Mayur FF - Falling apart is just not easy Page 89

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TheLeo_M

@TheLeo_M

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Posted: 13 years ago

#301

beautiful part...amazing..

the morning part was so good ...

i liked how mayank predict her expression on sun rays...

update soon next part...

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bhargavi

@gopi06

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Posted: 13 years ago

#302

beautiful updt payal
loving the past & present moments
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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--rosh--

@--rosh--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#303

hey thanx for the pm & nice update.

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Naina

@sumonetolub

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Posted: 13 years ago

#304

awww such a sweet moment in the present AND past...well i dont understand mayanks resolve but i hope he fails miserably in fighting against his deepest wish to make things work out...varun was too cute!...hope we see more such happy moments

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shivi02

@shivi02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#305

awww such beautiful moments 😍

varun's entry in the past & his presence today marks a bliss in mayur's life whatever the misunderstandings

loved it pallu😃

u write it detailed and long & manage to keep a attention-span problem reader like me in full attention with ur update😛

update soon🤗

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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#306

wow!!

that was beutiful...the morning scene was soo beautifully penned down...

wow...

i could just feel it...

lovely...

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

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Posted: 13 years ago

#307

perfct contrast b/w past n d prsnt :) do cont soon!

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kirti123

@kirti123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#308

loved both past and present

beautifully written 😊

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Passion_17

@Passion_17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#309

Beautiful update...mayank-varun convo was 2 cute...esp d way dey irritated nupur 😳
N d past till nw has always been beautiful...I guess 4m d next update things vl become clearer...
Pls update soon..thanx 4 d pm 😊

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#310

Beautiful update Payal😊
luved varun n mayank part and their convo was really sweet...when varun put his whole weight on his father, that part made me really really happy.kids know that their parents are there to hold them from falling...luved this feeling:)
ahh...past was so cute...loved it