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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
hey!!!

awesome part !!!

loved it!!!

nicely done!!

the story is getting more intersting!!!

hunnn😲 yeh bhargav ke entry bhi hoo gae!!!

plz cont soon!!!

love

esha
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part madhu😊

Kaaya really get affected with prithvi's words and changed herself alot but to remain a normal self she does not wants to show this change suddenly she maitained her posture infront of her mother so that she will not doubt on her👍🏼

Kaaya behaves well with Prithvi and he also understood that whateve he said Kaaya did reconsidered it and behaving normaly with her and she is not minding at all the way Prithvi is addressing her😉😊

And here this takle Bhargava again comes to do non sense things in Prithvi and Kaaya's life is ther is some type of tiff btwn bhargava and Kaaya the way the both re staring eachother says that something is wrong btwn them😡😕

pls continue soon😳
shreya😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey sorry for being late Madhu 🤔
too gud n loved it
I really liked Prithvi's attitude today. 😍
He should have done it earlier but gud that finally she has to hear Raj in this way n i was disappointed with her tone in which she talked to Prithvi.
Prithvi was right, her tough look wil not let her live happily. She has to change her attitude n first time in her life she heard someone .😛
Prithvi was polite but his tone was gud n i liked the way he explained everything to her n she was silent.😆
She has to change n Prith was right n now she wil i believe bcz she is realizing the change is her fault not others.😊
That was cute that Kaya n Prith both r impressed with each other n Prith's restlessness proves that he has started liking Kaya.😳
Now even Kaya gave him a name RAJ that's start of sumthing awesome.😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice part 😃
Kaya is right if she wil show that all of a sudden she has changed bcz of effect of her RAJ anyone can doubt her n ye to us ki mom hain who is already surprised.😛
Kaya n Prith's interaction was nice n thank god she didn't shout n warned again to him when he greeted her with her name, i know she was happy but she wil not show it.😉
They make a gud team n is there any doubt that Raj isn't smart? 😆 afterall if Kaya felt herself impressed with him than Raj can't b an ordinary person.😍
That was really funny how Kaya was responding at his each comment hmmm poor he how can he expect her to b normal all of a sudden? 😔
I think Kaya was right n Prith k saath if she wil sit than ppl start thinking wrong.😛
i hate this Bhargav why is he so jealous with Prith?😡
Was he trying to warn him?😡
Try to update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kaya Canteen se lunch karke uss lady ka enlarge photo le kar Office main aati hai, dekhti hai Pritvi aapna laptop pe kuch kaam kar raha hai.Kaya Pritvi ke paas aakar usse woh enlarge photo deti hai.

Pritvi- ohh, yeh ho gaya.

Kaya- haa, maine kaha tha Emergency hai,main lunch karne jaa rahi hoo, aa kar lungi.its very important.

Pritvi- yeahh, it is very imp.( Yeh keh kar Pritvi Kaya ke taraf dekhti hai, usse lagta hai Kaya shayad kuch bolna chati hai, usse dekh kar aisa lag raha hai jaise woh pareshan hai)

Pritvi ( in mind)- leee, abhi to bindaas no no, yeh word Kaya ke liye nahin, abhi to thikthak thi, achanak kya hua??

Pritvi- Kaya tum koi baat ko le kar pareshan ho?????? Kuch batana chati ho mujhe??

Kaya- ohh, ( kuch der chup rehkar) ACP Sir, mujhe lagta hai humhe ACP Bhargav se dur rehna chayiye.

Pritvi- whatt???

Kaya- main ACP Bhargav ko janti hoon,I mean kabhi kaam nahin kiya hai unke saath, but bohut kuch suna hai, unka bohut bade logo ke saath uthna bethna hai, bare contacts, aur aapko shayad nahin pata uska DCP banna almost pakka tha, but pata nahin kya ho gaaya, aur uss jagah DCP Pathak ki posting hua, unke saath bilkul accha relation nahin hai uss Bhargav ki.balki main to yeh bhi suna tha yeh case woh investigate karna chate the, but Pathak sir ne yeh hone nahin diya.

