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Posted: 12 years ago

The following 5 member(s) liked the last post:

PoonamT, peachgirl, sweetkajen, destinationn, KaJen_addiction,..thanks a lot friends for liking this part...


recap ---


Arman sat on a coach and closed his eyes to take rest.rishima and angel sat either side of him touching his hand to give a support….nani,padma ,atul ,angel and dr.sashnak ..all were seated silently..waiting for the new guest of their family..the little prince golu.



After 2 hours ,OT's red light got off and dr.kirti came with a broad smile ….



the chapter -- 29








now



All stood up seeing her….arman came running to her and held her hand with a rashness and asked…"riddhima kaisi hai dr. kirti? Usey hosh aa gaya? Koi problem to nahi? Wo thik hai na? mai jaun andar?



Dr. kirti : "please dr. arman ,calm down…riddhima is fine…abhi half an hour me hosh aa jayega..



Rishima came running: "mera golu aa gaya kirti aunty? Kaisa hai? mere jaisa ,ya pappa or mumma? Or nani or badi nani or anjali masi or angel or…


Atul : "hey bhagwan! Ye dono to bilkul pagal hain…dr. kirti bachche thik hai na?



Dr. kirti smiled …"bachche bilkul thik hain…unhe thodi der me riddhima ke paas denge..aap tab ja sakte hain unke paas…



Anjali (eagerly):" dr.kirti dono ladke hain kya?


Dr. kirti : "no,ek baba aur ek baby….


Arman (surprisingly): "bachche!!! But mere to ek hi hain!! 2 kahan se aa gaye!!




Dr. kirti teased him : "aap riddhima ko bahut jyada pyar karte hain na,isliye riddhima ne aapko ek ke sath ek free gift diya hai…




All started to laugh on kirti's words…but arman was standing like a statue,opening his mouth in a big "O"….




atul : "arman ,mooh to band kar……hathi (elephant) ghush jayega..



arman was stammering…."but…lekin aisa kaise hua!!! mujhe to pata hi nahi chala!! Ye kaise hua!!




now dr. shashank teased him…"dr. arman!! Aap meri riddhima par saq (suspect) kar rahe hain?




Arman shaked his head in a big no…."nahi sir…mai riddhima par saq! Kabhi nahi sir…but!!


Atul hit on his back…"isliye to baar baar kah raha tha ki reports dekh le….


Dr. kirti smiled.."agar aapko free gift nahi chahiye to mai rakh leti hun,keun subhankar,hai na….




Dr.subhankar ,who came out just, answered…"sure kirti…



All burst out laughing but arman's mind was totally blank…still in a big shock!!…could not believe what was happening…


atul : "subhankar sir,arman to gaya kaam se…uske dimag ka fuse ud gaya hai…



dr. subhankar and kirti laughed seeing arman's situation.


Atul : "ma'm ,aap hunste hue bhaut achchi lagti hain….


Dr. kirti frowned…."dr. atul!!



Dr. subhankar (with a fake anger) : "yes dr. atul! Aapki itni himmat kaise hui! Hum dono aaj bhi aapke senior doctor hain...


Nurse came….."sir,patient ko cabin me shift kar diya gaya hai…


Dr. kirti : "dr.arman…ab aap riddhima ke paas ja sakte hain…aur aaplog thori der baad jayenge…


All : "ok….

………………………………………………………………………….



Arman came gently in riddhima's cabin…he sighed to see riddhima's pale face..she was looking very weak…arman sat beside her on a chair and took riddhima's hand in his…he caressed her hand softly and whispered…"thanks basket…




Riddhima's lips trembled…"arm—aa—n….ar—ma---aa—n……


Arman caressed her hair…."haan jaan,mai tumhare paas hi hun…pain ho raha hai?


Riddhima opened her eyes and uttered : "bachche kaise hain?


Arman :"bahut khubsurat…bilkul meri basket jaise…


Riddhima's lips parted…"tumne dekhe?


Arman : "nahi,mai apni basket ke sath dekhunga...but mai janta hun humare angels bahut khubsurat honge…



Riddhima whispered : "tum gussa ho?


Arman touched her cheeks…"keun bhala?


Riddhima :"maine chupaye na…


Arman smiled : "mai bahut khush hun basket…humare ghar aur ek princess aayi hai..but tumne chupaya keun itni badi baat?




