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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderfulll
loved it 👏
update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update
loved it so much
keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww... such an sweet update!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update Payal..🤗

loved it..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww...such a lovely part Pallu... 🤗
Finally they DID understand each other completely!!!...Finally they were again back as THE MAYANK-NUPUR
I liked this line---It wouldn't be that they wouldn't be arguing anymore, wouldn't be having insecurities, or they wouldn't be having different approaches towards life. They surely would and surely would they be 'The Mayank and Nupur' that they always were.😳
How perfectly you showed that ups and downs are a part of the life..they will happen..but what requires is the feeling of mutual understanding..and feeling of togetehrness admist the turbulence
Every line of this update held a meaning in itself that to soo beautifully...How perfectly you described the process of chsnging thoughts of Mayank and Nupur about each other...and the best part is you didn't sound biased towards anyone throughout the story👏
and the hand holding part was sooo cute...😳
Can;t wait for the next part...BrilliaNT pALLU👏
Edited by aysha_mayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Terrific ! The essence persists in every line u wrote. Beautiful <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aesome update Payal SIS...
loved it to d coreee
did i tell u dat ke ap kitni acchi likhti hoon!!!
d way u described every feelings of dem as a 3rd person's prospect it was Beautiful...
hats off to u...⭐️⭐️⭐️
i jst loved dway u alwaysss shows wht going on in Barun's mind too...dat exactly shows wht an wonderful writer u are...👏😍👏
loved it to BITS...
dey were sooo cute n Adorable...
loved d ending...
it was actually picture perfect...😍
loved it...
love u SIS...🤗🤗🤗

ps: Thanks for updating as i was actually missing ur updates last ni8 n was wondering wen will u update...so Thanks again...😳
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful part
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful updt payal
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely part payal... 😃 These 3 r so adorable 😳 want 2 read more such cute moments between them b4 u end dis ff..continue soon...thanx 4 d pm 😃

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