Pritvi- Agar Bhargav DCP Sir ke jagah le sakta hai, to main naa India ka President ban jaunga, he he he.

Kaya bhi ek chota sa smile deti hai.

Pritvi- come on Kaya, Bhargav kya banna chata tha, kya nahin, uska kya contacts hai, I simply don't care, main yahan iss case ko le kar uljha hua hoon, waqt kaha?? Usne hello kiya, maine hello ka jawab diya, bas that's it, avoid him.

Kaya- avoid to karti hoon, yaha par sab Lady Officer usse avoid karta hai, woh bartamez hai, unka baat karne ka, aur ek ladki ki taraf dekhne ka dhang bohut kharab hai.sab bohut uncomfortable feel karte hai, Aditi ne ek baar mujhe kaha tha.

Pritvi- simply avoid him.waise CBI ki naukri karte karte logo ko judge karna mujhe acchi tarah se aata hai, woh dekhne main kuch aur hai, karne main kuch aur.Forget it.Uske baare main kya sochna?waise abhi nikalna parega, mujhe iss mobile shop main jaana hai, jaha se yeh SIM card issue hua hai.

Kaya- right Sir.

Kaya drive kar raha hai, Pritvi paas betha hua hai.dono bilkul chupchap hai, Pritvi kisi soch main ghum hai,aur Kaya dhyan laga kar drive kar raha hai, beech beech main Pritvi ke taraf bhi dekh raha hai.

In Mobile shop,

Ek aadmi bohut hi dhyan se kuch kaam kar raha hai.achanak uske samne koi zor se ek file phekta hai.Ab woh aadmi to bohut hi gusse main hai, usne man laga kar hisab kitab kar raha tha, kisine achanak aise disturb karke uska saara calculation garbad kar di hai.

The man ( bohut gusse se) –yeh kya bartameezi hai?? main kitna imp calculation kar raha tha, sab garbad kar diya??thoda wait nahin kar sakta tha???

Pritvi ( with a small smile) – woh kya hai naa tumhari bajah se hamari calculation mil nahin raha hai, isliye disturb kiya, jab tak hamara calculation mil nahin jaata, tab tak, no more calculation, sirf dhyan se mere saare sawal sun kar thik thik jawab dena.

The Man- waise aap log hai kaun?? Aur yeh kya bakwas hai???

Pritvi ( aapna Identity card dikha har)- C.B.I, koi aur sawal????? Mujhe pata hai nahin hai, waise tum iss dukan ka malik ho??

The Man( nervous )- haa, main hi malik hoon.

Pritvi- ab bol yeh SIM tere hi dukan se kharida gaya hai naa??dhyan se dekh number.( Pritvi file main likha hua number dikhata hai.)

The Man- Sahab, din main kitna SIM bechta hoon, kis kis ko yaad rakhu???

Pritvi ( dukan ke malik ke samne uss lady ka photo rakhta hai)- isse pehchanta hai???

The Man- yeh kaun hai???

Pritvi- yeh wohi aurat hai jise tune SIM card becha tha, photo dikha kar tujhe yaad dilane ki kohsish kar raha tha, par tujhe yaad nahin aaya, ab chal hamare saath.(almost uss aadmi ka collar pakad kar).

The man( haath jod kar, in a pleading tone)- maine kuch nahin kiya, main to isse janta bhi nahin, aur SIM Card bechna kya gunah hai???

Pritvi- nahin, SIM card bechna gunah nahin hai, par galat logo ko bechna, aur saath hi galat information dena gunah hai, chal hamare saath CBI Headquarter chal, woha naa acche acche bolne lag jaate hai, to tu kya chiz hai???

The Man ( in a crying tone )- sahab main sach kehta hoon, main yeh SIM kisiko nahin becha hai,iss aurat ko maine pehle kabhi nahin dekha, ab chahe to register dekh sakte hai, main barabar register maintain karta hoon, record rakhta hoon.

