MYFIRSTOS/ff Abhiya repentence part 5 updated pg33

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#251

Jazz I loved it...romantic scenes are too good... superb update 😳

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#252

Nice update! I loved that scene where Abhay was looking at the shooting star and wished that Piya would always remain happy and Piya wished the same for Abhay! 😳 Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

Edited by Deepi20 - 14 years ago

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#253

Super job Jazz...

Haila Piya adhi neendh mein yeh sab kar sakthi hain tho poori hosh mein☺️...

Cntnu on dear

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nizza

@lakshyasss

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: janu1610

Jazz amazing part yaar . don't under estimate urself . that telepathy conversation was very nice . And when Abhay intrude in her dreams that was cute gesture . how some one can love some one this much . But again they can...
romance of Chaand nd Haseena . Gosh girl are u in ur senses .Abhi b dil nahi bhara inka!!!!😆
very cute part . loved it ...
for Abhay n piya...
is bejaan dil ki awaz ho tum
meri saanson ka taranna ho
mere humraz ho tum..
nazar dhoondti hai har pal tumko
mere dil mein chhupe ehsaas ho tum...

love
ritu

ritu...thanksa lot for liking it...actually weather made me underestimate myself..but now ok

abhiya are meant to be together for always ever

Edited by lakshyasss - 14 years ago

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rashika aggarwal

@rashika27.1997

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Posted: 14 years ago

#255

is awesome dear

just awesome

thnx for the pm

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rashmi

@morning_dews

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#256

thanks for the pm...😃

it was asusually another amazing post by you...😉😉

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#257

Awesum part. .jazz
loved it
awww. . Abhiya scene was supert hot , passionate & dreamy. .
Birdie kha kha kar phat jaye gi. .
Misha ke dimagh mei itne questions. .lagta hai pia ki jaga leli hai !
Chandeena romance was superb & ek dum hatke. .
Jazz! I want a full tu marriage & honeymoon of abhiya. .hehe
thanks 4 d pm
continue soon
tc

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nizza

@lakshyasss

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu
Jazz yaha bhi last pe comedy lines lol awsum update abhi itna romance kya honeymoon me hamari neend udane ka irada hai thanks for pm

😉neend to uraan ke hii rahoongii😉update aaj karoongii