Kaliren (Maaneet ff) updated on pg69/ 3may

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Angelic_mishty

@Angelic_mishty

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

wondefull strt dear...

wanting to know more abt geet...

thnc for d pm

love

MISHTY

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Romenas

@Oblivion007

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

Loved it!!omg!the description of the whole marriage and the surrounding was jst too good!jst marvellous!the first encounter was quiet cheesy bt yet again with ur unique writing style it felt beautiful!
Fervantly waiting for the next part!

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

great update

looking forward to this FF

con't soon!

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shaksdeewani

@shaksdeewani

Explorer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

It was jst awsum... mindblowing

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reni

@leverne

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

I pressed the like button twice..its all meds reacting..loved update..geet is sweetheart..loved their misunderstanding..maan seems already smiten by her..too good..

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Mishtieeeee <3

@Koolsmile

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#146

Catering manager was too gud 😆

plzzz pm me also 😊

it was Gud start on the whole😊

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Saams

@Saams

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Posted: 14 years ago

#147

So beautiful.you never miss out any minute details unsaid.Thats one of the beauty of ur writings.

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#148

awesome!

maneet's first meeting was a disaster!

something must have happened with geet in the past that's why she was behaving like this!

continue soon!

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#149

awww meri pyaari thakkuraaain🤗

moi so happy that you have updated Kalirein

I have been waiting for it...😆

BTW did I tell you i just love the title of this FF...😳

now coming to the point ...matlab your update...😆

let me tell you dear you are outdoing yourself...👏

your narration is mind blasting...👍🏼

loved the bonding of Meera ,Geet n pinky...n Meera n Pinky's bickering was out of the world...😳

haiii I just loved the first meeting of my MUnda n kudi😍...geet thought he is the manager of the caterer...their convo was out of the world...My eyes were glued to the monitor and I was scrolling & scrolling...I could visualise the whole scene😳you know I go to la la land whenever I read your stories..😳

Munda seems to be mesmerized by her...ye toh kaam se gaya...😆

BTW why doesn't Geet believe in dreams...did something happen to her in the past...batao batao...😆

looking forward to the next part...

Edited by namita25 - 14 years ago