MYFIRSTOS/ff Abhiya repentence part 5 updated pg33

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ritu

@janu1610

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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

Jazz amazing part yaar . don't under estimate urself . that telepathy conversation was very nice . And when Abhay intrude in her dreams that was cute gesture . how some one can love some one this much . But again they can...
romance of Chaand nd Haseena . Gosh girl are u in ur senses .Abhi b dil nahi bhara inka!!!!😆
very cute part . loved it ...
for Abhay n piya...
is bejaan dil ki awaz ho tum
meri saanson ka taranna ho
mere humraz ho tum..
nazar dhoondti hai har pal tumko
mere dil mein chhupe ehsaas ho tum...

love
ritu

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

fantastic update Jazz. Lolz panchi eating so many things. Abhiya are perfect. Chandeena ahem ahem.

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nizza

@lakshyasss

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Posted: 13 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
fantastic update Jazz. Lolz panchi eating so many things. Abhiya are perfect. Chandeena ahem ahem.

😊thanks a lot..good to see u liked it😛

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nizza

@lakshyasss

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Posted: 13 years ago

#234

i am happy...that ure all's love made my os to shift in ff corner..thanks all ...because of all buddies like u i am happy...feeling good...calm.😊..

Edited by lakshyasss - 13 years ago

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

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Posted: 13 years ago

#235

Jazz yaha bhi last pe comedy lines lol awsum update abhi itna romance kya honeymoon me hamari neend udane ka irada hai thanks for pm

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Ume Salma Kakal

@sunflower52

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Posted: 13 years ago

#236

I loved the update. Please do continue. Abhiya were so cute.

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visma

@kuttu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#237

Abhay is getting naughty day by day. Haseena is such a sweet heart knows to manipulate Chand too for he son. So ow Abhays brain needs to work over time I guess to think of way of entering the mad house of the dobriyals

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Neytiri

@Neytiri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#238

Fantastic update Jazz.u r a fab writer nd plz dnt underestimte urself.plz do cntinue. Thnx 4 pm.

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#239

wonderful update
waiting for it since a long time
why did abhay stopped so abruptly was he feeling guilty for what he did or is there something else troubling him
so u r planning for abhiya baby gr8
please don't separate them now
get them married soon
please update soon