RACE, THE CHASE BEGINS(RP FIC)Updated 21.08.12 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice part.

Raj n kaaya...abhi thoda kareeb toh aane lage hain...dost kahte kahte...'kuch khaash hai'...song gane lage hain...😆

badi baat hai ke...dono ko ab ek dushre ke kareeb rehne me prob nahi hota...😃

aur wo Idiot Bharghav...takla...ladkiyo aise kyoun ghoorta hai...uss ke ghar me maa-behn nahi hai kya...😆

dikha di ne Bharghav ne apni aukat...chori karrwa ke...

yeh baat sayad Raj...Kaya ke liye prob khadi karr sakta hai...!!! par fiqar not Raj hai na sab achhe se handel karr lega...😃

cont soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Madu
Update was gud.👏
Kaya and Prithvi r coming close to each other.But Kaya knows thats she is in love with Raj and she just can take her mind off him.The song Kuchh khaas is really gud.
They got an interesting lead in the case..😊
Wat is Maj.Bhargava upto??? I think he is involved in this case.😡
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Posted: 13 years ago

Madhu it's my Request that pls reply to the comments which v all give after each update, that will encouarge us. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha


Madhu it's my Request that pls reply to the comments which v all give after each update, that will encouarge us. 😊

yes dear it will helps us to know whether u are liking our comments or not
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Posted: 13 years ago
See now even Ria is agree with me so reply in detail dear :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part
Kaya aur prithvi karreb aa rahe hain, par kaya raj se pyaar karti hai.
the song was very beautiful
What is Maj Bhargav upto now?
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
gud n loved it 😃
Kaya jo abhi tak itna avoid kar rahi thi Raj ko vo ab khush hai whole day Raj k saath spend kar k aur us k mood me change se ab to confirm bhi kar diya us ne ki she has started loving him. 😍
The way they r trying their best to do everything perfectly proves that their team wil solve the case asap, aur case k saath apne personal equations bhi .😉
Kaya was right Bhargav can never be trusted n he proved her right by her last action n i'm sure ye kisi higher authority k hi ishare pe ho raha hai.😛
Kaya was really tough with that lady vo to bechari dar hi gayi.😆
try to update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Next Day Kaya sab informers ko Bunty ka sketch deti hai, aur kehti hai isse jaldi trace karne ko.Intezar ke sibha aur koi option nahin hai, coz ab Bunty ka milna hi iss case main aage jane ki pehli kadi hai.Prem Internet se saare info collect karke Pritvi ko submit karta hai.Alekh bhi Gehlot ke upar aapna report Pritvi ke paas submit karta hai.Pritvi do din se DCP Pathak aur kuch Officers ke saath meeting main busy hai.Kaya Alekh ko case ki progress ke bare main batati hai,Alekh Pritvi ke upar kaafi impressed ho jaata hai,saath hi Alekh ko lagta hai pehle din usne kaha tha Kaya ghamandi hai, aisa nahin hai,woh sabse different hai, par acchi hai.dosti to kisine ne nahin ki, but they are comfortable with each other. ab Kaya aur Alekh dono informers ke saath contact main hai.Bunty ke khabar ka sab ko beshabari se intezar hai.

Meeting khatam karke Pritvi aapne cabin main bethta hai,kaafi tried hai.need bhi aa rahi hai.usse lag raha tha abhi aapni quarter main wapas jaye, aur chain ki need so jaaye.tabhi Kaya jaldi jaldi uski cabin main aati hai.

Kaya- ACP Sir, Bunty trace ho gaya hai.

Pritvi ka jaise need hi ghayab ho jaata hai.

Kaya- Sir, hamari ek informer ne uska pata laga liya hai, khabar pakki hai, Bunty ek lodge main hai.

Pritvi- Lets go, Alekh aur Prem ko bhi aane ke liye bolo.

Kaya- right Sir.

Kaya drive kar rahi hai, Pritvi uske paas betha hai,peeche Alekh aur Prem betha hua hai.

Main road chod kar ek gali se jana padhta hai, lodge ke saath saath bohut logo ka ghar bhi hai yaha par,kuch dukan bhi hai,sab notice karta hai, lodge kaafi chota aur purana hai.gaadi sadak ke side main park karke charo andar aate hai.Informer se sirf itna details diya tha ki Bunty iss lodge par hai,par kaun si room iske baare main koi jaankari nahin de paaya tha woh aadmi.Lodge ke andar aate hai ek bade table main reception likha hua hai, aur ek aadmi ek register lekar betha hua hai.

Pritvi ( aapna Identity card dikha kar)- CBI

Reception par betha uski aadmi ki halat kharab hai, kisi bhi tarah se woh uth khada hota hai." koi galti ho gaayi hai saab"

Pritvi ( Bunty ka Sketch nikal kar table main rakhta hai )- iss sketch ko dekho, yeh aadmi yaha par ruka hai naa?? Dekho hamare paas pakka information hai, yeh yahi hai, kaha hai??

