Mayur FF - Falling apart is just not easy Page 89

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#521

That ws a beautiful ending...
Now their family is complete with varun being there...
And mayur ws so cute at the end...
Loved this story...
Will miss it...
Nd keep writing on them..:)

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Irum.

@Irum.

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#522

Very beautiful ending.It couldn't be more beautiful than this.Their family is complete.

Thnx for pm.

Waiting for ur new FF.

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#523

beautiful ending for beautiful story payal
you expressed every emotion of mayur beautifully throughout the story
miss this ff
thanks for the pm

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#524

aww it ended so soon..

well it was amazing ff...

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Mini4

@Mini4

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#525

it has been a beautiful n mature story vid a perfect happy ending!!👍🏼

mayank,nupur n varun together made a perfect picture of a PERFECT FAMILY!!😊 Loved d mother-son,father-son bonding!!

MAYUR moments together is alwaz a pleasure to read!!😳

thanx fr d pm🤗

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Passion_17

@Passion_17

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#526

Oh it ended It was a beautiful story...hw I wish we cud read more of such lovey-dovey moments between them...i simply loved d end part whr both wer teasing each othr...:)
I like both of ur ffs bt dis 1 slightly more...:)n yes u hv really grown up as a writer touching upon a mature subject...keep writing on MN 😃 waiting 4 ur nxt story soon 😛