MG FF-Till Death Do Us Part Thread 4 - Page 74

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

just stary readingthe story...

its awesome...

first of all the title is soo good...

and story is great uptill now

and as your question

i dont know much, as i've just started reading.. i m at initial parts

bu if the story needs it... i have no problem with the level of intimacy...

Originally posted by: Water.

Washing the Pain!

Ritz,

Humko tumse pyar hai and that is why we the posters n what not.

The title fits perfectly washing away the pain emotionally and the shower scene makes it a ritual, it kinda brings a closure for Geet and her trauma that she experienced. Also, it makes it more symbolic and brings further healing for her because it is the love of her life that is doing the symbolism. I mean he is erasing the painful memories and is imprinting new ones in her mind, her body and her soul. What more can be more healing than this'

Yes dear it was very much needed hai na...after all Maan's reaction mattered to her the most...not only he washed all her bad memories but also made sure she could see that those acts didn't matter to him just her pain is what affects him

I loved the collective gasps from the family, the silent eye contact between the two love birds and their family witnessing it'

Now is the time of family enjoying...I think FF is going to be posiitve for most parts so hopefully i will be able to keep up light moments and balance romance with family

Pari ' one thing I always forgot to ask you about her'.when Geet was not present in her's and Rahul's wedding, Pari was resenting her and u had mentioned that in one of your updates'.after that I am not sure if I read any updates in which Pari apologized, well not really apologized but I should say reciprocated her life towards Geet'.cus afterall Geet went away cus she wanted her brother's wedding to take place'

I had not initially liked Pari long back when she had hated Geet'sorry typing it out in this update'

I understand yor POV...there is a update planned in future to close this loop as I have kept it open intentionally...but just for character sketch...Pari doesn't know what Geet did to get her married...she resented her intially because she ran just a day before her marriage making Rahul sad and tensed...they missed their honeymoon and she had a bad start to her married life. Every girl dreams of a perfect marriage and she hated Geet at that point. But after she came back and she realised that Geet was sick, she mellowed down. Now she has a normal bhabhi-nanaad relationship with her. She did not apolgise but then she is not mean to her either. Both are same age and nice affacble girls and hence get along good. But definately there will be a loop closure on Pari's relationship with Geet but a little later in the story.

Raj is the best dad ever'.I mean so understanding and trusting and all that'.we after all we are talking about Maan'.loved Raj's gestures'

Geet being able to say he touched me and placing his hand over her B*****'.I am not sure if a girl can really do that after going through hell like her'but den It also depends on the relationship she has with her Maan'n I guess in ur FF the relationship is very transparent. 'with no hidden agendas or masks'.

Yes there is lot of transparency and these two know how to communicate. I sometime wished they showed some maturity in real GHSP after their marriage. I think talking and letting know of your feelings atleast to that one special person in your life is very important. Before marriage it could be mom, sister, dad, brother but after love happens that place belongs to your lover.

I am glad she was able to share her inmost pain with him and he was there to soothe her and wash away her pain as I mentioned above.

I loved the update'it was emotional and brought two lovely souls closer to each other than they could ever imagine.

18+ sounds good after all the roller coaster rides these two had...and I think they deserve it. 😆

Originally posted by: Water.

Chupke Chupke...Update dede (by the way...u know na kis se chupke chupke😉)

From the one who does not allow...

(Don mind this comment ok...juss teasing u...actually I m calming my brain after 6 hours of study session...by spamming on ur thread)

Originally posted by: drdee142

Hi Ritzy,I'm back after a long vacation and missed your FF dring that period.

Just finished reading all the remaining parts that I missed and wow so much has happened since I read the last update.

Your FF went through so many phases during this period, love, romance, betrayal, drama, tragedy and finally love and romance again.

Thanks for taking us on this wonderful journey I enjoyed every single moment of it. I'm sorry I didn't comment after every chapter but I was too engrossed in reading all the updates and didn't have the patience to wait and comment.

I know it's not fair to you but it's also the biggest compliment to your writing skills that got me so engrossed that I didn't wanna stop

Now I'm so very impatient to read the next update, after having the luxury of reading all these parts together I'm a little spoilt.

Fantastic chapter, very well written, kudos to you 👏 Now waiting for some good romance and passionate moments between Maaneet. Please update soon and thanks for the PM's don't forget to keep sending me PM's about your updates 😊

Originally posted by: ritzy09

welcome back dear...i was waiting for your comment...

Hope you had a great time on vacation...where did you go? Do share your experience...

is baar maaf kar rahi hoon because you are back after a long time...but next update onwards my expectation will be there