Reception par betha woh aadmi aapna pasina poch kar "jee Sir, yeh yehi hai, main bulata hoon"

Pritvi- bulane ki koi zarurat nahin hai, tum bolo yeh kaha hai hum khud isse mil lete hai.isse batane ki koi zarurat nahin hai isse milne CBI aayi hai.aapne room main hai naa yeh??

Receptionist- haa, kamre main hi hai.upar jaa kar left main last room,room no.10

Pritvi, Kaya, Alekh,Prem charo upar jaate hai, room no.10 ke paas jaa kar sab aapna aapna gun nikal leta hai.Pritvi darwaje ke side main laga hua calling bell bajata hai, teen baar baja kar bhi no response,ab Pritvi darwaje par knock karne jaata hai, par darwaja thoda sa khul jaata tha, jisse pata chalta hai, andar se darwaja lock nahin hai.charo ek dusre ke taraf dekhta hai, zaroor andar kuch garbad hai.Pritvi door khulta hai, aur dekhta hai,ek aadmi zameen par padha hua hai,uske sar par goli lagi hai,Sketch ke saath chehra mil jaata hai, no doubt yeh lash Bunty ka hi hai.

Pritvi- Prem neche jao, aur uss receptionist ko pakad kar yaha lao, saath hi yaha ki staff ko bhi.

Kaya car se box lene jaati hai,Pritvi poora ghar ghum kar dekhta hai.Kaya box laati hai car se,sab aapna aapna glaves pahenta hai.Kaya dead body ki tarah tarah angle se photo leti hai.phir ek chalk se body kaise giri hui hai, ek outline bana deti hai.phir Alekh Bunty ki pockets check karta hai.

Alekh- Pritvi, money bag iske pocket main hai,paise bhi sahi salamat hai.aur struggle ka koi nishan nahin hai.

Pritvi- goli bhi lag raha hai paas se chalaya gaaya hai,wound dekh kar lag raha hai kisi expert hath ka kaam hai.

Phir Pritvi dekhta hai Prem saare staff ko laya hai, aur reception par jo aadmi betha hua tha woh kaafi dara hua hai.

Pritvi- yeh kaise hua??? Yaha par ek murder hua hai kisi ko pata bhi nahin hai??

Reception par betha hua aadmi- saab, main hi yaha ka malik hoon, humhe kuch nahin pata, humne to goli chalne ki awaz bhi nahin suna.warna yaha par to halla mach jaata.

Pritvi- Bunty se milne kaun aaya tha aaj???

Malik- koi nahin aaya tha.koi bhi nahin aaya tha.

Pritvi- to tu hamare saath chal, kyunki khun bhi tune kiya hai.

Malik ( haath jod karke)- nahin saab, main har waqt neeche hi bethta hoon, par koi uske baare main nahin pucha,ab chahe register dekh lo,milne koi nahin aaya.

Pritvi- iska matlab tujhse bina puche koi aaya hai?

Malik- haa, aa sakta hai,yaha neeche ek resturant hai, woha dopahar ko log khana khane aate hai, agar un main se koi'

Pritvi- yaha ka CCTV camera ka footage dikhao humhe.

Malik- sir, CCTV camera nahin hai iss lodge main, chota sa lodge chalata hoon..

Pritvi- par lodge main kaun aata hai kaun jaata hai tumhe kuch nahin pata.

Malik- naa Sir, ek do baar iss Bunty se milne ek ladki aayi thi.aur koi nahin aaya usse milne.

Pritvi- ladki??? (phir Pritvi aapni mobile main se Sonali ka photo dikhata hai)yeh ladki aati thi milne?

Malik- nahin Sir, yeh nahin.

Pritvi- sketch bana sakte ho??

Malik- nahin, utna appropriate to yaad nahin, par zakin se yeh nahin thi.aur haa saab uss ladki ne aapna naam Leena batayi thi.

Pritvi- thik hai, tum log jao, baad main zarurat hogi, to bula lenge.

Pritvi- Prem body ko forensic main bhej do.

Alekh- Pritvi hamare liye muskil aur badh gaya, isko bohut kuch pata tha, ab kya hoga?? Kaise aage jayenge hum??

Pritvi- mera bhi to saara calculation garbaad ho gaya, par rukh to nahin sakte hum.ghar ki talasi lo, shayad kuch mil jaaye.

Ghar main to kuch khaas nahin tha, bag se kuch kapre mile, aur mobile mila, woh bhi switch off.

Alekh- Pritvi zahir si baat hai, yeh yaha par chupne aaya tha, par iske saman main to kuch khaas nahin hai.

Kaya- jin logo ne Bunty ka khun kiya hoga unn logo ne shayad le kar gaya ho.

