kar arman …





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Love you all
Punam

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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm so sorry Punam for not being able to comment on the last part.
I'm giving my comments for both the parts here only.
what should I say about this beautiful ff.
It's sooo ARlicious that I fall in love with it everytime I read it.
AR went to Paris for their honeymoon.Wow!!
Armaan is too much.ridz was telling him about the places she wished to visit and he thought that she was speaking French.
That was really funny.
I loved it how Armaan teased Riddhima about Rishima's gift..
I can imagine Ridz blushing badly hearing this.
Armaan was so put of by Atul's phone.
He sounded so cute while cursing Atul for disturbing his sweet moment with his wife.
AR's romantic moment on the swing was so intense that I had butterflies in my stomach...
AR's dreamland was sooo beautiful...It was sooo romantic.
Finally all the distances between AR got closed once again.
This part was mindblowing.I loved it a lot.
Coming to the next part.
It was superb..
I can't stop laughing after reading wild fantasies of Riddhima.
Gosh!! Armaan with a baby bump.OMG!!
🤣🤣🤪😉😆

I felt sad for Niki.Poor girl was craving to spend time with her hubby.
I was laughing like anything when Niki told Muski that she does not want to ruin Muski's daughter's life being afraid of her son turning into a miser.
Lols!!
This part was sooo good.
I was soo entertaining.
I loved RM's fight a lot.
Girls are too much.
Anjali and Rahul had so wild ideas about their hubbies getting pregnant.
I can't believe that girls told their stupid thoughts to boys.
Haye!! Main sadke jawan..
Armaan ki line ne toh meri jaan hi leli.
He cares sooo much about Ridz.Ridz is getting irritated with Armaan's concern but does not has the heart to scold him.
So sweet!!
AR are soo adorable.
Atul is right.
Poor Rishima has to care of her parents.Poor baby..
I hope Rishima may not start feeling neglected due to the arrival of her younger brother.
Waiting eagerly for the next part.
Punam jana hats off to you..
You are a wonderful writer.
Love you soo much.
Muah!
Take care!
😉🤪🤣
Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww... A leap of 7 monthsss... Nd ridhima pregnant... Awww... Rishima is soo sweeettooo... Hahhaa.. Armaaan pregnant that ws funnyyy... Hahhaha... He is soo cuteee...loved the parttt...cont sooonish
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Posted: 12 years ago
nanna sa munnaaa sa pyarraa sa lovelyyy parttt DD... luveeddd ittt muuahhh... i'm reading it again here :P luvvv u DD
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey di beautiful part
i really luv rishima shez chooo chwett
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb part!
Ridz is pregnant! dat was quite funny when she imagined Armaan with a baby bump! lol!
i just love 2 c Armaan's concern 4 her!
cont asap
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awhh Ridz preggo & such a cute part! Loved it! :) & Thanks for the PM :D do update soon!! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago



The following 9 member(s) liked the last post...

@poonamt --thanks a lot

@peachgirl--thanks a ton

@sweetkajen--- thank you so much


@destination-- thanks dear

@vidhu -- thanks sweety

@kajen addiction---thanks sweetheart

@teenorchid -- thanks dear..your lovely comments always inspire me to write more on "AR"...

@XxdeanchicksXx ---thanks a lot friend.

samades --- thanks a lot dear

@crazy4kashAR---no need to sorry jana,i know the time is a big factor for all of us...but we always tried to read AR's ff na?becoz we love them so much...they are a major part of our life...thanks for your sweet ,cute, lovely,encouraging,inspiring comments,loved this so much...ya, i had worked a very hard for honeymoon part,as i don't like to expose AR's private ,personal moments in front of their fans...😳😳...its so embrassing for me...i always like romantic part but not the hot...and thanks ,you liked this a lot...love u...

sorry to say,i downloaded your AR"S part just now,will read and comment soon...





recap


arman came to riddhima and held her hands lovingly : "mai badalna chahta bhi nahi...hum dono hardam aise hi rahna chahte hain...hai na basket?




Riddhima nodded her head in yes…



atul : "but arman –riddhima , rishima ab badi ho rahi hai..thora to khud ko control karna parega,thora usey bhi care kar arman …





now -- chapter -- 27




Gunahon Ka Dewta



"itne bade ho gaye hain,akal ratti bhar bhi nahi..."rishima mumbled in anger.


"kya hua princess? kispar naraj ho rahi hai?"bi asked lovingly.



