RACE, THE CHASE BEGINS(RP FIC)Updated 21.08.12 - Page 9

nice one madhu !

thanks for a wonderful fic...

Just came across ur fic its nice n different from the rest...

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nice part Madhu...

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Pritvi subah uth kar garma garam coffee banata hai,coz usse iski bohut hi zarurat hai.Subah se Pritvi ka sar bhari hai, dimak main ajeeb ajeeb thought ghum raha hai, aisa Pritvi ko lagta hai,Dil main ek hi chahat hai, bas ek baar Kaya se baat kar loon, nahin baat bhi nahin karna chata Pritvi, sirf usse ek jhalak dekhna chata hai,samajh jayega Pritvi Kaya ki aankho main dekh kar uski dil ki baat,itna bishwas Pritvi ko khud par kaise hone laga?? Pritvi ko kuch samajh main nahin aa raha tha.

Kaya aaj subah se badhi acchi mood main hai.Woh aaj subah kaafi late uthi hai, so exercise karne bhi nahin gaayi hai.Kaya uth kar fresh hota hai, phir Ready ho kar seedha naste par aa jaati hai,Kaya chair par beth kar Kiranji ki taraf dekh kar kehti hai, "Good morning mom".Kiranji Kaya ki taraf baadi ajeeb nighoan se dekh rahi hai, usse Kaya kuch badli badli laagi, usse aise laga jaise yeh woh Kaya nahin jise woh kuch saalo se dekhti aa rahi hai.Kaya ko lagta hai ek din main aisa change dekhne main accha nahin lagega, uski maa ko shak ho jayega, isliye Kaya aapne face par seriousness lati hai, Malthy aa kar khana lagati hai, Kaya breakfast karne lagti hai.par woh notice karti hai uski maa uski taraf dekh rahi hai, Kaya jaldi khana khatam karta hai.Phir uth kar kehti hai, "okay mom, main chalti hoon", par rukh jaati hai, phir aapni maa ki gaal par ek chota sa kiss karta hai" aapna khayal rakhna, & love u mom".bilkul aapne school ki dino ki tarah, jab woh choti thi, aur aapni maa ko pakad kar aise gaal main kiss kiya karti thi. Malthy to bilkul shocked kadhi thi, par Kiranji ki aankho main aansu jhalak raha tha.

Pritvi Headquarter paunch kar canteen main breakfast karta hai, phir office main aakar dekhta hai aapne desk par sirf Kaya bethi hai.Pritvi darwaje par khade ho kar kuch pal Kaya ko dekha, phir andar aaya, Kaya Pritvi ko dekh kar uth kar kadhi ho gaayi.Kaya uski no emotion, expression face bana kar khadi hai, coz woh yeh baat Pritvi ke samne confess yaa zaahir nahin karne dena chati, ki ACP Pritviraj anjane main hi uska "RAJ" ban chuka hai, dil ki baat dil main hi rehna chayiye,coz dil se mehfus jagah duniya main kahin bhi nahin hai.Pritvi ko laga Kaya usko abhi salute karegi, but nahin, Kaya chupchap kadhi rahi.

Pritvi- Good Morning Kaya(Pritvi ne naam le kar pukara, coz woh the dekhna chahta tha Kaya par kya asar hota hai)

Kaya- Good morning ACP Sir.

Pritvi ke dil main ek ajeeb si khushi mehsus hui,Kal usne jo bhi Kaya se kaha hai, woh bura nahin maani hai, bal ki uss sab baato ko socha bhi hai, shayad woh Pritvi ko dost manne lagi hai, par haa yeh jaldi hoga ki Pritvi expect kare Kaya aapni saari barrier thoda kar uske saath friendly ho jaaye.Kaya agar aise khush hai,to Pritvi bhi bohut khush hai, very happy.

Pritvi- waise Kaya, kal tumne jo SIM ka record laaya tha, woh kya mere table main hai??

Kaya- yes Sir, aapke table main hai, aap ne kal check nahin kiya tha??