Dr. kirti came…"dr. arman,riddhima ka jyada baten karna thik nahi…usey rest karne den ..aur mai batati hun riddhima ne keun nahi bataye…aap uske prgnancy ke baad se hi itne nervous they,tensed they,usey dar tha ki twins sunkar aap aur dar jayenge,isliye usne aapko nahi bataya aur sonography se mana kiya …



Arman : "but dr. kirti,sonography to is situation me jaruri tha na.



Dr. kirti smiled.."aap bhul rahe hain ki riddhima khud bhi ek dr. hai..usne har month ki sonography karwai…..aur usey pata tha ki surgery karni paregi,bas aapko nahi bataya...



Rishima came running …."pappa! pappa!! Aapne golu aur choti princess ko dekha!bahut khubsurat hain! Chalo na pappa…



Arman : "rishima,mumma se nahi milna?



Rishima came towards riddhima and kissed her cheeks…"thanks mumma..but abhi hum baat nahi karenge..aapko rest ki jarurat hai…



Riddhima smiled and said…"meri princess,gift pasand aaya?



Rishima stretched her hands….."bahuuut!! aap duniya ki sabse best mumma ho..maine 1 gift mangi,aapne 2 diye…love you so much…"




Atul,anjali,nani,padma,dr.sashank and angel came there…they were wishing riddhima,talking about the twins and laughing while telling to riddhima about arman's situation .arman was seated silently holding riddhima's hand in him…




he mumbled…"thanks basket!…thanks a lot!…tumne mere saarey sapne purey kar diye…maine jitna manga,usse bahut jyada tumne mujhe diye…I love you my life…I love you!!"



love you all
punam




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Posted: 12 years ago
awww! such a beautiful part! very nicely written!
wow! AR have twins!
looking 4ward 2 next update...cont soon
thnx 4 pm:))
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow Punam
such a sweet and very cute part
ek ke sath ek free gift😛
amazing😉
poor armaan😭
but finally his tension gone
thanx for pm
update soon

loads of love
Ria😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
frstly vry chollyyy di last 2 parts pe cmnt ni kr pai thi kya karun got job away frm home so shiftn n all...
chollyyy
ne ways all d parts r awesome
its like jitni baarrri padho utna hi aur padhne ka maan krta hai
u knw am readn dis ff on d blog also
luvd d updates 2 d core
thnx 4 d pm di
cont soonish
Edited by vidu87 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cuteee partt... :D loved it...
Hahahahha armaan getting shocked 2knw abt twins was funnyyy... Lovely part... Waiting to read more...


Take care di...
Apna khayal rakna...

Love,
Rajani
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for super late comment but been busy with exams! :-/
Super cute part punam! & thanks for the PM!
Update soon! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago


following friends liked the last part...

peachgirl, sweetkajen, rajanimn, destinationn, vidu87, KaJen_addiction, samades...thanks a lot dear for your like tabs and lovely ,sweet comments...sorry for late,actually i was busy in cousin's wedding...

hope you will like this part too...




recap---



he mumbled…"thanks basket!…thanks a lot!…tumne mere saarey sapne purey kar diye…maine jitna manga,usse bahut jyada tumne mujhe diye…I love you my life…I love you!!"



chapter -- 30..(now)








After I month



It was 7 o'clock in the morning,a couple were sleeping peacefully in each other's arm…someone knocked at the door..riddhima opened her eyes for a minute and tried to understand from where the sound coming, but her eyelids were so heavy due to sleep,couldn't able to keep it open ,she was feeling dizzy …because of her beloved husband's unlimited love of last night.she tried to turn other side,but got herself in a tight grip of her husband ,so she too hold him tightly and closed her eyes,keeping her head on his strong chest.




Again door bang and arman opened his eyes,getting riddhima's head on his chest ,he made a quick peck and uttered…"jaan,koi aaya hai,knock kar raha hai…



Riddhima snuggled him with close eyes and whispered…"nooo!!!


Arman caressed her waist softly and said …"ok,tum rest karo,mai dekhta hun…


But riddhima wrapped arman's neck with her soft arms and whispered…"awaz mat karo,jo hai chala jayega…


Arman (surprisingly): "arey riddhima! Tumhe kya ho gaya! 8 baz chuke hain….


Riddhima opened her one eye and said innocently…."bas thooori der…phir to tum whole day busy ho jaoge…



Arman touched her cheeks with lips.."kya baat hai? aaj mrs. Mallik bahut romantic ho rahi hai?..



