MYFIRSTOS/ff Abhiya repentence part 5 updated pg33 - Page 27

Originally posted by: kuttu

Abhay is getting naughty day by day. Haseena is such a sweet heart knows to manipulate Chand too for he son. So ow Abhays brain needs to work over time I guess to think of way of entering the mad house of the dobriyals

Originally posted by: Neytiri

Fantastic update Jazz.u r a fab writer nd plz dnt underestimte urself.plz do cntinue. Thnx 4 pm.

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

wonderful update
waiting for it since a long time
why did abhay stopped so abruptly was he feeling guilty for what he did or is there something else troubling him
so u r planning for abhiya baby gr8
please don't separate them now
get them married soon
please update soon

Originally posted by: anuraag111

HEY

AMAZING PART

LOVED IT TO THE CORE

SO HASEENA AND CHAAND ARE PLANNING TO TURN PIA INTO VAMPIRE SOUNDS INTERESTING

CONTINUE SOON...

EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART

THANKS FOR THE PM

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

beautiful update kiara👏abhaypia convo at the beginning ws too emotional. abhiya in the balcony and wishng fr eachother ws so cute...and chay brushing pia's photo wth his face and telling tht he cnt live wthout pia fr a moment nw...i just love this word of abhay's...its so romantic😳and chay realisng pias dream and thinkng of fulfilling them ...aww i so love ts part...and u wrote it so well...abhaypia be love making scene ws very passionate..the chandeena convo ws great too..bravo dear👏offcourse u shud continue dear..and update soon wth chiya' abhiya's marrige. tc. love u..😳and thx fr the pm jazz. oopps sorry i wrote kiara by mistake..gussa mat hona yaar pullzz..actualy i m replyng frm cell so i ws unable to delete tht name...!sory once again fadear r.

Originally posted by: mariamahar

awesome update
i like you post

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta

awesome update
loved it
waiting for Abhiya's marriage
continue soon

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

its fantastic jazz... abhay pia r so overwelming... i loved dere romance... cont soon n thanks 4 d pm...

Originally posted by: peehu24

ausum and fab update jazz...abhay and pia...😍...too good romance...yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai...ofcourse marry abhiya and update asap...m eagerly waiting for next update..especially dobriyal sis confession and confrontation...lovely update...thanks for pm...

Originally posted by: abhayarsh

wow. . . Super . . Really love you ya. . Jitna actual serial nahi de saktha itna hume yahan miltha hey loved it. . Really thanx for that. . And please update it soon.. . And pm me