Maaneet OS- Beetein lamhe! Updated on Pg 16

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Monali

@monika1992

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

awesome ... superb ...

waiting 4 d epilogue ...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

very nice...
Dev again in the jail along with his wife and mom...
i want an epilogue for this dear...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

woww Mayu what a Lovely update :)
ohh geet remembering what happen to her:(

Loved waiting for nxt one update fasttt 😳

Edited by -sofiya- - 14 years ago

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@mitzi11

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#84

mindblowing & emotional update

poor geet remembering what happen to her

but she got the justice she waiting for

waiting next

thank yu so much

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aishwarya

@AishMinoz

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

loved the update...
amazing...
senti senti ..
superlike..
do cont soon ;)

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S.n.e.h

@S.n.e.h

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#86

nice update...do continue...thanks for pm😊

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anks_ams

@anks_ams

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#87

loved it.. i really want an epilogue .. eagerly waiting dear:)

Ankita

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-MansiKohli-

@-MansiKohli-

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#88

lovely os mayu jaan🤗or should i rather say a heart -trending os beautifully written...it would have been great if the story line was as your os..all of the dialogues are too good...and halfway while reading them i was trying hard to control my tears *i lie not*and this particular line was very emotional...it shows that maan still has that concern and endless love for her though he tries to pretend that it is otherwise...

Geet : "Maan aaj bhi kuch nahi badla hai; kal bhi Geet ko dekh kar aap tadapte the; aur aaj bhi apni Geet ko dekhkar aap tadapte hai. Kuch nahi badla Maan!"

...it was really very thoughtful of you to write such an os as many people out here want maan's memory back rather than letting out the truth to him in the meanwhile!and more than anything it was the ending that i loved a lot...it makes us to think whether maan comes to know of the person or not!! very beautiful...loved it a lot...keep up the excellent work!!!we crave for your os's😳

p.s:will post my comments on other updates as per promise😆

love,

mansi...

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mandymore

@mandymore

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

Awsome prt,want an epilogue wid maan sayng ilu to his mishti.

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Lonely.Cat

@Raina123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#90

awsome yaar !!!!

truthfuly i have never agreed with geetfor forgiving dev in the first place ...i mean how can you even look at the man who betrayed u like that and then fled with respect 😒 its just not normal and i find that too be one of the biggest flaws in geets presonality

srry about that coming back to your update 🤗

i just loved maans concern for geet and the entire thing

keep writng

raina