Pritvi- ek kaam karte hai crime scene ko reconstruction karte hai, kaise hua hai yeh sab?

Pritvi, Kaya aur Alekh neeche aate hai.

Alekh- logo ka kaafi bhid hai yaha par, saath hi resturant hone ki wajah se logo ka aana jana laga rehta hai.khuni ko identify karna muskil hai.

Pritvi- humhe hamare informers ne yeh bataya ki Bunty yaha par hai,par humhe yeh nahin pata tha kaun si room main hai woh, isliye hum reception par gaye pata lagane, malik ko pata chal gaya Bunty se koi milne aaya hai.iska matlab hua khuni ko Bunty ka room no.pata tha, woh seedhe room par gaya.

Teeno room no.10 ke paas aate hai.

Pritvi- aur zaahir si baat hai usne door bell bajaya hoga.heyy, iska matlab khuni ka finger print hoga bell par, agar usne glaves naa pahenna ho.

Pritvi- Kaya ek kaam karo bell se finger print uthao.

Alekh- phir andar se Bunty ka darwaja khola hoga, aur usne andar aa kar goli maar di.

Pritvi- maksad uska ek hi tha, Bunty ko marna,prepare ho ke aaya tha, struggle ki mauka nahin diya usne.par kamre ki halat dekh kar lagta nahin, kuch bhi chori hua hai.kuch bhi dhund kar le jaane ka waqt kya khuni ke paas tha??

Alekh- ek baat notice ki tumne Bunty ne lodge ki register main aapna real name likha?

Pritvi- shayad usse zakin tha koi nahin paunch sakta uss tak, aur duniya main kitni Bunty hai naa?? Aur usne aapna mobile switch off kiya tha, taki koi trace naa kar sake.

Next Day, In Forenshic,

Pritvi, Kaya aur Alekh bahar office main betha hua hai, Labotory main Doctor kaam kar rahi hail,aur sab ke liye no entry.kuch der baad haath main file liye ek lady office main enter karti hai.tall,slim & attractive.Alekh muh khol kar dekh raha hai, usse lag raha tha Main Hoon Naa film ki tarah uske peeche bhi bohut saara violin baj raha hai.aur woh lady jeans aur kurti main nahin, red saree main Sushmita Sen ki tarah zulfein lehra rahi hai, background main music "tumhe jo maine dekha, tumhe jo maine socha, jo hosh o tha woh to gaaya"

Pritvi aapna haath aage karta hai "Hello Doctor Akriti Chatterjee, I am ACP Pritviraj Rathod"

Alekh- haiii, Bengali.kitna sweet hai.

Aakriti- hello Sir, nice to meet u.(Doctor Akriti Chatterjee played by Shikha Singh)

Pritvi- nice to meet u too doc, by the way yeh hai Ins Kaya Sehgal & Ins Alekh Sharma.

Akriti dono ke saath handshake karti hai, Alekh ki haath touch karte hi "badan ki yeh khusboo, chalane lagi jadoo, haii dil kho gaya". Pritvi Alekh ki taraf notice kar raha tha, Pritvi alekh ko aapne elbow se ek dhakka mara.phir thoda muskuraya.Alekh ne aisa expression lane ki kohsish ki" kya, hassa kyun?"

Pritvi ne ignore kiya.

Akriti- Sir, postmotem ho chuka hai.goli bohut hi paas se chalayi gayi hai,kisi expert haath ka kaam hai, kisi professional ka, koi struggle ka nishan nahin hai.goli sar par lagne se maut hui hai.

Pritvi- aur kuch??

Akriti- Sir, marne se kuch der pehle usne khana khaya tha, death time dopohar 2 baje ke aas paas.kapre, joothe main kuch bhi khaas nahin hai.

Pritvi- aur kuch pata nahin chala, isse to khuni tak pauchna impossible hai.

Akriti- excuse me Sir, isse zyada mujhe kuch pata nahin chala dead body se, aur khuni tak kaise pauchenge woh aapka tension hai.yeh raha post motem report.

Pritvi- thanks doc, hum chalte hai.

Pritvi alekh ke kaan main "chalo, khade kyun ho?bye bolna hai kya"

Pritvi ko kaafi gussa aa raha tha, sare ghamandi ladki uski kismat main hi likhi hai,har taraf tension, Kaya kya kam thi ki yeh Akriti bhi aa gaayi.

Aur Alekh ki dil main ek hi baat hai"waah! Kya ladki hai"

Pritvi, Kaya, Alekh, Prem Office main betha hua hai.chupchap.dekh kar lag raha hai sab kaafi tension main hai woh.coffee bilkul thanda ho chuka hai, par Pritvi ne abhitak coffee touch bhi nahin kiya hai.

Kaya- ACP Sir, yeh to hamare liye ek dum dead end ho gaya, ab kya kare??