Pritvi- nahin, waqt nahin mila( safed jhooth, kal mood nahin tha Pritvi ka)chalo, dekhte hai.

Kaya- kuch khas nahin hai, humne jo socha tha, yeh iss case ki chabi hai, aisa shayad nahin hai, record humhe aur bhi confused kar sakta hai.

Pritvi aapne chair par betha hua hai, Kaya uske samne bethi hai.table par woh file rakhi hui hai.

Kaya- Sir, jab Navin Singh Aluwalia ko CBI se yeh case diya gaaya, tab usne yeh new SIM liya tha, jiska jikar usne officially nahin kiya tha,Undercover hone ke time usne aapna khud ka number nahin liya tha, usse shayad dar tha ki woh trace ho jaaye, Ghar ke malik ne jo number humhe diya tha, wohi Navin Singh Aluwalia ka original contact no. hai, jo ki philhaal switch off hai,tab se switch off hai, jab se woh undercover kaam kar rahe the.

Kaya- yeh rahe, uss SIM par jo jo numbers se call kiya gaaya hai, uska details, saare incomings call, no outgoing, matlab Navin Singh ne kisiko call nahin kiya tha, saare calls usne receive kiya tha, Delhi ki different PCO ka numbers hai saare,koi appropriate design nahin hai, jisse hum call karnewalo ka exact location pata kar paaye, aur yeh bhi confusion ki baat hai,ki saare calls ek hi aadmi ne kiya hai, yaa different logo ne.

Kaya- lekin kuch din baad se constantly ek mobile number se call kiya gaaya hai.

Pritvi- interesting, very interesting. Navin Singh Aluwalia ek perfect undercover Officer the, but jo secrecy maintain karke usne yeh kaam kiya hai, ab humhe problem ho raha hai.Jis mobile number se call aaya hai uska details???

Kaya- prepaid number hai, philhaal switch off hai, trace nahin ho paa raha hai.aur ek interesting baat, jab se Navin Singh ki death hui hai, tab se numbers switch off hai.

Pritvi- hmmm( kuch der soch kar) Kaya tumne kaha ek hi mobile number ka record hai, tum check karke yeh batao jab se mobile ka call aana shuru hua hai tab se PCO se koi call aaya hai???

Kaya ( phir se check karke) – no Sir.

Pritvi- hmm, tum keh rahi thi naa ek hi aadmi call karta hai yaa nahin, mujhe lagta hai ek hi aadmi call karta hai, pehle woh PCO se call karta tha, phir mobile se karne laga, PCO se call bandh.mujhe kya lagta hai Kaya, pata hai,yeh Navin Sigh ka koi associate hai, uske saath kaam kar raha tha secretly, isse sab kuch shayad pata hai.

Kaya- Sir, agar sab kuch pata hai, to woh hamare paas aa kar sab kuch bolta kyun nahin??usse to case ka importance pata hai naa, hamare liye yeh case crack karna kitna zaruri hai, coz yeh sirf ek murder mystery nahin hai, bohut logo ka jaan ki sawal hai.

Pritvi- usse shayad aapni jaan ki fikar hai, jaise hum dhund rahe hai usse, woh log bhi dhund rahe hai jo inn sab se peeche hai, unn logo ka network bhi bohut strong hai.jaan se mar dalenge usse, isliye shayad chupke betha hai.

Kaya- phir to uss aadmi tak pauchne ka rasta lagbhag bandh hai??hamare liye to yahin dead end hai??

Pritvi (jo table par rakha ek paper weight ghuma raha tha)- nahin, dead end nahin ho sakta, humhe uss aadmi tak pauchna hoga, number to trace nahin ho sakta….( after sometime) Kaya tum abhi mobile company ke saath contact karo, pata karo, yeh prepaid number kaun si dukan ko diya gaaya tha, aur connection jab liya hai, aapna details bhi diya hoga naa, yeh SIM lenewala, record mangao, aur bolo abhi dhund kar fax kare, its emergency.