Pritvi- accha tu record rakhta hai, bohut accha, but I know, tere register main iska entry nahin hai, coz tune hi jaan bhuj kar yeh ghotala kiya hai,hum acchi tarah se pata karke aaye hai, yeh number tere hi dukan se issue hua hai.

The Man- sahab, ek min shayad Chotu ne yeh SIM card becha hai.

Pritvi- ab yeh Chotu kaha se beech main aa gaaya?? Aur tera dukan, tu malik, Chotu kaise SIM card becheaga??

The Man- sahab Chotu iss dukan main hi kaam karta hai, shayad usne kuch garbad kiya ho? Aur mujhe pata hi nahin chala.

Pritvi- yeh Chotu kaha hai?? bula usse, aur ek baat dhyan se sun, agar Chotu se puchtach karke humhe kuch nahin mila naa, to hum tujhe pakrenge.umeed karta hoon, tu jhooth nahin bol raha hai.

Issi beech ek ladka haath main do paani ki bottle le kar dukan main aata hai, umar kareeb 20 saal ke aas paas.

Pritvi( dukan ki malik se puchta hai)- yeh Chotu hai??? ( dukan ki malik sirf haa main sar hilata hai.)

Pritvi Chotu ko ishare main aapne paas bulata hai.

Pritvi- to tumhara naam Chotu hai??

Chotu sirf haa main aapna sar hilata hai.

Pritvi- Chotu, ab main jo jo sawal puchunga, tum soch samajh kar thande dimag main uska bilkul sach sach jawab dena, okay.

Chotu confused ho kar Dukan ki malik ki taraf dekhta hai.

Pritvi- uske taraf kya dekh rahe ho Chotu?? Sawal main puchunga, jawab bhi tumhe mujhe hi dena parega, soo idhar mere taraf dekho, waise tum shayad iss baat ko lekar confused ho, ki main kaun hoon, main CBI se hoon, mera naam ACP Pritviraj Rathod hai.

Ab Chotu ki halat kharab, uske pasine chut rahe hai.

Pritvi ( Chotu ki haath main pani ka bottle thama deta hai) pani pee lo,arre tum hi mehnat karke paani laaye ho,come on, pee lo.

Chotu ek hi ghut peeya hai, Pritvi uski haath se bottle le leta hai.

Pritvi- chalo ab mere sawal ka jawab do,(file ka number dikha kar) yeh SIM tumne kisiko becha hai naa???

Chotu ( kuch der number ke taraf dekh kar)- yaad nahin aa raha hai.

Pritvi- accha, yaad nahin aa raha hai.( phir uss lady ka photo dikha kar) ab kuch yaad aa raha hai?

Photo dekh kar Chotu ka hosh udh jaata hai.Pritvi samajh jaata hai Chotu hi yeh garbad kiya hai.

Pritvi- tumhe dekh kar lag raha hai ki tumhe sab kuch yaad aa gaya hai Chotu, ab sach sach bata do, jo kuch bhi jante ho, agar kuch bhi chupaya, to tum muskil main fas jaoge.tumhe pata hai naa tumne galat kaam kiya hai

Chotu ab rone lagta hai.

Chotu- sahab maine kuch nahin kiya, yeh aurat hamare basti main hi rehti hai, iska naam Sonali hai, main isse didi bulata hoon,isne ek din mujhe kaha isse ek SIM card ki zarurat hai, to maine kaha, haa dukan main aa jao, aur kharid lo, isne kaha yeh dukan main nahin aayegi, naa hi yeh aapna asli naam aur pata degi, maine mana kar diya tha saab, phir usne kaha woh kuch galat kaam nahin karegi, aur mujhe zyada paise bhi degi, to main man gaaya,maine hi yeh SIM usse diya, usne galat naam, aur address diya, par photo chayiye tha, to usne khud ka photo hi de diya.

Pritvi- to Chotu, ab humhe tumhare basti main jaana hai, tumhare iss Didi se milna hai, chalo,aapne Sonali didi ka ghar dikhao.