Pritvi- wohi soch raha hoon, aage kya kare??

Kaya- Bunty ke body main koi struggle ka nishan nahin hai, to kya khuni ko Bunty janta tha?

Pritvi- jaruri nahin hai, door par bahar kaun aaya hai dekhne ke liye koi hole nahin hai, door kholte hi achanak koi agar ghus aaye, to struggle kaise kare?

After sometimes,

Pritvi- Kaya tumne door bell ke upar se jo finger prints li thi naa, usse hamare records se match karo,Dr.Akiti ne kaha naa kaam kisi professional ka hai, to dekho uska record hai yaa nahin?

Kaya- right Sir.

Alekh- kya lagta hai Pritvi record milega??

Pritvi- shayad mil jaaye, kya pata??

Thori der baad Kaya aakar kehti hai," finger print match ho gaya, Akram, professional shooter, iska nishana kabhi nahin chukta."

Pritvi- great, iska pata lagana parega, Kaya, iska poora kundali chayiye mujhe.aur ek baat, uss Lodge ki malik ne kya kaha tha, Leena naam ki ek ladki milne aati thi Bunty se,to Bunty usse janta tha.

Alekh- bilkul janta hoga.

Pritvi- to ek kaam karo Bunty ka jo phone mila hai, uska call details check karo.usme Leena ka number zaroor hoga.

Kaya- par ACP Sir, humne to mobile check kiya tha,sab numbers hai, koi naam nahin hai.

Pritvi- so what?? Ek ek number pe call karo, pata karo kaun sa number Leena ka hai,par haa kisiko pata nahin chalna chayiye call CBI kar rahe hai, Phir Leena ka number trace karo, aur location pata karo.

Alekh- yes boss.

Par haa, sab man chuke the Pritvi ko, har manne walo main se Pritvi nahin hai, ek rasta bandh hua to kya hai, dusra rasta hai naa.no doubt Pritvi kaise itni kam umar main ACP bana hai?? kyun DCP Pathak uss par poora trust karte hai?agar detection sikhna ho to koi ACP Pritviraj Rathod se sikhe.

Kaya- ACP Sir, humhe aapse ek baat karni hai?

Pritvi ( now in good mood )- ek kyun Kaya, 100 baat karo, main sununga.

Kaya gussa nahin hui, thoda muskura kar, " no Sir, philhaal ek hi karni hai."

Kaya- ACP Sir, humne Bunty ki baare main bohut secretly pata lagaya, Bunty ka khun bhi kal hua usse pehle nahin.Bunty aise chupa hua tha kisiko uske baare main pata chalna impossible tha. Phir uska murder, mujhe to kuch garbaad lag rahi hai Sir.

Pritvi- Kaya garbaad to hai, jab hum uss tak paunchne wale the, tabhi humse pehle paunch kar Bunty ka khun kar dena, yeh baat to mujhe bhi khatak raha hai.

Edited by sania_58 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyy, kaise ho sab???
Finally updated, kaisa lag raha hai story batana zaroor.
waise Mahek aur Ria, tum dono ne kaha comments ka reply do,well, main naa kaafi busy rehti hoon, tutions study etc, update hi bohut muskil se karti hoon, aur comments ka reply dena, thoda muskil hai, but trust me, main sab ke comments padhti hoon, & sab ko big thank u.iske bina to main likh hi nahin paati.plz try to understand.par story ke baare main kuch confusion hui to zaroor batana, main reply zaroor dungi.
Thanks to all for commenting & for pressing like buttons.
waiting for ur comments & also criticisms.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Prithvi is very smart and is handling the case really well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Not only Kaya but Aalekh is also impressed with the way Prithvi is working now!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kaya was able to trace Bunty's whereabouts through their informers and Prithvi, Kaya, Aalekh and Prem rushed there!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

But Bunty was dead by the time they reached there!!!!!🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢

Aalekh toh Dr.Akriti ko dekh ke pura gaya!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Always there is one love story between one officer and the forensic expert!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue 😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and perfect for Aalekh!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

He is imagining her in a red saree with violins playing behind her like in the movie Main Hoon Naa!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Prithvi noticed Aalekh's state and got him out of his dreamland and even he is finding it funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Poor Prithvi seems to be stuck with all girls who have an attitude!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

How will he handle Kaya and Akriti at the same time??Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

Everyone is disappointed to see that they are once again facing a dead end in their investigation!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

But Prithvi is not one to give up so easily and gets about tracing the killer and Leena!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Kaya has a good point ke jaise hi woh log Bunty tak pahuchne waale thhe tabhi uska khoon ho gaya!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

I think Bhargav is behind Bunty's murder!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

I hope Kaya and Prithvi figure out soon that their office is also not safe!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔


Edited by Shaina_b - 13 years ago

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