Kaya- yes Sir.

Kaya Fax ka intezar kar rahi hai, usne Pritvi ke taraf dekhti hai, Pritvi computer par kuch kar raha hai,Kaya ko aaj tak kisi bhi Officer ke saath kaam karke itna satisfaction nahin aaya tha, aur saath hi woh impressed hai aapni "Raj"ki kaam karne ki dhang se, yaa he is intelligent, very intelligent, Aditi to first day hi samajh gaayi thi, Kaya khud kaise tubelight ban ke reh gaayi??? Kaya uth kar aapne aur Pritvi dono ke liye coffee laati hai.

Kaya- ACP Sir, coffee.

Pritvi ( surprised, stunned, muh khol kar Kaya ke taraf dekh raha hai & also no response)………….

Kaya- ( uncomfortable, Pritvi aise dekh raha hai uske taraf) Sir, woh main coffee pi rahi thi, socha aap ke liye bhi le aayu, agar aapko nahin chayiye, to rakh ke aati hoon.

Pritvi (coming out from his shocked state)- nahin, chayiye na, chayiye, thanks for the coffee, betho naa saath main peete hai.

Kaya bina koi protest karke wohi beth jaati hai.Pritvi ki samne ki chair main.dono chupchap bethe hai.Pritvi ko laga baat karna usse hi shuru karne parega.

Pritvi- waise kaam ki yeh pressure ke beech coffee ki maza hi kuch aur hota hai, hai naa???

Kaya- hmmm.

Pritvi- (hmm sun kar Pritvi ka to ho gaaya, woh baat ko continue karna chahta hai, aur Kaya ne answer main hmm keh kar fullstop laga diya, phir bhi bina har mane) waise tum kaam ke beech relax karne ke liye kya karti ho??

Kaya- kuch nahin, main jaldi kaam khatam karke aakhir main relax karti hoon.

Pritvi ko aisa lag raha tha, jaise woh hi gadha hai, Pritvi- waise main naa constant kaam nahin kar sakta, chai, coffee peeta hoon,ek cigeratte bhi kabhi kabhi chalta hoon, but main completely smoker nahin hoon(pritvi ko khud nahin pata, usne yeh explanation kyun di?)kaam karte karte beech main mobile ki FM main gaana sunta hoon, aur Facebook to hai hi, nice timepass naa??

Kaya- (dhyan se sun rahi hai but answer) hmmm (coz usse to pata hi nahin aise casual baatein woh kisise kaise kare?)

Iss beech FAX aata hai, Kaya jaa kar FAX receive karti hai.phir daud kar Pritvi ke paas aati hai.

Kaya- Sir woh number kisi aurat ka hai.Yeh rahi record details.

Pritvi( totally surprised)- yeh address verify karo,aur yeh contact number bhi, First.

Kaya- yes Sir.

Kaya ( after sometime )- address, contact number dono false hai.

Pritvi- aisa hoga maine socha tha.khair tum ek kaam karo, yeh jo photo diya gaaya hai, yeh to asli hoga naa, matlab yeh aurat to exist karti hai naa, to humhe iska pata lagana parega, isse trace karna parega.tum ek kaam karo,iss photo ko enlarge karne ko bhej do,hum log lunch karke niklenge.

Kaya- right Sir.

Pritvi lunch karne ke liye canteen main ek table par bethta hai, kaya bhi wohi par aati hai, par woh Pritvi ke saath uss table par join naa karke kuch lady Officer ke saath beth jaati hai.Pritvi dekhta hai, usse laga " he expected too much".Pritvi khana khane lagta hai,kuch der baad usse realise hua ki canteen main sab log hai, agar kisi se naa baat karnewali, hamesha aapni attitude par chalnewali Kaya aaj achanak uske saath beth jaaye khana khane, to saare log kya sochenge??tarah tarah ki baatein karenge, noo, Pritvi ko accha lagta hai Kaya ke saath rehna, but Kaya ki izzat ki kimat par nahin,aise saath renhe ki kya zarurat jaha aapne partner ki respect ko le kar tarah tarah ki baatein uthe??Pritvi jab Kaya ke soch main magan tha tab usne notice hi nahin kiya, kisi ne aa kar uske saath join kiya hai.