Pritvi, Kaya Chotu ko le kar chale jaate hai.Dukan ki malik ek lambi chain ki saans leta hai.mann main Chotu ko gali dene lagta hai "sala Chotu, tujhe maine kaam diya, par tune mere vishwas ka yeh sila diya, namakhalal."

Pritvi aur Kaya Chotu ko le kar basti main Sonali ke ghar ke samne khada hai.par darwaje par ek bada tala laga hua hai.

Pritvi- Chotu, kaha hai tumhari Sonali Didi??? Ghar main itna bada tala, ek baat kan khol kar sun lo, agar tumhari didi nahin mila naa, to tum bohut baadi musibat main fas jaoge, ab tumhari kismat tumhare Sonali didi ke hawale.

Chotu- sahab, woh kaam par gaayi hai, laut ayenge abhi.

Kaya- ACP Sir, mujhe lagta hai humhe main raste main uska intezar karna chayiye, agar hum basti ki beech se ek ladki ko arrest kare, to bastiwale bohut hungama karte hai,itna humgama hoga ki poori Delhi ko khabar ho jayega, aur hum sliently jo kaam kar rahe hai, woh karna muskil ho jayega.

Pritvi- yes, you are right Kaya.hum raste main uska intezar karte hai.

Almost 1 ghanta ho raha hai, Pritvi car ke andar driving seat par betha hai, nazar sadak ke taraf, Kaya sadak ke side khadi hai, uske paas Chotu khada hai.Chotu ko arrest nahin karna hai, but jab tak Sonali mil nahin jaati, tab tak Chotu ki zarurat hai, aur Pritvi janta hai Chotu sach bol raha hai.

Achanak Pritvi ki nazar ek aurat par padhti hai, green colour ki salwar kamez pehni hui hai woh ladki, kandhe main bag, Pritvi photo dekhta hai, yess, yehi Sonali hai.Pritvi Kaya ko call karti hai, "woh aa rahi hai, pakad lo, aur sedhe aa kar gadi main beth jao."

Kaya Sonali ke paas aakar uska haath pakad leti hai,"arre aap hai kaun??kaha le jaa rahe hai??"

Kaya- tumse kuch baat karni hai Sonali, chalo.

Kaya Sonali ko laa kar car main bitha deti hai, khud bhi beth jaati hai, Sonali ke kuch samajhne se pehle hi car chalne lag jaati hai.car ki windows ki saare glass bandh hai, Sonali ghabra jaati hai, coz woh inn logo ko janti nahin, aise anjaan log usse gaadi main bitha kar kaha le jaa rahe hai?

Sonali- main shor machungi, chodo mujhe, gaadi rokho,( phir car ki window par haath maar ke) bachao, koi hai?? plzz help.

Kaya uska haath pakad leti hai."ssshh, chupchap bethi raho, agar ek bhi awaz muh se nikla naa, to bohut bura hoga.Aur koi tumhari help karne nahin aayega, hum CBI se hai."

Sonali chupchap beth jaati hai, honestly woh Kaya se kaafi dar gaayi hai.Aur CBI usse kya chati hai, yeh bhi uske samajh main nahin aa raha tha.

In Office,

Room ke ek side main Pritvi chair lekar betha hai,thore dur Sonali ek chair main bethi hui, aur uske paas Kaya kadhi hai.

Kaya- to Sonali, tum yeh batao aise kya zaruri kaam padh gaya ki tum Chotu ko paise de kar aapna galat naam pata de kar SIM card liya??

Sonali chup.

Kaya- agar tumhe yaad nahin aa raha hai, to yeh raha number,par yeh mat kehna ki tumne kuch nahin kiya, tumhari yeh photo hawa main udh kar to nahin aayega naa iss document main??aur Chotu pehle confess kar chuka hai.

Sonali- aap jante hai to mujhse kyun puch rahi hai?

Ab Kaya zor se Sonali ke gaal pakad leti hai, "main puch raha hoon kyun kiya tumne?aur yaha par zyada smart banne ki kohsish mat karo"

Sonali phir se chup ho jaati hai.

