SURROGATE RELATIONS Thread 3, part 27 updated 16/9 - Page 26

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Posted: 13 years ago

oooh!...maan is going to "plot calmly"😉...i like the sound of that...i loved reading maan's inner thoughts...he admitted he was jealous and for what reasons...👏...love rudr for catching on to maan's feelings for geet and wanting geet to realize that maan is irritated because of his closeness with her...you paint a wonderful picture with writing bindu⭐️...can't wait to read the next part😍

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Posted: 13 years ago
me waiting
plz plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
😭😭STILL waiting please update
uodate de do na
ab or intzar nahi hota
nahi to ham sab PM
wale rone lage gai
Edited by simm28 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: simm28

😭😭STILL waiting please update

uodate de do na
ab or intzar nahi hota
nahi to ham sab PM
wale rone lage gai



u knw what i think i shud never announce the day of the update beforehand...coz then it never happens...had planned to give it today morn...but still on the writing process😡...we had 2 days holidays at b'glore...so houseful nd no writing time😊...again afternoon is off coz open day for Aiden...i'll try my best to give the next part by 2 morrow morn...the least i'll do is give a short update? ok, as much as is ready...
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Posted: 13 years ago
yes please, eagerly waiting and refreshing page...do share a shorter one today and then as much as you want tomorrow 😆
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PART 21


22. A Goodbye

He looked at the time and found that it was after 8. He hadn't expected to remain this late, but updating the projects for the next week while he was away took time. He had to catch an early morning flight. So if he left now, may be he could grab a couple of hours sleep. He stood up and stretched himself before grabbing the laptop to leave. He wondered what Geet was doing? She had stayed back to help.



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The sight of her sleeping filled him with tenderness. Poor girl, she had fallen asleep waiting for him to complete his work and he hadn't noticed because the blinds were down. Sleeping away free time seemed to be a hobby with Geet these days, he thought indulgently, may be it was because of the baby that she got tired easily. Placing the laptop on the table, he moved towards her. She looked so adorable. The thick lashes fanned against her cheekbones, her head tilted a bit, and a soft smile playing on her lips. One of her legs was tucked under her and her chest rose and fell with the deep breath of sleep. A lock of hair fell across her forehead inviting his touch. He leaned towards her to tuck it behind her ear and she moved her head slightly as if his touch tickled. He ran his fingers softly down her cheek in a caress. Her cheeks were so smooth that his fingers glided down. Would her lips be as soft? Giving in to impulse he cupped her cheek with his palm and ran his thumb across her lips, which parted at his touch. In a grip of sensuous pull, he leaned closer wishing to replace his thumb with his lips. She whimpered in her sleep, jerking him back to awareness. What was he about to do? Kiss her without her awareness, without her permission? Was he behaving any better than those who attacked her? How would she react to him kissing her when she woke up? She trusted him and however much he desired her it would be wrong to kiss her without her willingness. Feeling bad he straightened to rake his hand over his hair. Looking down at the sleeping Geet, he tapped the pen-holder on the table to wake her. Seeing that it had no impact even after banging the holder louder, he touched her shoulder and called, "Geet."

Seeing that too didn't wake her, he shook her by the shoulder, calling her name louder. She jerked awake with an "Yes sir" and lost balance as stood up quickly. He caught her before her legs gave way, pulling her closer to him. She had her right hand on his chest and her left hand held his arm. The eyes that had closed for an instant opened to hold his captive. Something enticing and beautiful flickered in their depths.

"Easy'" he soothed, "okay now, Geet?"

She nodded and he released his hold on her arms gently to turn away.

" Oohhh!" she moaned, almost falling against him as she tried to move.

"What happened?" he hooked his hand around her waist.

"My leg has gone to sleep." She tried to put weight on it only to have it buckle again. "I can't feel my left leg!"

Maan supported her to the chair and knelt on one knee in front of her. He placed her feet on his raised knee. She protested, trying to pull it back. "Chup!" he commanded and held on. He massaged it gently to bring back the blood circulation. Within minutes her foot was back to normal and she giggled feeling ticklish.

"Alright?" he asked looking at her. "Try standing, then" he told as she nodded, standing up himself to catch if she fell.

They talked mostly about work on the way back home, which dwindled to silence once he finished with the instructions. As they approached KM Geet dared to ask as he seemed less of the 'dusht danav' and more of the caring Maan that day,

"Maan you would be gone about a week, na?"

A hint of sadness in her voice made him turn towards her. As expected her eyes were downcast. He lifted her face towards him with gentle fingers and waited for the glimpse of that melted chocolate. When she looked at him, he asked,

"Will you miss me Geet, when I'm gone?"

With a slight shake she freed her face and looked down again, biting her lower lip. Leaning a bit closer he trailer his fingers down her cheek.

"I will, you know." That brought her eyes back to his, a surprise in their depths. He smiled and added, "So it will please me if you would miss me too! There is something I need to talk with you." He saw the question in her eyes and sighed, "but that will have to wait until I come back."

They had reached KM and didn't have further time alone. But before retiring for the night he knocked on her door. When she opened the door he told,

"Just wanted to say good bye"

"Bye, Maan"

"And goodnight"

"Good night, Maan"

He touched his fingers to his lips and then touched her cheek. "Dream of me!" He walked away with an amused smile at her dazed expression.


short update...but for those who cudn't wait...hope it leaves u happy...okay going off to Aiden's School for open day...will send out Pms later...hope the maanaat moments make u enthusiastic to like nd comment😉 !!!


PART 23

Edited by bangalores - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg omg i am first one to reply😆😆😆😆. never thought it will be me

awesome update as usual. short but sooo nice. hayeee maan wanted to kiss geet😉😉😉 arey u have to wait. first confess ur love to her lol then dream of kiss😆😆😉😉. love the way he made himself not to kiss and think what he was doing. they drive back is aweee. hayee the sadness in geet's voice took my heart away with maan.

and maan saying he will feel good if she will miss him and then saying by to her omg bindu sooo nicely written yaar. it sooo full of emotion means touch his lips and then her cheek. a different way to say him feelings and kissing.

ufff he is going for week😭😭😭😭😭. pls make it fast bindu.




Edited by jasraj123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oooh wonderful...sooo romantic...your updates are so dreamy always 😃

Loved the care Maan shows towards Geet...the leg going off to sleep sequence was too good..Maan seems to understand her so well ...

the scene is the car was another marvel...Maan really did confess a bit of his feelings and wasnt Geet surprised...😊I am surprised that MSK can be so romantic - the goodnight kiss was too full of love...

Loved it loads !! Just cant stop gushing about it 😃Thanks for tending to our impatience - i know we bother you too much at times..

Do continue soon...
Edited by mystique_girl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update full with romance hope that after the week maan could voice his feelings to her
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
fabulous...
thanks for taking out time to update..
plz continue soon

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