"wo aapka ladla dr. arman aur uski riddhima...aur koun?" uttered annoyed rishima.



"but hua kya?"



"nanu ne papa ko kaha ki new sanjiwani sambhal le..but papa ne mana kar diya...kaha,"nahi,riddhima yahan sanjiwani me,mai wahan...koun uska khyal rakhega?"


nanu ne kaha bhi ki hum sab to hain,aur sham ko aap sath hi ghar aaoge ..to papa ne kaha.."nahi,sara din wo akeli rahegi...


ab batao bi..nanu to papa ko new sanjiwani ka head banana chahte they,wo aisa bachpana karenge to kaise chalega?" rishima looked at bi with this important question.



"beta,aapke pappa ko aapki mumma ki bahut tension rahti hai na...aapke nanu samajh jayenge..wo naraj nahi honge,aap chinta mat karo..." bi tried to calm her.



"hmmm..."..rishima folded her hands to pray..."bhagwanji ,jaldi se mere golu ko bhej do..mai sambhal lungi usko...aur papa aur mumma new sanjiwani sambhalenge..and truly say bhagwanji ,mujhse bhi ab mumma ki takleef dekhi nahi jati."




bi laughed..."ye ladki apni umar se jyada badi ho gayi hai..beta,ab bas 2 mahine ki baat hai..aapka bhai aane me...bhagwan sab thik karenge...




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Nine month




"basket...mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai.."



"keun arman?"



"yahi,tumhari ye haalat..."arman caressed her belly..."aajkal raat ko need nahi aati,dar lagta hai,mai so jaun aur tumhe kuch ho gaya to?



riddhima touched his cheeks to assure him .."mujhe kuch nahi hoga arman..tum bhul rahe ho ye mera second issue hai..



arman : "but mere liye to 1st na...sorry,mai rishima ke time tumhare paas nahi rah paya..tumhe kitni takleef hui hogi na..



riddhima : "nahi arman..mujhe kuch mahsus hi nahi hua,sirf sochti thi hum dono ka pyar kaisa hoga or hogi..maine tumhe khoya tha,isliye tumhare pyar ko seene se lagana chahti thi..aur ek ek pal ginti thi uske liye...




arman kissed her forhead..."thora so jao riddhima..


riddhima : "tum so jao arman..mai to ab din bhar ghar me rest karti hun but tum raat ko mere sath jagte ho aur din me sanjiwani duty...beemar pad jaoge to meri dekhbhal koun karega?



arman: "haan,tum bhi so jao...



in a while arman sank in a deep sleep...riddhima could not sleep much nowadays..,baby was too much heavy ,riddhima felt uneasy while lying on the bed…but she did it only for arman as if he was always tensed to see her in this situation….always thought he was responsible of riddhima's condition….




Even today she was lying on the bed closing her eyes only for arman…she was waiting for him to sleep…after a while she understood that arman was in a deep sleep…she opened her eyes…arman was sleeping, keeping his hand on riddhima's belly…as he came to know soon if there was any movement...riddhima moved his hands gently and placed it on the bed…..arman mumbled in his sleep…"love you basket…please,kabhi mujhse dur mat jana….





Riddhima touched his cheeks lovingly….."kitna pyara lagta hai sote hue! bilku ek masum bachcha."..



She got up from the bed quietly and came near the window.she felt better in walking position,but arman didn't understand it,he thought surely she had in pain so unable to sleep. Riddhima looked at the photo which was on the table beside their bed,it was of arman riddhima and rishima,rishima was in the middle of them…riddhima remembered arman's words ,he was sighed saying it..."mai apna tumhara aur humare bachchon ka bahut sara picture chahta tha."




Riddhima : "haan,to hum teeno ke hain na na jane kitne photos ek saath. 2 -3 album full ho chuke hain arman."




Arman : "nahi basket,aisa nahi ,mai sapna dekhta tha meri bachchi ke janam se lekar hum teeno ke pic hon..ek ek din ka…uske har ek birthday ka pic hum dono ke sath...





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Riddhima sat on the bed for a rest…arman was sleeping clinging the pillow…riddhima looked at him and mumbled…."sorry arman,tumhara itna sa khwab mai pura nahi karpayi ,but ab humara dusra aayega na,uske sath humare ek ek pal ka pic hoga…





She took their photo and caressed her hand…she is the most happiest woman in this world,who got a caring husband and a daughter too. rishima is not like other girls,much understanding in comparison their.. She not only loved even took care of her mumma and papa…..a few days ago she came to their room and declaired…"mai aaj se mumma ke paas soungi.pappa aap please next room me so jana."