Riddhima rubbed her cheecks on his manly lips…."kya karun,ye mr. mallik ka nasha hai..jo ek baar piye,will be addicted with it…




Arman laughed loudly and pinched riddhima's nose…"oyye hoyye!!



They heard outside the door…" mai to paresaan ho agyi inko lekar,mai ready ho gayi,golu ,choco pie ready ho gayi ,aur ye abhi tak so rahe hain!!! Yahan to bade bachchon se badhkar hain!!hey mere bhagwanji!!



Arman laughed : "humari nani ma bula rahi hain,ab hum bach nahi sakte…ab to aapko raat tak wait karna parega mrs. Mallick….


Riddhima whispered.."tum bhi na arman!! Chalo chodo mujhe……and yelled…"1 min beta,abhi aayi…


And again scolded arman in a low voice…"utha nahi sakte they? 8 baz gaye!sab kya sochenge? Tum na arman!


Arman again laughed and pulled her in his arm grabbing her waist…"batao basket,mai na kya?


Riddhima smiled and poke her finger on his chest…"you are a badmash doc!!!!...



Saying it,she smacked with her lips on his right dimple and ran to open the door…..rishima was there.she said…"mumma,plz.jaldi ready ho jao aur aapke arman ko bhi kaho..nanu ka 5 times phone aa chuka hai,hume 9 baze tak new sanjiwani pahunchna hai."



Riddhima : "gdm beta …hum abhi aate hain,within 15 minutes…


Rishima : "ok…mai,bi,billy dadu and dadi nikalte hain ,aap pappa ke sath jaldi aa jao burna mujhe dant khani paregi..


Riddhima held her soft hand and kissed.."nahi beta,hum jaldi aa jayenge…



Rishima left and riddhima came in the room…she opened the almirah to select her dress for this special function but soon found somone's strong arms around her waist.she warned …."arman,ab koi mazak nahi,chodo..humy jaldi ready hona hai..


Arman nuzzled on her neck…"to mera pyar aapko mazak lagta hai mrs. Mallik?


Riddhima tried to free from his grip…"arman plzzz..hum waise bhi bahut late hain..aaj humare bachchon ki 'naming ceremony' hai aur new sanjiwani ka inauguration programme aur hum hi late hain.



Arman gripped her more and started to kiss her neck.."chodo na,shanky sab sambhal lega…


Before riddhima could answer,mobile rang….arman annoyed…"uff! Ye bhi galat time par bazta hai!…mera sabse bada dusman!shanky se bhi bada…but I don't care…



Riddhima picked the phone and saw that dr. shashank's name was flushing on the screen…she uttered…"arman,papa!!!


Arman left riddhima with a jerk and asked nervously….."kahan! Kahan! Good morning sir!!


Riddhima burst out laughing to see arman's condition and pointed at the phone.."wahan..phone par,papa ka phone hai….


Arman shaked his head in na.."no way! Mai phone receive nahi karunga,abhi dant paregi..shanky ko to bahana chahiye mujhe dantne ka…tum..tum kah do mai bathroom me hun…



Riddhima nodded her head like an obedient girl .."ok…


And picked the phone and said…"ya papa,arman?haan ,yahan hai,kah raha hai ki aapko kah dun wo bathroom me hai…yes papa,mai bhi uske liye late ho gayi…ya,aap jante hi ho, he is so much impossible!...


Arman held his head with palms…"hey bhagwan! basket aaj mujhe shanky se dant khilakar chodegi…..


Riddhima turned to arman and giggled …."papa ne kaha aaj to arman ko koi nahi bacha sakta…lo ,baat karo papa se...….


Arman looked at his naughty wife and took the mobile from her hand,saying through his eyes…"mai tumhe dekh lunga basket!!wait!



But Riddhima understood his words and ran to the washroom to save herself from her husband……..



love u all
punam






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Posted: 12 years ago
super cute update di
rishima is sooo sweettt
luv her sooo very much
cont soonish di😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey punam
it was such a cute and sweet part
but where were our little angels
plz in next part write about them too
AR were so romantic
plz update soon
thanx for pm
lots of love
Ria
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Posted: 12 years ago
Armaan's such a cutiepie!
loved AR romance!
eagerly waiting 4 next part! cont soonish
thnx 4 pm:))

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