Hello ( yeh awaz sun kar Pritvi almost chauk kar samne dekhta hai, samne ek aadmi aakar betha hai, bald head, round face with a shrewd smile)

Pritvi- hello, par maaf kijiye maine aapko pehchana nahin( Pritvi samajh raha tha yeh bhi ek Officer hi hai, warna canteen par)

The Man- aap pehchange kaise?? Hum pehli baar mil rahe hai, yaha par sabhi mujhko jante hai, aap naye hai, isliye nahin pehchante. Main ACP Bhargav hoon.

Pritvi- ohh hii, I am ACP Pritviraj Rathod, nice to meet u.(keh kar Pritvi aapna hath aage karta hai)

Bhargav ( Pritvi ke saath haath milate hue )- main guess kiya tha, aap wohi hoge, DCP Pathak ne aapke baare main kaafi baatein kiya hai, saare acchi baatein, aap itna important case handle kar sakte hai,mujhe khuch khaas zakin nahin hua, dekhte hai aapka capability, nazar rahega mera iss case ki progress par.

Pritvi ko yeh sab baatein sun kar bohut irritate lag raha tha, pehli jhalak main hi usse Bhargav pasand nahin aaya, ab aise baatein.

Pritvi- main chalta hoon, bohut kaam hai, afterall meri kaam ki aur bohut log nazar rakhe hue hai.

Bhargav ( with a smirk on his face )- zaroor, all the best.

Pritvi- thanks.( yeh keh kar Pritvi uth jaata hai, aur Kaya ke taraf ishara karti hai, jaldi aane ke liye, par usne dekha Kaya ki nazar Bhargav aur uss par thiki hui hai)

ohh, Finally Updated, Kaisa lage batana, waiting for ur comments

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Prithvi ko subah subah uthkar hi Kaya ko dekh ne ka dil karta hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊How cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Kaya has changed a lot due to Prithvi's words but she doesn't want her mom to suspect anything!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

So she maintainted her serious face in front of her mom but her kissing Kiran at the end was very cute and that surely made Kiran very happy!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Prithvi keeps looking at her and he understood that Kaya has considered what he had said!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

It is sweet that Prithvi is happy if Kaya is happy this way!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kaya does not mind Prithvi addressing her this way now!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I loved this change in Kaya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Waah Prithvi tries to show he was busy in front of Kaya shayad impression banane ke liye!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Men and their old formulas!!!!!🥱 🥱 🥱 🥱Yehi formula Rohan bhi Rishta.com mein use karta tha!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The SIM card is not leading them anywhere but Prithvi thinks only one man used to call Navin!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Kaya is really impressed by her Raj and loves working with him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Prithvi was indeed surprised to see Kaya bring coffee for him!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Bechara Prithvi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Ab Kaya uski baatein sunti toh hai dhyaan se but still gives her monosyllabic answers to them!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Just as expected the contact details of that number were fake but Prithvi is still trying to find something out of it by the photograph!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Kaya ne yeh accha kiya ke canteen mein Prithvi ke saath nahi baithi and Prithvi also understood the reason for it!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh ACP Bhargav mujhe kuch theek nahi lagta and Prithvi too was irritated by him!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😈 😈 😈 😈

The way Kaya was staring at Bhargav lagta hai dono ke beech koi panga zaroor hai!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

its getting interesting madhu!

Hi Madhu

The story is getting interesting with addition of Bhargava now.

awesome update

wow...maza aa gaya...

toh Takla Bharghav bhi yahan pe hai...lagta hai Kaaya ki uss se kafi achhi dosti (dushmani) hai...😆

plz cont soon.