Kaya ab khich ke Sonali ke gaal par ek thappad marti hai.

Sonali- ek to aaplog bina arrest warrant ke mujhe uth kar le aaye, phir haath bhi utha rahe ho? Kya samajhte ho basti main rehti hai, kya kar legi??

Kaya- chuppp, sshh, zuban ladati hai hamare saath.

Pritvi ( in a very cold voice)- Sonali tum abhi CBI custody main ho,yeh baat koi nahin janta,tum jabtak sab sach nahin bologi, tum jaa nahin sakti,baat bohut aage badh chuki hai, jo kuch bhi janti ho, sab sach sach batao, chupa kar koi fyada nahin hai.

Sonali chup.

Pritvi- Kaya main chalta hoon, tum kuch bhi karke iska muh khulbao.

Kaya- yes Sir.

Sonali ab rone lagti hai. " Sir aap mat jao, main sab sach batati hoon"

Sonali- Yeh SIM card maine aapne liye nahin, aapne ek dost ke liye liya tha.

Pritvi- dost???

Sonali- nahin, boyfriend.uska naam Bunty hai.woh police ka informer hai.mujhse kaha ki woh ek secret mission par hai, ek mobile connection ki zarurat hai, samne nahin aa sakta, jaan ko khatra hai, isliye main laa kar di, hum koi galat kaam nahin kar rahe hai.main janti hoon Bunty jootha nahin hai.

Pritvi- tumhare paas Bunty ka koi photo? Jise hum usse pehchan sake, dekho Sonali shayad uski jaan ko khatra hai.

Sonali (now crying)- mere paas nahin hai,woh khud aa kar mujhse milta tha, aapna koi nishan nahin chodta woh, kehta hai, kaam main muskil hoga.mujhe to yeh bhi nahin woh kaha hai?achanak usne contact karna bandh kar diya.

Pritvi- Kaya hamare sketch artist ko bulao, aur Bunty ki sketch ready karo.

Raat kaafi ho gaya hai, Kaya aakar Pritvi ko Bunty ka sketch deti hai.

Pritvi- ab sirf isko trace karna baaki hai.yeh ek baar haath main aa jaye, sab kuch clear ho jayega.Raat kaafi ho gaaya hai, tum ghar jao,kal aakar sabse pehle hamare saare informers ke paas yeh sketch bhej dena, aur kehna, jo bhi iska pata batayega, usse kemat bhi muh manga milega.

Kaya- right Sir.

Kaya aapna purse leti hai, achanak Pritvi usse peeche se bulata hai.

Pritvi- Kaya

Kaya- yes Sir??

Pritvi- hmm, bye

Kaya ( very surprised, kya bolegi, kuch samajh main nahin aa raha hai)- emm, bye Sir.

Pritvi (Kaya ke bilkul kareeb aa kar) - Good night Kaya

Kaya (now aur bhi hairan)- Goodnight. ( Kehke jaldi nikal jaati hai)

Kaya ke ghar aate aate aaj kaafi raat ho gaya hai, usse pata hai uski maa so gaayi hai,to Kaya aapni maa ki ghar ki door khol kar aapni maa ko ek baar dekh kar aapni room main chali jaati hai.Andar aakar seedhe bed main girti hai.

Yeh kya ho raha hai usse?? "Raj" aaj uske itni paas aakar usse Good Night bola, woh bilkul bhi uncomfortable feel nahin ki, thoda sa bhi peeche nahin hati,aaj pura din waise to kuch khaas nahin hua, par woh aaj sara din aapne "Raj" ke saath thi, itne dino ke baad shayad pehli baar uska mood itna accha hai.Kaya aapni mobile ki FM on karti hai.

kuchh khaas hai kuchh paas hai, kuchh ajanabi ehsaas hai

kuchh duriyaan najdikiyaan, kuchh hans padi tanhaayiyaan

kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai

shaayad yeh pyaar hai, pyaar hai shaayad

kya yeh bahaar, kya intejaar hai

shaayad yeh pyaar hai, pyaar hai shaayad

"Shayad kya yehi pyaar hai, kitni special hai naa yeh feeling, I Love U Raj."Yeh keh kar Kaya ek pillow aapne seene se press karke so jaati hai.

