gunahon ka devta -- (AR)'kajen ff'

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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

why did u stop there Poonam? :-( i wanted 2 read more! that was very sweet! AR Honeymoon pe...in Paris! hayee! cant wait 4 next part! plz try 2 update soon thnx 4 pm dear take care Sunita :-))

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

I realy want to kill you Punam for stopping there.
I was loving to read and when I finally hoped that AR will unite in this part you stopped.
You surely know how to tease us..
Punam jana this part was awesome.
I loved it a lot.
Starting from AR's marriage to AR's honeymoon,everything was simply fabulous.
Rishima is sooo cute.She wants a chotu for her.
I hope AR may fulfil her wish soon...
Eagerly waiting for AR's passionate romance and fun in Paris.
I'm sorry for the short comments darling.I'm quite busy with studies this weekend.
I hope you'll forgive me.
TAke care!
love ya
Asma

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Sameer

@samades

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Read both the last 2 updates together! Nice updates Punam! & thanks for PM! Update soon :)

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vidu87

@vidu87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

heya di wen r u updating

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destinationn

@destinationn

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

hey greqt ff...
jst loved it...
continue soon...

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punam

@punamluvshilpa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

The following 10 member(s) liked the last post:

PoonamT, peachgirl, destinationn, KaJen_addiction, crazy4KASH_AR, vidu87, AR_LOVER, teenorchid, XxDeansChickxX, samades..thanks a lot friends for your lovely inspiring comments and for like tabs...hope you will like this romantic part so much...

RECAP (chapter--25)

Riddhima (excited) : "Eiffel Tower,Arc de Triomphe,Champs Elysees,Chateau de Versailles,Louvre,Musee Cognacq-Jay,Notre Dame Cathedral,Sacre CoeurPlace de Bastille..…"she told in one breathe and was puffing heavily...

Arman was surprised.."basket! tum achanak se french keun bol rahi ho?kab sikha?kahin khushi se pagal to nahi ho gayi? apne arman ko pakar!!!!!!!!!!!

Gunahon Ka Dewta

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Riddhima pouted.."arman! ye french language nahi hai,ye to places ke name hain jo mujhe dekhna hai…

Arman : "kya!! Kitne places tumhe dekhne hain?

Riddhima counted in her finger.."ummm!..mm..jyada nahi,bas 8 or 9 hain,tum kaho to 1-2 cancel kar sakti hun..hum yahan 15 days hain to 2 din ek ek place dekhne me…

Arman (in a loving voice) : "riddhimaaa!! Meri jaan!!

Riddhima : "haan arman!bolo…

Arman : "agar hum ye place dekhne me sara time barbaad kar denge to pyar kab karenge?

Riddhima made an innocent face…"arey! Ye to maine socha hi nahi tha!! phir se planning karni paregi…

Arman pinched her cheecks.."aur us plan me 15 days sirf pyar ke liye hoga,samjhi…mai honeymoon par aaya hun…

Riddhima (with a fake surprising look) : "achcha! Mujhe to pata hi nahi tha!!!

Now arman irritated.."basket! mai ab gussa ho raha hun…

Riddhima laughed and tried to get up from there,but failed to free herself from arman.

Riddhima : "chodo na arman…mujhe dress change karna hai…

Arman (mischieviously) : 'mai help karun?

Riddhima rounded her eyes.."armaaan!!

Arman winked her : "I think jarurat nahi…apne aap ho jayegi thori der me…

Riddhima blushed heavily realizing its meaning and turned her face to hide her nervous condition…

Arman : "oyye hoyye!! Achcha chodo..rishima ko kya chahiye bataun?

Riddhima :"haan…

Arman : "uske ek pyara sa bhai chahiye……

Riddhima sprang : "kya!!!"

And soon understanding the meaning blushed heavily.."tum bhi na arman!

Arman jerked her towards him and she fell on his lap….riddhima tried to free herself.."chodo na arman…

Arman : "basket! Itna sharmaogi to hum kaise rishima ka gift denge? Maine promise kiya hai jitni jaldi ho sake…

Before he completed his words..mobile rang…

Riddhima :"arman,ghar se phone hoga,unhe chinta ho rahi hogi..

Arman picked up the phone..it was atul.."kya yaar! Pahunchkar ek phone kar sakta tha na…

Arman : "champ!!tu kya mera dushman hai? teri saali itna sharmati hai!!! bari muskil se to baat ban rahi thi aur tu..

Atul cut shorts…"ok,ok..sorry yaar! Ab no any phone call during honeymoon period…..all the best!!!…

Arman switched off the phone and looked at riddhima who was still in his lap closing her eyes…her pink lips were trembling like soft pink rose patels..…

arman caressed her upper lips softly..now he was so close that riddhima was feeling his hot breathe…. She became so nervous,closed her eyes tightly flushing her cheeks red tint.

Armaan smiled at her shyness and slowly crept his hands around her waist.. Riddhima's breathe got stuck somewhere as he did that and her heart pounded, when he started nuzzling her earlobe and moving down to her neckline and as he did that he very sensuously ran his hand up her arms, sending shivers down Riddhima's spine.

"Armaan.." She whispered …"plz….

"I love you .." He whispered dropping a soft kiss on her neck.…..

"me too.." She mumbled, resting her head on his shoulder..

"to phir ye duri keun?" arman breathed….

Riddhima : "dar lagat hai…

Arman's kisses travelling on her bare skin.."mai hun na…

Riddhima shievered…"tum ho isliye to !!!!

Arman pulled her hoddie down and rubbed his lips on her soft creamy skin…riddhima's heartbeat was skipping rapidly but she opened her almond eyes to invite blue ocenic eyes for making love,who was waiting for it eagerly...arman got up from the swing and picked riddhima in his arms..and came their dreamland…their love place... lifting his love in his arm.their dream land!!!….which was decorated with candles,heart shape balloons and flowers….

Gunahon Ka Dewta

"doorie na rahe koi,aaj itne karib aao
Mai tumme sama jaun,tum mujhme sama jao…."

Now the two lovers were on the decorated bed,snuggling each other..smelling each other's fragrance!!!..….arman's manly lips were touching riddhima's soft skin desperately with a whispering sound…"love you basket!!love you…

Riddhima's lips shievered.."love you arman..plz. mujhe apna bana lo,mai ab tumse dur nahi rah sakti..

Arman smiled and before his lips curved his name on her creamy skin,riddhima switched off the light..……now that world was only for arman-riddhima's dreamland…no one had allowed peeping into it…..those moments were only for a newly married couple,who had totally lost into each other… busy with their sweet ,passionate moments..busy in making their dreamland…busy to blossom a new bud in their love garden..as "GOLU".

Hope you liked it….plz. give comments…
Love you all
punam