They surprised to hear it..riddhima asked…"beta ,hua kya hai?aapko dar lagta hai apne room me?



Rishima : "huh!! Mumma,aap bhi na buddhu ho,rishima arman mallick aur dar?pheeew!!!



Arman : "to humari jaan khane keun aayi meri ma? Basket ki aisa haalat aur mai alag room me soun?mujhe need hi nahi aayegi tension se.



Rishima : "isiliye to kah rahi hun,aap whole day hospital me duty karte ho aur night ko mumma ke liye jagte ho,beemar pad jaoge…don't worry,mumma ka mai pura dhyan rakhungi.



Arman smacked her on back…"chal chal! Khud ka dhyan nahi rakha jata aur mumma ka rakhegi!



Rishima showed anger : "dekho pappa,maine soch samjhkar hi ye decide kiya hai …….



Riddhima interfered : "arman….rishima thik hi kah rahi hai….



Rishima jumped with joy…"dekha arman mallick,mumma apse jyada samajhdar hain….


She run from there to tell this good news to bi.



Arman(upset) : "ye kya bachpana hai basket?



Riddhima caught his hand…"arman,atul ne kya kaha tha? humey kabhi kabhi rishima ke opinions lena chahiye…uski baten manni chahiye…humare is khushi me usey involve karna chahiye…tum bhul rahe ho wo humse jyada excited hai apne golu ke liye aur tensed tumse kuch kam nahi apne mumma ke liye….



Arman dragged her gently in her arm…"right basket,isiliye maine tumse pyar kiya tha,tum duniya ki sabse matured ladki ho.



Riddhima frawned…"achcha!! Nahi to pyar nahi karte?



Arman kissed her hairs…."tab bhi karta keunki is dharti par aaya to sirf tumhare liye hun…..




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Riddhima smiled remembering it…uske baad ke kuch din bade pyare they..wo aur rishima na jane kitni baten karte they golu ko lekar..usey kya kya sikhayenge…wo pahle kisko pahchanega,kise bulayega..koun usko bathing karayega and all…….




And whenever arman wanted to join them,rishima made him throw out of their room saying it…"ye confidencial hain,mere ,mumma and golu ke…plz aap apni lambi nose apne paas rakho,isme mat ghusao….




But when riddhima completed 8 months,rishima declared…."pappa,ab aap mumma ke paas sona,mujhe dar lagta hai unki haalat dekhkar…agar mujhe bahut need lag gayi aur mumma ko problem hui to?



Arman questioned through his eyes to riddhima….what happened?


Riddhima assured…"nothing.




And arman got his position back…his kingdom,his place beside his basket ….



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Riddhima saw that arman moved in his sleep.she lied on the bed immiediately,if arman got her waking ,he was afraid of what is happened…



she heard arman mumbled…"basket…basket…umm…basket….




Riddhima smiled…"pagal hai,sara din basket basket aur sari raat bhi need me…pata nahi kaise is pagal ne apni basket ke bina wo horrible din gujarey!but nahi! Ab wo unko yaad nahi karegi,ab uske paas uska arman hai,rishima hai aur golu aanewala hai….



Riddhima caressed her stomach lovingly…..



suddenly she felt pain arose in her stomach...she tried to control but it was started to increase...



love you all

punam



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Posted: 12 years ago
Yippee!! I'm the first one.
I've got a presentation day after tomorrow.So plz forgive me for this short comment jana.
I loved this part to the core.
You are a wonderful writer Punam.
I loved the way Armaan and Rishima took care of Ridz.
Rishima is such a mature kid.
I loved her concern for her papa.
Armaan is so much concerned about Ridz.He denied being the head of Sanjeevani for Riddhima's sake.
Gosh!! Poora pagal deewana hai hamara hero.
But this is what makes Armaan the best lover of this world na.
I felt bed reading the photo scene.Armaan wanted pics of every single moment with his little one.Ridz is right.This time they can have all those moments.
Finally Armaan got to sleep with Riddhima again.Gosh! their daughter can be so bossy at times.
OMG!! Riddhima's water broke.I hope she delivers a healthy boy.
Waiting for the next part eagerly.
Take care!
love ya
Asma
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey punam
firstly thanx
for sending me the pm
I just love yor ff
it shows real armaan n riddhima
the part was great
terribly waiting for golu
plz update soon

take care
lots of love
Ria

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