Kaliren (Maaneet ff) updated on pg69/ 3may

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euphoric

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: kamiya
nice part

Thanks Kamiya😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: mons_mb
thanks thanks thanks for the update 🤗🤗

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U r welcome dear... i hope it was worth😳

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euphoric

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Posted: 13 years ago

#453

Originally posted by: mons_mb
thanks thanks thanks for the update 🤗🤗

Always welcome dear... i hope it was worth though😊🤗🤗

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01leothelion

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Posted: 13 years ago

#454

finally back after 4 months... were waiting for you darling/..

well good part... so fainally there is a start of conversation between mann and geet...

will wait impatiently for next part...

please update Ripped apart also...

how is ur office going on now... hope the things are settled now...

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pop77

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Posted: 13 years ago

#455

Finally we get update..Maan wants to talk to her..

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vivacious_gurl

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Posted: 13 years ago

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char mahinon baad update mila and that too maaneet less... soni y do u think i will wanna read bout darji??? especially as a reader why would someone read sooo much background story which may be relevant but the timing of its posting isnt great... giving u this feedback post my workshop... hope it will help u to write future updates... also i found pinky's character very weird... isnt meera pinky's friend??? so if meera got married pinky is atleast 18 ... but the way u hv described pinky she looks more like a school kid ..may be 10-12 year old... when u write stories after months, u urself will miss the link... please check ur previous updates and u will realise how ur treatment of pinky has varied. ...sorry that am not writing sweet sweet things but am giving genuine feedback of what i felt...

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craziekudi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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kamini... kahan thi tu itne din... ab darshan hui hai teri!!!😆 RA ka kuch hoga kya?????😳 by the way thank uuu😳

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euphoric

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Posted: 13 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: 01leothelion
finally back after 4 months... were waiting for you darling/..

well good part... so fainally there is a start of conversation between mann and geet...

will wait impatiently for next part...

please update Ripped apart also...

how is ur office going on now... hope the things are settled now...

Thanks a bunch dear😃

I know its been a longg time... I m gonna start working on RA soon...

Office is good... things r hectic but its fine😊

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euphoric

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Posted: 13 years ago

#459

Originally posted by: pop77
Finally we get update..Maan wants to talk to her..

payal🤗

Howz ya??

Dont tell me u gave up on ME!😡

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euphoric

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl
char mahinon baad update mila and that too maaneet less... soni y do u think i will wanna read bout darji??? especially as a reader why would someone read sooo much background story which may be relevant but the timing of its posting isnt great... giving u this feedback post my workshop... hope it will help u to write future updates... also i found pinky's character very weird... isnt meera pinky's friend??? so if meera got married pinky is atleast 18 ... but the way u hv described pinky she looks more like a school kid ..may be 10-12 year old... when u write stories after months, u urself will miss the link... please check ur previous updates and u will realise how ur treatment of pinky has varied. ...sorry that am not writing sweet sweet things but am giving genuine feedback of what i felt...

Heya G🤗

thanks for the honest feedback😳 i understand ur concern and appreciate ur POV😛

Yup i agree for an undate coming after 4 mnths with zero maaneet, its kinda not something that everyone expected or wanted. I was prepared for it. Ashu infact had to kick me to get me to add tht one Maaneet convo So here is my justification😳

The update was so long due but then again, in last updet i had established Maan's family dynamics and this time it was Geet's turn. It was not regarding Daarji but his behaviour towards Geet and how has it influenced her. In the upcoming updates it would be of help to undertsand Geet's concerns and reactions to situations and how she's going to act upon things. So it was settling it once and for all so that i dont have to look back at it in the story.

I did try to get Maaneet here. But the thing was if i would have got tht then it would have be misfit somewhere or the other.

As far as Pinky is concerned. Pinky is definitely not a kid. There are subtle angles to her personality. She notices when Geet rubs her temple. She knows when Geet is tired. She is aware that Daarji had spoiled Geet's day. So though she acts like a kid that is to keep the atmosphere around the house and around Geet light. She understands all. She's straight-forward and speaks her mind however foolish her thoughts would be. there is a certain degree of immaturity to her character. She's isnt exposed much to the outside world.

I totally agree it did take time for me to shell out an updet. I was so out of touch and it felt alien. I had to reread a few things. So my folly

Thanks a bunch for writing your mind, G... I really appreciate it😃

Love ya❤️