Pritvi soch raha hai kya woh kuch galat kar raha hai? Kaya ki dosti chahta tha, ab woh jab mil raha hai, to woh uske aage jaana chahta tha."uffs, aisa to pehle kabhi nahin hua,aise feelings uske dil main pehle kabhi nahin aaya, kya ho raha hai??" Par Pritvi iss ehsaas ko galat bhi nahin keh sakta, coz uska dil iss ehsaas ko galat manne ke liye taiyaar nahin hai.

In CBI Headquarter,

ACP Pritviraj ki cabin ki chabi khol kar ek Orderly andar aata hai,aa kar idhar udhaar sab file main dekhta hai, phir ek file khol kar mobile se photo leta hai, phir sab kuch jaisa tha, waise kar ke, wapas chabi laga kar bahar aata hai.

Phir woh Orderly toilet jaata hai, woha koi wash basin main aapna muh dho raha hai."kaam ho gaya?"

Orderly- haa, uska sketch, Bunty naam hai, yeh kaam bohut risky hai, keemat bhi bhari milni chayiye ACP Bhargav.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Finally Updated, long update naa???Next update hoga next week main Saturday ko hoga, tab tak Enjoy this part

& yes, comment karna mat bhulna, eagarly waiting for ur comments.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97

nice part !!
liked it so much
but yaar...ab yeh Bharghav ko uski photo mil gayi...

waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!

Imagination mein bhi Prithvi Kaya ko bindaas nahi kahe sakta as that is not a term which can be applied to Kaya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Prithvi is right that Bhargav can never take DCP Pathak's place!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Bhargav seems to be really sleazy!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Prithvi deals very well with the shop owner and through Chotu find out about Sonali who had bought the SIM card!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Kaya is very smart aur uska Sonali ke liye raaste mein intezaar karna ka idea was very good!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Kaya is really tough and I loved her interrogation of Sonali!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Sonali tells them about her boyfriend Bunty who is a police informer!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

They finally have a lead in this case!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

I loved it when Prithvi came close to her to wish her Good Night!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Kaya is really happy as she had spent the whole day with her Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Prithvi and Kaya are coming close to each other!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The song is very nice and apt for Kaya and Prithvi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Prithvi wants more than friendship from Kaya and I am sure he will soon realise that he loves her!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kaya was right that Bhargav cannot be trusted and he proved her right by getting Bunty's photo stolen!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

I am sure Bhargav ke peeche koi aur hai aur woh yeh kaam kisi higher authority ke ishare pe kar raha hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

I hope Prithvi and his team gets to Bunty before Bhargav else Bunty will be killed and this lead will also be lost!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔


Edited by Shaina_b - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
nice update madhu😊

finally raj and kaaya gets the lead in this case from chotu and sonali who tells them about bunty and now they are on the hunt of finding him but here Bhargava is is definitely up with something wrong and may can cause damage to this case or to raj and kaaya😕😡

shreya😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi
the up is good
so kaya got the photo of that woman who bought that sim card which they got from naveen's house
prithvi who is happy to get the photo see a worried expression on kaya's face
he asked kaya about her worries kaya tells him that she is worried about bhargav as he is not a good man
he had bad notion towards woman
prithiv who also disliked bhargav suggests kaya to just avoid him
kaya and prithivi goes the shop from where that sim card was bought
prithvi interogate the shopkeeper about the owner of the no
but he cant say anything he tells him that chottu who works in his shop can help them
chottu tell prithvvi about the wner and also helps them to find that girl
kaya and prthvi both interogate that woman and came to know that she bought this sim for her boufriend who is an informer of police
but now that sketh is stolen by an orderly planted by bhagrav
oh this will surely create problem for prithvi
plz cont soon and pm me

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